Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2011 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 9 : A Requiem for a Dream

Yes!!!! Leave his sorry ass Angela. He's a weak, sorry excuse for a man. Don't let him make you weak anymore. Leave now and don't look back! You cab get any man you want. Fuck his sorry ass.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2011 02:47 am Title: Chapter 8: All of Her

SMH so he's still talking to other women? Yeah, I sooo hope Angela gets real acquainted with that fine coworker or whoever he is because Michael still ain't shit. What kinda man will try to purposely break a woman's spirit and make her be with him? Cuz he KNOWS she can do better! That's why. Only a weak man will be emotionally abusive to a woman. Yeah well payback will be a bitch Michael! Angela is a good woman and a good man deserves her.. he's gonna have some competition soon enough and I can't wait. Man these tables need to turn!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2011 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Tell Me You Love Me

LOL.. that's all he's good for is sex!!!! I can't stand him. lol. Maybe this time, he will receive his karma though. His beloved Angela will give it up to somebody else.. see how much he'll like that. 

Author's Response:

oh i have a lot of juicy plots in store for this seque (;l but i dont want to give any thing up, the only think i'll say is michaels going to fuck up big time and they will break up, and mike will fuck up again and commit a crime, which leaves angela to make a decision whether to stay with him or leave forever

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2011 01:00 am Title: Chapter 7 : Tell Me You Love Me

Uh....... Where's the rest of the chapter???

Reviewer: Kenya Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2011 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Working Out

More and Im sorry can you change the pattern you are typing the words im using my phone and its taking to much time you dont have to do it if you dont want to its just bothering me thanks

Author's Response:

okay, i will.

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2011 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Orientation

MOOORRREEEE!!!!!

Reviewer: Kenya Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2011 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4 : Happy Family

Loved it!