




Date: Oct 10, 2019 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Feeling the blues
Oh, it was a wonderful chapter for sure. No worries! I truly and wholeheartedly enjoyed this meeting and especially the turn it took. Having Mathew Maddox fired was Amelia’s smartest move so far. He is a fool and evil, too. I am sure Gideon will be a loyal friend for Amelia and will be supportive. My initial thoughts upon reading that Amelia stepped back as CEO was that she will be jumping on the next plane to be with Michael. Yes, that is the only logical thing she could be doing next. I mean they live in modern times, Gideon can call her on a daily basis and if her presence was needed, she could still take a plane back to LA. in no time....
Since she won’t have to be involved in every day business she got plenty of time!!!! I am sure Michael will love to hear thatðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Less time for her company means more time for the two of them.
I am very hopeful that she will fly into his arms and hopefully Michael and her will have the most joyful reunion...
I have no doubt that Amelia means well and given the situation and knowing how Michael is and how much sadness is buried deep down inside of him, her worries are not arbitrary. I would be worried, too, that he could easily fall victim to such exploitive, vicious, greedy no good people, who don’t give a damn about Michael and his feelings or his reputation. I understand that she is only looking out for him, because she genuinely cares and since she knows Michael so well, she knows that he naively puts himself in vulnerable positions without realizing it. So, I am thankful that you created Amelia they way you did and that she is there for him, if only Michael will appreciate it...
And remember:Better a small chapter than no chapter at all.
Enjoy your weekend 😉
Author's Response:
Again you are remarkable and I love that you always take the time to read and comment with so much passion and detail. I cherish you as a reader. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :) I hope you continue to enjoy my work to come.
Date: Oct 06, 2019 09:49 am Title: Chapter 30 - Saying goodbye
Poor Savannah, she's under so much pressure from her overbearing, bigoted father :( that's probably why she's acting out against frank and not giving him and them a chance to be something, ugh. I hope Amelia can visit with Michael sooner rather than later, the distance can only cause issues, especially with a crushing fan girl/backup dancer in the mix.
Date: Oct 05, 2019 11:14 am Title: Chapter 30 - Saying goodbye
Dear Author,
Alexandria Rose appears to be a simple and innocent girl who pursues her dancing dreams in her first appearance here. Is she going to play a role in this story? Alexandria admires the King of Pop so is she going to have feelings for Michael when she dances for him during the world tour?
If yes, under the condition that Amelia lives on the other side of the world, it is unsure that if Alexandria will pursue Michael or hold back her feelings. I believe that Michael will be very loyal to his wife but the tabloid press may spread the rumours about Michael and Alexandria. If this really happens, will Amelia distances herself from Michael because of her anger and disappointment or will she show up to consolidate her marriage with Michael? I am just making a guess. Hopefully, Amelia can keep her word and visit Michael as soon and as often as possible.
I really appreciate your taking time to response to the readers’ comments.





Date: Oct 04, 2019 12:05 am Title: Chapter 30 - Saying goodbye
That was the most depressing goodbye. I am so disappointed in Amelia. I wonder why she never showed up at the main house to at least spend the morning with Michael. Poor Mike, my heart broke for him. This is so wrong and cruel!!!!. I mean after all they cleared the air the night before to my understanding. Why is she showing him the cold shoulder, still? I wonder, since she admitted to herself not to long ago that Michael was her new crush. I mean when Nicholas was her object of desire, I remember her being much more responsive and forgiving. I am really upset with her once again. No wonder Mike is confused and sad when she is being hot and cold. I only hope that that plain Jane dancer girl will not be someone Mike will confide in. I hope he stays reserved and keeps it professional like we all know he did with his touring crew. I wonder what is going to happen to Savannah and Frank. Is Savannah really that submissive when it comes to her father? Rebellious outside her home and meek around her father? That sure ain’t working for long. I am keeping my fingers crossed that Amelia will keep her promise and visit MJ before he gets attached to some one else, but then again why would that happen.? Mike has been in love with Amelia for so many years, why would he confide in some other woman after finally being married to his object of desire and being so close to reaching his dreams? That wouldn’t add up nor would it make sense, so actually I should be relaxed.... right?
Date: Oct 03, 2019 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Saying goodbye
My goodness , as always beautiful chapter . I love that Michael and Amelia sorted out their differences , before he left .
Savannah's story seems so interesting as well and what she has brewing with frank Cascio .





Date: Oct 03, 2019 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Saying goodbye
Trouble is brewing on two fronts. I hope it works out.
Date: Oct 03, 2019 08:50 am Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
I am so glad Michael and Amelia could get past those obstacles before he took off for his tour. I’m also pretty happy that Amelia is seeing how wonderful Michael could be in a different light (ie in a relationship). Thank you for the speedy updates and wonderful story, I’m always excited to read what happens next.





Date: Sep 30, 2019 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
The start of a steamy courtship!
Author's Response:
:) Indeed it is. Thank you for reading and commenting.





