Date: Oct 12, 2011 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
"You know I should’ve like did all types of crazy, TV, romantic marriage proposal type shit but I didn’t."
Sarcasm?
"Michael, last night was special without the EXTRA CRAP.”
Romance=CRAP
"Houston I think we are having problems ..." When writers ask "Please Review" I think we can express what we are thinking about the story.You shouldnt take this as a bad thing ... You can get better with the criticism.
Yahara is a girl who would like to make love, not sex.There is a huge difference between "having sex" and "making love". Yahara is romantic and she was thinking that Michael just wanted to have sex with her. So he should be more affectionate and romantic with Yahara. The romantism would make him show that he loves her and not just sexual pleasure. Mike should have given her a special night for Yahara and prove that he is not thinking only of sex and that he loves her. I'm sorry but this is my opinion as a reader.
But it's okay ... If you only want to read compliments ... well ... I will do when I think that you deserve and you're very talented as I said before.
btw...Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I was literally just joking. I didn't mean for anybody to take it as if I was serious, I enjoy reading all reviews and not just those that compliment my stories. As for the Michael and Yahara situation...I purposely made it that way for later chapters that I will not reveal lol. But thanx anywayz
Date: Oct 12, 2011 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 47
Ok LMFAO this has to be my fave chapter so far it was too fucking cute i mean the whole world knows when mike gets some he was just cheezin yogi was glowin wit a limp n gigi is a hot mess but mane what a way to end the chapter her mom?? i hope tht ends ok
Date: Oct 12, 2011 09:39 am Title: Chapter 46
Good God! Hahaa finally they make love, and Yahara fully trusts Michael :') Amazing chapter girl. :))
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2011 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 46
Woot this is perfect! I thought you were going to have them fuck umm I mean make love lol with candles and stuff. Something cheesy.
Aww thanks for updating, I needed a distraction, I follow that case that's happening now and today was a really bad day:(
Date: Oct 11, 2011 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 46
This is such an AWESOME story. Can't wait for more!
Date: Oct 11, 2011 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 46
I can totally imagine Michael saying, "Best fucking tacos ever!". :3 <3
Date: Oct 11, 2011 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 46
Well ... finally they did!But Yogi deserved something more romantic ... Everything was too fast! Am I romantic? Yes .. But I'm glad that their relationship is getting more genuine.
Thanks for the update!I liked it!:)
Date: Oct 11, 2011 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 46
awww lol tht was cute
Date: Oct 11, 2011 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 46
Yay! what's gonna happen next?
Date: Oct 10, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 45
dang...what's her problem?She's annoying me already...
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2011 09:00 am Title: Chapter 45
Well damn, lol I really thought she would have given up the goodies by now. Is she waiting on a proposal? That's good though lol @Mike thristy self.
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2011 06:53 am Title: Chapter 45
Awww, bad move mike! When wonder when yogi would be ready. Cnt wait for more
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2011 02:58 am Title: Chapter 45
Oh-uh lol im just wondering- will Yahara ever give in to Mike?! Lool lovin it as usual girl. :)
Date: Oct 10, 2011 02:50 am Title: Chapter 45
Mike's got some explanin' to do...
I Cant wait for more... :D
L.o.v.e.
Date: Oct 09, 2011 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 45
damn this might not end well