




Date: Aug 26, 2011 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 29
This made me tear up. Please, I mean PLEASE don't let Angel and Michael break up forever. I cried when Jackie died. This story is so well written. Raw emotions are ever present throughout this entire story. I love it so much:) You are a gifted writer:) Cherish your gift,
I can't wait for more:) Keep the amazing work up girl!
LOVEEE
Date: Aug 24, 2011 04:06 am Title: Chapter 28
wow,I wonder what's going to happen next!!!very,very god job! I love it!
Date: Aug 23, 2011 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 28
Ooohh Michael is bad again. Shame!! Hope he comes back to his senses soon:)!!!





Date: Aug 23, 2011 01:48 am Title: Chapter 27
I loveee it! :) i respect his aunt for trying to make his future brighter but it wouldve been smarter ro let him know. I lovee this cnt wait for the next part





Date: Aug 23, 2011 01:39 am Title: Chapter 26
Awwww :( such an emotion chapter. I loveeed jackies character hes amazing! It sucks that michaels dad was so jealous he had him killed :(
Date: Aug 22, 2011 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 26
omg that made me cry wow
Author's Response:
My apologies for making you cry





Date: Aug 22, 2011 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
Please update soon. I love this story so so much. :)
Date: Aug 22, 2011 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
this is my first review on this story and i just wanna tell you that this is one of the best stories on this site!! I love the chemistry between the two characters. Both come from a hard backround and its amazing to see that they dont believe in themselves but they help eachother too..keep going cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter!! and i hope jackie doesnt get killed..:( hes such an important figure in the story...Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!





Date: Aug 18, 2011 01:35 am Title: Chapter 25
Omg i cant believe he would be that jealous that he would want to kill him :( omg i hope nothing happens cant wait for moreee





Date: Aug 18, 2011 01:30 am Title: Chapter 24
Aww that the thing that sucks about jobs and school and ish like that it takes up so much time and you really start to push important things to the side
Date: Aug 17, 2011 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 25
Ohh no joe u crzy sob





Date: Aug 17, 2011 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh my gosh..... Please update soon!
Date: Aug 17, 2011 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 25
OH NO! DONT LET THEM KILL JACKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





Date: Aug 17, 2011 02:15 am Title: Chapter 23
Aww this whole chapter was just full of cuteness, im happy she got in! :) cnt wait for the next chapterr
Date: Aug 15, 2011 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting story to read but when are you going to update your other story that I like?
Author's Response: I'm sorry. I'm having a major writer's block. I know how to end it but to begin it is the hard part