




Date: Aug 03, 2011 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww, poor angel! Who wouldnt be scared? Im happy that michaels the one helper her now, i think this is really sweet. Cnt wait for the next part :)





Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh snaps! Im all caught up now. I love this story, the plot is really good & solid. I enjoy the interactions between characters & youre doing an amazing job ! Cnt wait till you update :)





Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:19 am Title: Chapter 10
Aw i like that his dad is actually trying, cnt wait to read more!





Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:10 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww him & angel are freakin adorable! & omg i cant wait to read the next chapter :)





Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Awww i love how angel is changing him, omg this is soooo good! Love it





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:58 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww at least hes out of jail, i really like her grandpa. Hes so nice! Love it!





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Love it! You truly are an amazing writer :)





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww that was really sad, he needs to talk to her & clear things up before he assumes she gave her heart to roylin





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha i dont know why but i found it hilarious that after he beat the ish out of that guy he was trying to smile and walk off with her hahah i lovee this!





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:34 am Title: Chapter 3
Awww omg im offically in love. This is amazing!!! Great job :)!





Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww this is soo gooe! Im really liking this :) great job! Cnt wait to read more :D
Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Im really digging the start of this! Cnt wait to read moree :)
Date: Aug 02, 2011 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this story! Continue please! :)





Date: Aug 01, 2011 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really love this story its so different from others and fresh. Good Job! :)





Date: Aug 01, 2011 08:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Like I said before, such a (dare I say) masterpiece. It's unlike anything I've seen on MJFiction