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Reviewer: Chelley_307 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2020 07:52 am Title: Chapter 5 : Hidden love

Aww, fuck... Frank should have left that "single shit" out. Everyone (besides fans) knows that they are together. Telling him to say this is gonna stir the pot

Reviewer: Chelley_307 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2020 07:41 am Title: Chapter 2 : Work again

Starting off great so far (not that its bad or anything)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2013 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 61 : Romance or despair?

poor debbie. must be eating at her insides knowing what she ISN'T to michael.

Reviewer: mj_is_peterpan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2012 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 80 : Farewell my summer love (Last chapter)

This is an amazing story! You really did an excellent job! I loved it, nice work! Well Done!:)



Author's Response: Thank you very much.I'm really happy you loved it :)

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2011 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 80 : Farewell my summer love (Last chapter)

,,my little Alina"....

you made me cry sweetheart....you really are A SWEETHEART....

I LOVE THE LAST CHAPTER...NO...LET ME CORRECT MYSELF...I LOOOOVE THIS STORY.....

I ALSO LOVE THE LAST LINE OF THIS CHAPTER....SO TOUCHING....

THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I'M FEELING TOWARDS MICHAEL TOO....

MY LOVE FOR HIM GROWS MORE AND MORE EACH MINUTE......

YOU CAN'T JUST SAY THAT YOU DON'T LOVE HIM

AT LEAST LIKE HIM....

 

HE'S UNIQUE,SPECIAL,GIFTED,SWEET,COMPASSIONATE,DEAR, ADN I COULD GO ON AND ON BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I FEEL....

 

I AM SOOOOOOOOO SAD THAT IT'S OVER....I DON'T LIKE ENDINGS...THEY'RE MAKING ME SAD.....BUT HAPPY TOO BECAUSE IT'S ALL FOR L.O.V.E!

 

LOVE YOU TILL MY ,,LAST BREATH" ....

SERIOUSLY....

I LOVE YOU AND THE MJ FAMILY DEARLY!

MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH L-O-V-E!



Author's Response:

You're so right in everything you said too...

He's just unique, nobody can come near to him...

Love you more girl!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2011 10:48 am Title: Chapter 79 : Our last goodbye

( VERY LOOOOOOONG SIGH)

SWEETIE...

DO I NEED TO SAY WHAT I THINK?

BECAUSE YOU KNOW VERY WELL MY COMMENTS...

 

BEAUTIFUL.....I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT IT'S ALMOST OVER.....I HAVE READ SINCE THE VERY BEGINING AND SMILED BRIGHTLY,ENJOYED,LUAGHED,CRYED,FELL IN LOOOOOOOOOOVE WITH IT....

 

AND NOW IT'S.........

IT'S.........

 

 

 

OVER..............

 

 

MUCH L-O-V-E FOR YOU AND MJ FAMILY!

GOD BLESS!

 

WRITE MORE AND MORE!

 

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU!



Author's Response:

And sweety, do I need to say that I thank you, really for your big support?

All your comments meant a lot for me...You reviewed on nearly every chapters and it warmed my heart all the time.

Of course, I will write more and more...Don't worry.

Love you too girl

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2011 09:47 am Title: Chapter 78 : Where are we going?

Sweetheart....

You've

made

me

CRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

 

I'm soooo SAD......

It wasn't your fault...really....because you're a fan...you know what I mean and feel....

I MISS HIM...I MISS HIM SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH.....SO MUCH.......SO MUCH.....IT HURTS.....

REALLY BAD......

 

GREAT CHAPTER....NO WORDS TOWARDS YOUR STORY AND EVERYONE'S STORIES....

GOD BLESS!

MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry...And to be honest, I cried while I wrote those chapters.

As you said I'm a fan for 24 years now and Michael was a very big part of my life and he's still...I really tried to write those chapters in the best manner that I could.

Thank you sweety!

Love you!!

Reviewer: teo4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2011 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 77 : Michael...Not you

OMG!!! this is soooooooo depressing! :( Just after her father was getting well...poor Leanne..
Sad chapter, but very well written! keep going with the great work! and update!!
All the LOVE!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah I know...The last chapters of this story were very hard to write.

But I'm happy you found I did a great job...It was important to me to respect him and to write this very hard time for the fans, in a good manner.

It remains only 2 chapters til the end...Stay tuned!

L.O.V.E

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2011 12:08 pm Title: Introduction

Thank you for respondind dear!

