



Date: Mar 24, 2022 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The Ultimate Insurance Policy
Yea you are.
Date: Mar 22, 2022 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Even tho this was years and years ago it still had such a wonderful reaction from me. THIS I could see. Especially when he walks to the door, smiles and says what he said
Date: Mar 21, 2022 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Oh My God! He has to understand she delirous and doesn't know what she's saying. Of course Michael will think of it as even in his own delirium he would know who he loves and the only name that would come from his mouth would be that of his beloved Mia
Date: Mar 21, 2022 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Again, I don't think Michael would be on the verge of tears at every moment. I think he would be in take charge mode and only let his emotions go when everything was taken care of. I really don;t like that you have him on the verge of tears at every crisis that comes up. Michael was not like that. He would have handled or taken care of what needed to be taken care of then in the privacy of his own place would he let his emotions go
Date: Mar 16, 2022 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 34 - A million shades in between
He will do his best and try.



Date: Mar 15, 2022 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 27- The Grapevine
The ONLY thing I find troubling in your writing of Michael is he always seems to be on the verge of tears. That just doesn't seem like him at all. He was sensitive and caring yes but he was NOT that fragile.





Date: Mar 14, 2022 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Speechless
I for one absoultely love their first night as husbad and wife together I think that's exactly the way Michael would have spent his first night. He wasn't like any other man so his first night would not have been as convential. It would have been sweet and romantic and filled with everything he was: Magical Sexual Senous Alluring Breathtakingly Beautiful Special.
Date: Mar 14, 2022 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 23 - A touch, a kiss and a whisper of love
oh good gracious!! Only Michael could bring such feelings out of someone. He is so magical and SO DAMN sexy it kills me everytime. He knew how seductive and senous he was he just never found the right woman to explore his feeling with.
Date: Mar 14, 2022 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 22- Give into me
Cupcake...LOL!!





Date: Mar 13, 2022 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Black moves second.
OMG I LOVED HOW MICHAEL ACTED!! THAT WAS JOSEPH...THAT IS THE PART OF MICHAEL HE IS SCARED TO SHOW BECAUSE HE KNOWS WHAT HE COULD DO.





Date: Mar 13, 2022 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 16- Tears and Taunts
Glad LMP is gone! No, I still don't like her





Date: Mar 13, 2022 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 14- The last Will and Testament of Charles Paxton
OH WOW!!! Can someone really do that in real life??! That was a smooth move by Charles.





Date: Mar 13, 2022 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Just Breathe.
I swear!! IDK how many years or decades it has been since I last read this but you have managed to capture every emotion I had when I first read this! The markings of a true artist/writer.
Okay Give Up... Its me Marlene :)





Date: Mar 13, 2022 08:02 am Title: Chapter 12- Starry nights and fried Chicken
If memory serves me correctly Michael has a much needed and obvious conversation with Mia. I just LOVE THEIR INTERACTION... LIKE TWO LITTLE KIDS ONE MINUTE THEN LIKE TWO LOVERS THE NEXT. OH HOW I WISH HE HAD SOMEONE IN HIS LIFE EXACTLY LIKE MIA..





Date: Mar 13, 2022 07:28 am Title: Chapter 11- Just Breathe
I found myself reading this with the eyes of a child. For the first time even though i have read it before. I loved the way you captured the relationship with Michael and Charles it was the first time he had ever had a GOOD non hurtful relationship with a mn EVER in his life and I loved every minute of it.
Do you know who this is... I'll give you a hint. HE is doing just fine and thinks the fact that everyone has had to wear a mask is a bit funny.