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Reviewer: TheRealStory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

Love that Amelia is finally picking up on her love and need for Michael. Although Michael still has no idea of it, he still sees the love as one sided. It’s so sweet, pure, and romantic ugh literally makes me dream this story was real. Great job honey!

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

WHERE DO I BEGIN, I READ THIS CHAPTER LAST NIGHT AND A STRING OF EMOTIONS CAME OVER ME. SOMETIMES I FORGET THAT THIS STORY IS A WORK OF FICTION AND THE EVENTS AREN'T NECESSARILY REAL, THAT'S HOW AMAZING YOUR WRITING IS, IT MAKES YOUR WORK COME ALIVE AND EVOKE REAL EMOTIONS IN US. I COULD LITERALLY FEEL THE PAIN MICHAEL WAS FEELING FOR AMELIA AND HOW WORRIED HE WAS. I COULD FEEL FRANK'S FRUSTRATION AND HURT DISGUISED BY HIS SHIELD OF 'DON'T CARE" BEHAVIOUR. This story is so pure and each chapter takes me to a different place. I'm so glad Amelia and Shandra were safe. I know Michael would feel upset and disappointed that Amelia took over the construction of the orphanage without consulting him but I am truly glad he put that aside.

SAVANNAH NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! UGH HER AND FRANK ARE WORST THAN MICHAEL AND AMELIA. IS SHE REALLY GONNA BECOME GIDEON'S BEARD???? WHAT ABOUT THE BABY???!!!! SHE'S NOT GONNA TELL FRANK HE'S GONNA BE A FATHER???? OMG THIS IS LITERALLY TOO MUCH. I WAS ON EDGE LAST NIGHT WHEN I READ THAT PART.... Sighs.....

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 01:11 am Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

Waiting patiently for more because I know that Michael is about to get two gifts from Mia and one of them he really wants!!!!

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2019 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

Wow wow wow the flood of emotions that were present in this chapter... sadness, happiness, heartbrokenness, fear, anxiety, etc. Will write a proper review when I reread 

Reviewer: Switt23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2019 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

Omg 😍😍😍😍 

such a beautiful chapter . I love how eager Amelia is to see her husband . I think their love is to about to unfurl in the upcoming chapters 💕

Reviewer: Switt23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2019 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto

Omg 😍😍😍😍 

such a beautiful chapter . I love how eager Amelia is to see her husband . I think their love is to about to unfurl in the upcoming chapters 💕

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2019 06:10 am Title: Chapter 37 - The Overture Begins

Wow, I did not see that coming. Michael is very upset and righteously so. She had no right to make those decisions. She should have at least called him and ask him what he thinks should be done. She acted on her own account knowing well that this project is his baby . I know she means well but it wasn’t thoughtful or considerate. Unless the time difference between her location in Africa and Michael’s current location was ridiculously crazy she has no excuse for not having consulted him prior to making such drastic decisions especially knowing that she gave Michael her word to stay anonymous.
I hope they can talk it out and clear the atmosphere. I really would hate to see them quarreling about this matter as important as it is. It’s also very important that these two move forward in the development of their love relationship. But with that one man show of hers, she really endangered the trust bond between herself and Michael. I wonder how all of this will come down in the next chapter. What made up for all the drama in this chapter is her last thought before she passed out. Hopefully she will tell him no matter what as soon as she sees him.
Great agitative, white-knuckle chapter!

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2019 01:57 am Title: Chapter 37 - The Overture Begins

I hope all turns out okay but I have a feeling it will not be all right

Reviewer: Switt23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2019 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 37 - The Overture Begins

This chapter was so exciting to me !! 

It had a element of action that I enjoyed . I honestly think she was just trying to make the situation better , but by doing that she made it worse . 

Damn hopefully Michael isn't too mad at her when she gets back .

Reviewer: liberiangurlmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2019 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 37 - The Overture Begins

Jesús Amelia why did you go and do all of that???!! She's so stubborn. Ugh I'm so mad and scared for her at the same time 😩🤦🏾‍♀️ 

Hey Alessandra, hope all is welll ❤️

Reviewer: Rell gargala Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2019 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 36 - African Skies

Troubles brewing but good comes from it. Waiting patiently for more!!

Reviewer: TheRealStory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 36 - African Skies

Goodness the details. The movie like quality to your chapters is addicting. One cannot help but to feel as if they are right beside the characters.

I can’t wait to see what happens in the next few chapters. I can only hope that Michael’s efforts to help don’t cause problems with the tribes. But places like Africa much too often have these kinds of conflicts.

Amazing job at putting this chapter together, making it as realistic and whole as possible. You must have done crazy research, maybe? It’s incredible. Even the people Amelia comes across while there feel real. So do the tribes.

Well done, honey!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the amazing compliment! I try my best to fill every chapter with incredible detail to give my readers the most enjoyable experiece possible. Thank you for reading and commenting. 

Reviewer: Aquamarin11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2019 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1- The Helmsley Hotel

I am discovering so many new stories here after having my account redone and I'm enjoying yours immensely! Your writing is beautiful :) The plot sounds very promising and I also love both the trailers and the cover art - they really set the mood for your story :)

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2019 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6- Dangerous

Ahahahaha!! The divinity in motion lines were funny! I started reading them and then I was like...wait...and then I just sang along, LOL!

 

Ooh, so Michael is fighting his feelings. Welp, let's see how that goes in the next chapter!

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2019 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 5- Traditions and Fantasy

OK, so I liked the scene where Michael had that sad smile, you know that smile when you try so hard to convince people not to worry but a look in your eyes gives away that you want to run away? Yeah. You did a good job describing that.

I was enjoying this chapter until you insinuated that Tatiana is not an intellegent woman. She is very intellegent! She made a dumb mistake, and so did Michael (for not speaking to her and essentially black-listing her), but she is not an idiot! I didn't like that part.

Anywho, onto chapter 7!

 



Author's Response:

It was necessarily an insult, it was more of a direct quote from Michael himself. I read years ago that he spoke that very line to Frank Dileo in regards to her after she kissed him on stage. It was not meant to be an insult of her intelligence, it was more about her speaking to the press about him after their kiss. 

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means a lot that you are enjoying this. 

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