[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2023 10:53 am Title: Chapter 7: "Someday My Prince Will Come"
This chapter was amazing.. So glad that Kimberly stood up to Regina, never liked her from the start, I had a feeling she was up to no good! Hopefully Michael and Kimberly's friendship (and more) will continue to bloom
Date: Sep 10, 2023 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto
Thank you so much for this beautiful Story! Really love your way of building their realationship. Can't wait for other stories of you, please continue writing!
Date: Sep 08, 2023 12:53 am Title: Chapter 31: Adagio Sostenuto
Yessss, I’ve been waiting on someone to write about the infamous night Michael quit the group and you wrote it perfectly. I love this entire story!
Author's Response: I'm so happy for that. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2023 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 30: "The Lady In My Life"
***I'm melting..like hot candle wax***
This chapter has me in a puddle of goo...the perfect amount od steamy, sexy and sweet. I love their love *swoon*
Date: May 04, 2023 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 30: "The Lady In My Life"
Love it! Thank you for your Update! Can't wait to read how the Story will continue...
Date: Apr 25, 2023 11:18 am Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"
Love your writing, beautiful storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter - Please Update soon...
Date: Apr 13, 2023 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"
Wow this chapter was perfect. Can’t wait for the next one.
Date: Apr 01, 2023 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: L'Autunno
Absolutely positively one of the best stories I have read and experienced so far!! Not only is this capturing the journey and progression of two musically gifted people, but as well as connecting that element to the journey and progression of two youthful souls who’s experiences, feelings, thoughts, and dreams not only make them joined at the hip, but attached by the heart. I’ve read a lot of MJ fan-fiction stories, but your story captures Michael in a whole different lighting. It’s allowing me as a reader to relate to him on a more personal and familiar level. A lot of us think of him as a megastar ( which hands down he is), but at the root of it.. He’s just another young man trying to navigate the parts of his life the best of ways he can. Simply wants to be and is Michael Jackson ( without the whistles and bells attached). Cannot wait for another chapter!! Keep doing your thing!
Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thank you so much for this review...I'm really honored!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2023 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 29: "Légende"
Well worth the wait =) so glad it wasn't tacky or graphic and you focused on the emotional and not the deed
This was perfect, hope things work out for them gping forward
I am 35 today 31/03/2023 do me a solid and post a chapter asap'r than asap hehehe! Love this story line x
Author's Response: I know I'm super late, but happy belated birthday! It's been...quite a month for me, but I'm hoping to be finished with the next chapter soon!
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2023 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 28: "The Girl Is Mine"
Guuuuurrrrrl hold up....how did we gp from staring into each others eyes to him getting back into the car in the next chapter???
That being said I loved everything about this chapter, has to be one of my favourite this far. Brilliantly written, can't wait for the next update, don't be gone too long x
Author's Response: He gave himself twenty minutes…LMAO!
And thank you! I’m glad you like it. I’m working on the next chapter as we speak!
Date: Mar 14, 2023 11:40 am Title: Chapter 28: "The Girl Is Mine"
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[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2023 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 27: "Nocturne"
Lovely update. Can't wait to read more.
I actually think I remember reading this story many years ago on one of the MJ notice boards.
Author's Response: Thank you! And it's possible...I had an iteration of this story up on both KOPD (finished) and MJEOL.
Date: Feb 25, 2023 09:49 am Title: Chapter 7: "Someday My Prince Will Come"
That was such a beautiful ending ????
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2023 02:58 am Title: Chapter 24: "Lovely One"
Great chapter. Loving this story more and more.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2023 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 21: "Close To You"
Love this story so much.