Date: Sep 30, 2019 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
Little Arianna was killer💪.
I looooooved how she spoke words of wisdom and stomped her foot down. She really put her big sister in her place and truly acted much more mature than Amelia. I am very proud of her. I am also extremely pleased with the way the chapter went. It turned out exactly how I was hoping it to turn out. So, with that being said, I wanna thank you very very much for that chapter.
And I thought it was brilliant of you to let Amelia find all the drafts, poems and drawings in his bedroom library that Michael made of her over the years. I really think that she needed to see these. This was a very special part of the chapter that I adored. It was another mile stone for Amelia to see with her own eyes how much Michael loves her and admires her as a person and as a woman and how sincere he is to make her understand what a gem she has at her hands. Something unparalleled, something any girl would dream of; a love so rare, genuine and delicate it needs to be handled with care and reciprocated with just as much devotion and love.
That part was amazing! Thank you very much for adding this.
And then with Amelia and Michael finally meeting at this very romantic and secluded gazebo on Michael‘s ranch in the calmness of the night.......They really had that talk that I was wishing they would have. I’m so proud of Amelia for opening up, for being candid, for being honest and for sharing her feelings with Michael and for telling him how evil and self-centered her mother Clarisse is and that she means no good. I thought the comparison between Clarisse abusing Amelia emotionally and comparing it to Joseph abusing Michael emotionally and physically was a great comparison. They have so much in common and I’m so glad she pointed that out to make him understand how she feels about her mother and that her mother is not someone to be trusted. I’m so glad and I’m so happy that she asked Michael to not confide into her mother anymore because she’s not a friend but an enemy. I completely love the conversation they were having. And it was very believable how it took Michael many convincing words on Amelia’s side to relax and to believe that she meant well, that she didn’t feel ashamed of him. It was extremely saddening for me to hear that he really believed that she would feel that way about him. I’m so glad, so very glad that she was able to clarify that this is nonsense. Great ending to a chapter. It was well needed and just like I imagined and hoped for it to happen. But I am very, very unhappy that Michael is leaving for his History tour now. What will become of them? How will they manage to see each other .? It’s going to be a long tour. I’m really worried about these two, because I am afraid that they won’t have the chance to see each other enough to work on and to grow in the relationship like they want to and have to. They will surely miss each other immensely. I hope it won’t break them and I really and sincerely hope that they will make time to see each other at least once a month for a week or maybe more.I love these two!!!!!!!!!! They are the cutest couple. What’s most important at the end of the day is that they are faithful to each other, that they trust each other and that they form the strongest bond. I really hope that.
Author's Response:
Children do tend to mature overnight, which is why I was so keen on showing Arianna's more mature side. Michael is right. Children see what we can't or refuse to see. I loved that you liked that Amelia found his journals. I have no way of knowing if it is true, but I believe Michael would be just the sort of soul that would express himself in such a way. I can only imagine the pages that are lost to us forever.
I'm so glad you liked this chpater. I figured it was essential for Michael to have Amelia explain her side. He may have been kind in life, but he was not used to not getting his way. I wanted to show that here, but in a more gentle way. Whether Michael keeps his promise to Amelia...well, you have to wait and see. Thank you again for always commenting with such detail and vigor. I makes me so happy.
Date: Sep 30, 2019 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
You are such a beautiful writer ! ðŸ˜
I loved how Arianna kind of told her sister off , and it made her realize she needed to stay .
I hope soon michael and Amelia love unfurls . I truly believe he wanted a equal too .
hey girl I tried to email you , but you email didn't work
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :) I'm so glad you are enjoying my work. I have recieved many emails from readers before. I'm not sure why it isn't working. Please, try again and make sure it is spelled correctly. I would love to connect with you. athywatson7@gmail.com
Date: Sep 30, 2019 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
Came back for the reread ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜it's really so touching sighs
Author's Response:
I adore your enthusiasm! Thank you so much:)





Date: Sep 30, 2019 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Speaking their truth
Love you too!!! â¤ï¸ Arianna is such a wise young lady. Imagine it took her little sister to speak some sense into Amelia's tough head 😂🤣 I'm so grateful they spoke things out and are now back to where they should be..... awww Michael :( I hate that he feels like she's ashamed of him. Can't imagine how many times he truly felt like that in real life ðŸ™ðŸ™ that's so sad and heartbreaking. My heart just broke reading that. If only he knew how special and beautiful he was..... sighs. They both love each other so much it's driving them crazy. Michael's journal sounded so touching. She finally realizes how long he's been in love with her.... I can't wait for their relationship to properly blossom.
Author's Response:
Michael is right, sometimes children see what we can't or refuse to see. I love that you are enjoying this. I do believe he felt that people were ashamed of him in reality, which is why I was so keen on showing it so profoudly here. I can't wait for you to read more. Thank you for reading and commenting. I means so much to me.
Date: Sep 30, 2019 10:40 am Title: Chapter 28 - Trouble in Paradise.
I would love to ask you what inspired you to write this story .
how did you get the ideas 💡.
I think it's an incredible story .
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for enjoying my work so far, and for reading and commenting. I story came to me while thinking back over Michael's life and track record with women. I truly believed he wanted an equal and that was why he loved women like Brooke and Lisa Marie so much. I believe he felt perpetually misunderstood and he needed a woman who could understand his stressors, but also not be intimidated by him. That is why I created Amelia. I wanted a true story of love and how it can be hard. I really hope you continue to enjoy my work.
Thank you so much for commenting and I hope you continue to do so. I would love to read your predictions and opinions. If you have any more questions for me you can email me. You can find my email in my bio.





Date: Sep 29, 2019 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Trouble in Paradise.
SOOOOOOOOO GOOD! Yesssss, I’m living for the drama. Cant wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: Sep 29, 2019 09:17 am Title: Chapter 28 - Trouble in Paradise.
You are such an amazing writer! My eyes watered when Michael was deeply hurt by Amelia’s harsh words. I binge read this story in two days and I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Ugh, poor Michael... I get where Amelia is coming from to a point, but to be so blunt about it, ouch. Thank you for your awesome work, it is greatly appreciated!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for loving my work so far. It means so much to me. Please feel free to continue to comment with your thoughts, predictions and opinions.