Reviewer: MJsAngel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2011 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, so you've probably heard this hundred of times but, I absolutely love your story! Girl, you've got me hooked. I rarely ever give reviews, but this story is amazing and I think you deserve it! ;)

First I wanted to thank you for your time. You've mentioned that you're busy with school work and everything, and I admire you finding the time to do all of that and writing the chapters. So, again thank you! <3

*Sigh* I have so much to say. I found this story a couple of weeks ago and I fell in love. I wanted to post a review earlier but the website got hacked. Like you, I LOVE Michael as a bad ass. It's so sexy. You're doing an amazing job with the characters! Michael IS a little bit unpredictable, but that's one of the MANY things I love about this story.

Tbh, I would love it if there was better communication between the two... without Michael being drunk. I really do hope, they could work on a friendship. I truly love this story, and I respect anything you write, but I want to make a request. Please don't jump into a relationship. Most stories I've read on this site are like that. Michael and the girl meet, they start talking, then BAM. They're in love. It's crazy. I know she has feelings for him and he has feelings for her, which I think is adorable... but don't move too fast, please?

Ah, the house arrest. I'm not big on violence but I think Cassandra deserved it. Everytime her character came up, I was like please kick her ass Hallie! I was so happy when she did. BITCH GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT. LOL.

Ugh, I can't wait for the next chapters. House arrest with Michael for a week!? And Cassandra ain't there to ruin anything! Eek. That's gonna be good!

I don't know if this is your first story or not, but you're doing a fantasic job! They're just so cute together, I love it! I know it seems like, impossible for Hallie and Michael to have a relationship because they fight constantly but... please give them a chance at love!<3 Well, that's it for my review. ;)  

I'll be waiting for an update. Keep up the great work! :)

~Maary. <3

Author's Response:

Wow. That was quite the review! Thank you so much, really! To take the time to write me a review like this means so much. I have been so busy with school and it's really stressing me out, but I finally have some time to myself so i'm DEFINITELY working on the next chapter right now. I didn't realize I was in so much crap at the moment; All AP classes, Photography Society, Key Club, YoungLife, Drama Club, STUCO, Blue Curtain, Theatre Arts, Choir, varsity soccer..... Fml. I didn't realize updates were going to be much slower and not as frequent. Though on weekends, definitely expect an update every day; Friday, Saturday and Sunday. (This goes out to everyone)

Also, don't worry, they're pretty hard-headed right now but they'll come around and have a bit of a meaningful conversation eventually. I mean.... look at the situation they're in? It's bound to happen sometime(; Yeah, me neither but I was getting mad at my own pretense character and wanted to do something intense to her hahaha! 

OMFG THANK YOU. I hate when people rush into relationships! I don't plan on it for a while. They've had their moments, but I don't want to take it too far because what's the point? I'll have nothing to write about after they get together! This isn't my first, but I haven't been pleased with any of my past stories. This one is different(:

Thank you again!<3

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2011 07:15 am Title: Chapter 11

lol... I like this chapter and the last cuz it shows a different side of Hallie. And I feel like Mike has some feelings for her but he's too d!<K headed to admit it.

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!


L.o.v.e.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2011 02:44 am Title: Chapter 11

omg her n mike had a moment lol also aww that bitch is in a coma #sucks

Reviewer: deedee1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2011 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1

wow!! This story is awesome! You must update!!!!!!! I'm going crazy wondering whats going to happen.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much<333 Expect an update tonight(:

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 02:41 am Title: Chapter 10

Damn house arrest wit mj shud be just super

Author's Response:

Hahaha thank you so much<333

Reviewer: wisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 01:45 am Title: Chapter 10

LOL!!!! CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT'LL HAPPEN WHEN MIKE AND HALLIE R IN THE SAME DORM IN HOUSE ARREST!

TNX FOR THE UPDATE!!!


L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!<33

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 03:57 am Title: Chapter 9

please update soon am loving this :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much<3

Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 01:26 am Title: Chapter 9

I decided to postpone studying for my 4 tests tomorrow  just to read your story. I love your detailing. I admire you because you make time to balance out your storymaking (which I love) and your school work. Well anyways, I can't believe that Michael can't remember or maybe it's just a mask. I'm guessing. Continue with your story because it's obvious that everyone loves it! Update soon so I can skip the (3) chapters I have to read.

Author's Response:

You did? Aw, that means so much to me! Really, that makes me feel a lot more confident in my writing.<3 Thank you so much, I do try to please every reader.(: I'm working on TWO right now so check in later if you'd like! Again, thank you very much<33