Date: Oct 08, 2011 12:56 pm Title: ,,Come together"
YES!!!
He told her!!! I was so happy...He did the first step finally...It was a romantic moment...
I want to read the next chapter...To see how they will deal with this kiss and this new start in their relationship...
The chapter after the first kiss is always very important lol..
Author's Response:
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
He told herrrr!
Um...tomorrow I will update....
We'll see how they will deal with this ,,situation"...
A NEW BEGINING!
And yes...you're ABSOLUTELY right...the chapter after the kiss is VERY IMPORTANT.
I will try my best!
THANK YOU A BILLION TIMES!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 08, 2011 07:13 am Title: Come closer...closer...closerrrrr......
I wanted to kill you lol...But i didn't cause I love to keep the suspens in my own stories lol...
You want me to be honest with you lol?...I really find that your writing gets better and better along the chapters...So please keep going.
And about what you said to me in your answer to my previous review about writing is so true...It's the same for me...When I'm writing, I'm in my own world where only Michael counts...
I write straight from my heart too that's why another fan call me an emotionnal writer lol...You know , sometimes, in "True love never dies", it was like I was talking to Michael through Leanne...During the bad chapters of his life, I let all the things I would like to have say to him if I was with him...
So stay in your world and write...Just like me...It's the better escapism for us the writers and for our readers.
Author's Response:
Awwwwww.....
No COMMENT.
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
And in my story,I'm talking with Michael through Ariel too.........I mean...I'm puting me in her place to feel the ,,thing" more precisely....you know......
I'm HAPPY....no...MORE THAN HAPPY that you feel the SAME....
Thank you SO MUCH for supporting me.....You're a true friend.....
MUCH L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2011 09:52 pm Title: The ,,pursuer"
The photos are so beautiful. I can feel a warmth in my heart when i read it it is absoutely beautiful. I love reading it. M.u.c.h l.o.v.e by the way im keepitinthecloset i couldnt get in my account love you.
Author's Response:
Awwww.....
I'm SO GLAD you LOVE it....
I'm speechless....really....
You are ,,keepitinthecloset" ? Oh...I didn't know....I'M HAPPY you've told me that!
I personally LOVE the photos too.....because,as I had said with Ariel....I LOOOOOOOOO...OOOOVE THE SEA!
It's my favourite!
MUCH MUCH MUCH L-O-V-E TO YOU!
BLESS YOU ALL!
Date: Oct 07, 2011 01:36 pm Title: The ,,pursuer"
I like this one!! I like how you described Michael's vision at the end...
This way of watching her...His wish to be her lover...We really could feel his feelings for her.
But is he scared of love?...That's why he said it could be a long way for getting her?...And Frank, did he notice something for always interrupt them?
Sweety, I updated "True Love never dies" today if you want!
Author's Response:
Really?
WoW.
I...I...I don't know what to reply...
About the last part...with Michael....well...let me tell you all this : With this AMAZNG site (Bless the owners) I discovered my NEW passion : WRITING.
So...when I write....I'm into my world....I write STRAIGHT from my heart...I don't ,,think"....just FEEL.
And about your questions....um...No...No...he isn't REALLY scared of love...it's just that you knw...when you're famous you have to be careful to the people around you...but he trusts Ariel...he can feel that.
It could be a long way to get her = What I meant is : You can't just jump into a relationship....just like that....You have to know that person very well.....AND he doesn't know HER feelings for HIM...
I'm on my way to your BEAUTIFULL/AMAZING/LOVELY story! Of course I want to READ it!
MUCH MUCH MUCH L-O-V-E!
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN!
Date: Oct 06, 2011 08:45 am Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
*New Reader* I love this story.
Michael and Ariel are perfect for each other.
Frank needs to stop trying to control
Michael.
Michael and Ariel love each other so much
And both hate trying to hide their secret.
Ariel has Michael Jackson fever, It was funny when she was thinking "wet dream".
Author's Response:
Such beautiful thing you have said....
Really...THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so HAPPY that you LOVE it!
