Reviewer: Meganavery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 57

welcome back. i hope michael and miranda have the talk about the miscarriage. i hope she forgives michael and hope he forgives her. they acting childless and i wish they make up already its not healthy to fight in an relationship cause it leads to breaking up. its just my opinion. :) enrinque is hott and so is michael. wonderful chapter dear and like i said i still enjoy the story. continue :)

Reviewer: Meganavery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2012 04:26 am Title: Chapter 56

lol that was funny. damn bruno is always get himself in deep shit with emma. i still enjoy ur stories and i hope u continue soon

Reviewer: Lele Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2012 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for not ending the story! I've been waiting for this update! 

 

I love this story so much! The whole plot, all the characters, and EVERYTHING IS AMAZING!  

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2012 04:24 pm Title: Characters

Are you gonna finish this story? I love this so much! Im waiting for the next chapter! (:

 

Reviewer: AngelEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2011 09:45 pm Title: Characters

Will You Plz Help Me Write A Story AboutA 11 Year Old Girl Names Vanessa Who Has Lukemia And Michael (bad era) adopts her and they have ups and downs but have a great time till.......taitiana thumbzen comes in after her and mike start talking and try to mess up the father-daughter bond but Vanessa acts like Macunley Culkin in home alone then everythinng  else escaltes

Reviewer: BloodOnTheDanceFloor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2011 12:06 pm Title: Characters

This storie is one word 'AMAZING' I mean 'AMAZING' :)

You are such an awsome writer I feel the feeling you describe when I'm reading and I really wanted to cry when she had that miscarriage I nearly nid because my family's huge lots of young children and I want a big family, and if that happened to me I'd die well not die but be very depressed but you described it all very well it's just amazing this storie is :) I could of punched Nicole myself LOL I was literally on the edge of my seat you have also decribed your characters very well Bruno and Enrique sound very HOT! and so does Michael ;) But I hope she gets pregnant again soo because I think that will just make there relationship better again but am I right that when they were having sex (in the hotel roow) that protection was not used so is there a chance that she could be pregnant agin I'll pray and hope for them :)

So I cant wait for more *big grin* and I really hope you update soon I need more this is amazing please do update pretty please :) <3

Much L.O.V.E 

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Author's Response: OMJ! Thank you soooooooooooo much! Oh this is so sweet!<3333 thank you!! I appreciate all your compliments!:) I wanted to cry as I wrote the chapters to do with the miscarriage. It's a very upsetting subject and I did shed tears over it:/ but I understand, I'm happy and sorry that I almost made you cry! Sorry because I don't want you to cry and happy that my writing was able to evoke emotion like that. But to be honest I don't feel this story is amazing or whatever. It's alot better than my first MJ fanfic which I've deleted(sorry!:L) but I feel I could write sooooo much better. And I will, when I update there'll be a few changes to do with how my writing style is:) I hope you notice it, the changes I mean. Anyway yes Bruno and Enrique and Michael are very hot! Mainly Michael for me!:) Ives used Bruno Mars and Enrique Iglesias as the portrayals by the way just invade you didn't know:) but I'm glad you think I've described them well because I was aiming for that. And yes you're right, they didn't use protection!:) good you noticed that because you've given me an idea now! Actually I'm gonna use the idea now. Thank you for inspiring me! But honestly this has given me the kick up my ass to write and update. It's really busy, but I'm gonna have an update later this week hopefully. I feel so bad that I never update! I'm gonna soon don't worry! So thank you soooooooooooo much! Really sweetie, this has made me real happy:)! I'm so glad you like the story so much!:) A lotta drama coming up! Hope you stick around for the entire story because this story is gonna be quite long! And there's gonna be a surprise when the story ends:) thank you AGAIN! For your incredible support! I love you very much! LOVEEE

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 56

I think you may be dwelling for too long on this arguement...

Author's Response: Really? I thought it was going fine:) but then again you're the reader so I'll take that into a account. Don't worry, arguments like this are bound to be quite long. It's not about something that you can say sorry about and it's done. To be honest they're not arguing anymore, she just wants him to talk about the miscarriage. Thank you for the review, I appreciate your advice:) LOVEEE