3333333333333 chapters?

ugh.............I DON'T like when a story comes to an END!

NEVER!

Because ...for me it....DEPRESSING....

seriously......

will you write ANOTHER?

WILL YOU?

WILL YOU?

WILL YOUUUUU?

:))

'CAUSE I'D LOOOOOOOOOOOVE TO KNOW!

I understand your reasons...really.....

But...But..........But....

Even NOW....for ME....it's....it's like a NIGHTMARE to know that he's.....he's.....ugh...I'm even affraid to pronounce it......

He's away....... (deep sigh)

I....want to....know him.....and one thing I know...and truly KNOW...is that once I will see him....I WON'T jump up and down and scream or cry or act crazy.....I CAN'T do that.....Firstly...because I'M VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY SHY (blushing) ....Secondly.....because....I'm NOT that kind of human.....I'm the VEEEEEEEEEEEERY QUIET type.........

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUU!



Author's Response:

Sure I will write other stories...I already have some ideas :)

But now I'm focused a little on "When memories are gone".

I can't realised it too...

I'm so shy myself that if I had the chance to meet him, I think I would have stayed in front of him, without being able to do or say anything...Even a simple "Hi!" lol.

And I would have regretted all my life that I didn't dare to say a word to him lol

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2011 10:45 am Title: Chapter 77 : Michael...Not you

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

NO

NO

NO

NO

NO

THAT WAS THE MOST SCARRIEST THING I WAS HOPING TO NOT HAPPEN!

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???????????
IT'S YOUR STORY GOING TO END?

LOVELY STORY AND AUTHOR FOREVER!

MUCH LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE FOR YOU,MJ FAMILY,ALL THE PEOPLE AND OUR DEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR MICHAEL!



Author's Response:

I"m really really sorry about that sweety...But I said that my story will cover Michael's life, being as close as possible to the reality...So, it included this most horrible part to write.

I hope I did it fine, anyway.

Yeah the story will end in 3 chapters.

Much love to you sweety!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2011 11:26 am Title: Introduction

You DON'T have to thank me for NOTHING,sweetie....

I say it from my HEART.......

Because you're MY FAMILIY....

Do I need to describe how much I LOVE your story?

I don't think so....

Because YOU KNOW!

BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING.LOVELY,SWEET,FUNNY and I could go ON and ON....

 

 

MUCH L-O-V-E!

 

P.S. :I thank YOU for reviewing and SUPPORTING ME!



Author's Response:

Oh you're really too kind...Your review warmed my heart...

And no need to thank me either...I love your story and as it's your first try, I think you must be support!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2011 01:55 pm Title: Introduction

=)) =)) =))

OH...GOD.... =))

I don't know what I have today but.....listen to this :

2 minutes ago I looked at my review over Summer Love.....I saw that you've reSponded...then I looked over at  When Memories are gone....and saw that ,,the author" responded too....then I LOOKED UP AT the author AND SAW THAT IT'S THE SAME! =))

I knew it was you on both of them but today I was like I've came from another planet....we all have this kind of days sometimes :))

(just wanted to tell you this....I find it HILLARIOUS AND WEIRD!)

MUCH L-O-V-E!


 



Author's Response:

Alina, you're losing your mind my girl lol...

Yeah it's me on "Summer Love", "True love never dies", "Love isn't black or white" and "When memories are gone"

I can't believe I already wrote 4 stories...And I planned to write more :)

Love you too girl

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2011 10:52 am Title: Chapter 72 : Sad victory

OH...IT IS A SAD VICTORY.....

BUT IT;S SO BEAUTIFUL!

MUCH L-O-V-E!



Author's Response:

thank you sweety!!!

Love you too!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2011 10:43 am Title: Chapter 71 : I'm not alone

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

wooooooooo!

(silly)

OKKKKK...let's get back to ,,business" now :

LOVELY-LOVELY-LOVELY-LOVELY-LOVELY AND I COULD GO ON AND ON AND ON!

GOD...YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFUL!

MUCH L-O-V-E!

LOVE YOU AND ALL MJ FAMILY TO DEATH!

 



Author's Response:

Woooooooow lol.

Thank you so so much...It really means a lot to me, you have no idea.

Much love to you sweety!!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 70 : A new role

awwww.....

THE MOST SWEETEST CHAPTER.....

lovely!

and I was sure about the challenge...I just wanted to know...

MUCH L-O-V-E!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much sweety!!

I know you were sure lol...

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