Yep...they love each other more than MUCH ...but they're affraid to reveal the feelings...maybe because they're VERY shy...or because of BUSINESS-,,STRICT PROFESSIONAL"
...I guess we will see!
Love that part ,,Ariel has Michael Jackson fever" -very sweet and FUNNY!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 06, 2011 06:37 am Title: What will I do if I just can't stop LOVING YOU......?!
What do you have to do?...Go out of your room and go to kiss him lol...
You really disappointed me when he just kissed his cheek...
I'm happy you updated...I also do mines if you want!!...Sorry if I don't rate your story...It's just I have a trouble with that...When I want to put 4 or 5 stars, it only put 2 or 3...And I don't want to decrease your ratings, girl.
Next one? lol
Author's Response:
Awwwwww....I'm so sorry if I dissapointed you with the kiss....I just don't want to rush into anything...but it will happen sooner (or later,but not too late)
Oh...there is NO problem with the rating...I won't get upset at all!...do as you please....! :))
What can I say more?
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 05, 2011 08:12 pm Title: ,,The pleasure was all mine..."
LOL at her for thinking 'Wet Dreams'. FUNNY!!<3
Author's Response:
Yes :)).....
That remark just came into my mind....
And I was doubting whehter or not I shoul write it....
It was so embarassing ...especially for ME!
God....
:))
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
LOVE YOU SO MUCH!
Author's Response:
Yes :)).....
That remark just came into my mind....
And I was doubting whehter or not I should write it....
It was so embarassing ...especially for ME!
God....
:))
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
LOVE YOU SO MUCH!
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2011 08:08 pm Title: Just a note....
IM GLAD YOU DIDNT DELETE IT!! HAHA :) ITS AMAZING!! IM CONTINUEING TO READ AFTER I WRITE THIS !
Author's Response:
Awwww....
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
I am SO GLAD AND HAPPY that you like it!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2011 05:23 pm Title: ,,Things will get better if you just hold my hand / Nothing can come between us if you just HOLD MY HAND"
CONTINUE!!!!! NOW!!!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!
Sure!
But maybe this evening....
L-O-O-V-E YOU!
Date: Oct 02, 2011 01:21 pm Title: ,,Things will get better if you just hold my hand / Nothing can come between us if you just HOLD MY HAND"
Oh it's so cute...I'm happy she went to the date...
Michael is stunning for his date...I loved when he said that the view wasn't as beautiful as her and was too shy to repeat it louder...It was so cute.
Please update, I love this story more and more!
Author's Response:
Awwwwww.....
I'm SO GLAD/HAPPY/EXCITED that you LOVED it!!!!!!!!
Yeah...I smiled shyly at that part too...I didn't know if I should just write that or not...
But I've made it :))
THANK YOU!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 02, 2011 10:39 am Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
I want to see a pic of her !!!! pls.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.....but as I had said.....there is no picture of her....
I don't want to be ....because I want you to let your imagination free....just imagine someone else or even BETTER,put YOU in her place...I think it will be more fascinating.....
At least that's my opinion.
L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2011 10:25 am Title: I DON'T KNOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story :) <3
Author's Response:
Awwww......What can I say to this?
THANK YOUUUUUUUU!
LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2011 10:06 am Title: ,,Hi...I'm your new neighbour..."
omg!!!!!! I love his soo much <3
Author's Response:
REALLY?No kidding?
W.
O.
W.
Seriously?
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
LOOOOVE YOU SO MUCH,sweetheart!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2011 09:59 am Title: Ready...on my own....
I love it soo far gonna read more
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I'm so HAPPY that you LOVE it!
Much,MUCH,MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Oct 02, 2011 01:43 am Title: It's the begin of the new begining!
She has to say yes or I won't understand her lol...Ok she will maybe think about the professionnal thing but who cares?....Michael asked her so she has to go!!
Please update girl!!
Author's Response:
First of all....THANK YOU for the support
Secondly....
well....
I don't know....we'll see about her decision.....
but the PROFESSIONAL THING is in the middle1
WHAT WILL SHE DO?