Reviewer: serena2534 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1- The Helmsley Hotel

Love the story setup so much~

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2020 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Midnight in Paris

Getting so good. Glad they cleared the air and Mia will do great things because Michael believes in her but she needs to have more faith in her ability to do it!!!

Reviewer: Switt23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2020 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 49 - The Bells

Hell yeahs girl !♥️💁‍♀️ 

I loved both chapters honestly ! Your writing is always superb af & on point . You got a natural talent . always keep writing & I thank you for creating these beautiful characters 🥰 

 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2020 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 49 - The Bells

Oh my goodness, this was entirely insane.!!!Gosh this heated chapter was just so captivating- and the outcome so unexpected! I mean, I knew there was something up from the get go. And it was pretty much exactly how I predicted it would happen: Frank did show up to at the wedding to make a scene... and righteously so. It was so intense, gosh, I was holding my breath all the way through it. Amazing writing. I felt like a fly on the wall. It was fantastic and I loved how it all went down and how Savannah ended up standing up against her father. She literally straightened her back and stood tall. It all came together beautifully. ( loved her last sentence she threw at her father and how she flipped her finger😉😂) That chapter was a trip, dear. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you, thank you, 🙏🏿 Have a great weekend 😘

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The Ultimate Insurance Policy

You are right Michael. A very bad storm is brewing and I hope all are safe!!!

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The Ultimate Insurance Policy

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 OHMYGAWD!!!  What a fricking chapter!! Frank! Jeez he's really pissed as I knew he would be, only a man with no true feelings wouldn't be pissed. He was so pissed he quit and put his hands on Michael. Damn 

Michael is so clueless sometimes, it's cute and annoying. Lol but I suppose he's getting used to the whole "husband" title. Sighs it's drama drama nonstop for these four. Gideon really stepped up and did what was right, even if people get hurt in the end🥺 

Michael and Amelia 🤦🏾‍♀️ 

Amelia- phantom baby.... seriously?! 

Lol Michael is back to the couch 😩😩😂😂 

i feel extremely bad for Amelia when it comes on to her professional life. I think she can do so much more outside of the office... she really needs to get involved in some activities that are more fulfilling..  

another awesome chapter! Will reread to see if I missed anything 👍🏾👏🏾

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2020 12:07 am Title: Chapter 47 - Cage birds singing

Intricate chapter ! I admire Gideon for his coolness and considerate behavior and his support for Savannah. I like the fact that you hinted at Gideon very likely to be telling Frank about Savannah being pregnant with Frank‘s child.
What I do not understand at all is that Michael appears to be so careless about his relationship with Amelia. Apparently, he doesn’t see the damage he has done by being so inconsiderate. And I am shocked that he doesn’t even seem to care to call her right away to explain himself, to tell her what happened so that she can be prepared for the onslaught of the media circus that is coming for her. I hate to know, that he is leaving her in the dark about it for her to be blindsided by it. She of all people should hear it from her husband first so that she can have the calmness and serenity to act accordingly and keep the composure. If Michael does not call her in the beginning of your next chapter BEFORE the reporters get to her, he is handing her over to the vultures on a silver platter and this doesn’t sit right with me. Why would he do that? He loves her so much. He cannot be that careless and ignorant. That doesn’t make any sense to me and it is so out of character. In the past, your Michael always looked out for his Mia.
I honestly hope that the next chapter will fix that.

Author's Response:

Don't you worry. I will explain Michael's intension and frustrations in the next chapter. :) Thank you so much for your support and for enjoying my work. I means so much to me. You are one of the reasons I continue to upload. I wish more readers commented with such passion like you do.