




Date: Oct 03, 2011 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 28
i almost got highly upset at the beginning but i ended up happy lol loven it





Date: Oct 03, 2011 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 28
YES!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!
Date: Oct 01, 2011 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1
You know as a author of this story i am really excited to whats going to happen next , please update! lol!





Date: Sep 30, 2011 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 27
oh shitt damn that was mad sexy





Date: Sep 30, 2011 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDATTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
Date: Sep 30, 2011 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 27
I think i'll let you carry it on!





Date: Sep 30, 2011 11:17 am Title: Chapter 26
oooo....
WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?????
WHAT?
WHAT?
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?????????
LOVELY CHAPTERS/STORY/AUTHORS!





Date: Sep 29, 2011 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 25
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





Date: Sep 29, 2011 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 25
Omgg , So Good ! Don't Stop !
Continuee ASAP !
Date: Sep 29, 2011 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 25
NEXT PART! ASAPP!!! pleaseee!!! :D





Date: Sep 29, 2011 11:47 am Title: Chapter 24
OOOOOO....
,,a wet Michael walked out of the bathroom and smilied at me I nearly fainted...."
DANGEROUS....
what's going to happen next????????????????????
simply BEAUTIFUL!
Date: Sep 29, 2011 11:04 am Title: Chapter 24
This story has potential. I really like it, but it needs a little more organization and time. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I'm just being real and giving you "straight up" positive critiqing. I honestly do like this story.
Author's Response:
yeah i understand , thanks anway!
Date: Sep 28, 2011 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 23
I love it!





Date: Sep 28, 2011 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oooh Lala ! i See When This Is Goinngg ,, (; /
continue ASAP ! iLOVEiT <3