[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2019 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Merry Christmas darling!!! Whew I need to gather my thoughts and return. This was too much in one chapter 😩😩😩 my emotions are all over the place... just when I thought it was all over... BAM!!! Plot twist 😩😩
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas and Happy new year darling! I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I wanted so much to convey true emotions, I am so glad you believe I achieved that. I can't wait for your comment, and your feedback. Thank you so much for enjoying my work and for reading and commenting. It mean's a lot to me.
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[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2019 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Oh my god, I knew this was gonna happen when you wrote about her persisting fever. It’s her fever talking, not Amelia. If things get worse she might even loose her latest memory to be living in the past temporarily in a time when she was still with that prick N. and that would be devastating for Michael. Hopefully you will not let that happen but give poor Mike a break. He so deserves to be happy. Mia needs to heal and be their for Savannah before she makes the mistake to marry Gideon and it is about time she tells Michael that she loves him and only him irreversibly. So, with that being said I am confident that her words mean nothing since they were fever induced only. Again another dramatic chapter. So, since Christmas is coming up, I am hoping for a brighter update next time.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2019 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Nicholas 😡😡😡😡😡
welp Michael's heart just shattered into a million pieces again
why is Nicholas on her mind? This better be the fever/malaria talking 😩😩😩
Michael is so worried about her 🥺🥺
Date: Dec 21, 2019 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Poor Michael 😩
Date: Dec 20, 2019 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Freaking beautiful !
I love the way how you tell a story , so clever !
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2019 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Michael, Mia is delirious right now. With the pain and fever but it’s you she loves but you just don’t know it yet
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2019 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Nooooo!!!! Not that snake again!! >:c it's really getting intense! I love it! :D
Date: Dec 14, 2019 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1- The Helmsley Hotel
next chapter please!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2019 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Oh God poor Amelia!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2019 10:30 am Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
What a dramatic turn of events!!! I am so worried. I hope it’s only malaria because it can be cured . And I am so anxious for Amelia to finally tell Michael how irreversibly in love she is with him🥰🥰ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜I want her to tell him so badly. Ugh 😩 It was quite a surprise to find out about Danni’s past. Charles really was a benevolent man. He was so kind and good hearted. I wonder when Frank Cascio will address Savannah about the obvious elephant in the room. They sure have some clearing up to do!!! Am I right to presume that Savannah, Danni and Arianna are currently at Michael’s ranch? I am not quite sure...
Thank goodness Michael moved Amelia to another clinic. It’s essential she gets the best treatment and therapy there is. About your question whether we believe that Nicholas makes another appearance in your story, I suppose that he will, since you kind of suggested that, but I am keeping my fingers crossed that he will not mess with Amelia anymore. He is not a threat. Michael is so much more powerful than this sick dude. So if he does have a small comeback, I hope it will only be for him to see how solid and full of real love Amelia’s and Michael’s relationship is. Once he realizes that he can go his merry way for good and never return.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2019 12:02 am Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Tell him already!!!
Date: Dec 11, 2019 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
My gosh !
This chapter was so brilliant , I loved the way you wrote , I lovedddddd how you delved deeper into the relationships between the Paxton's & Danni , of how she became their nanny . Her story was heartbreaking , but so strong .
Can't wait to read the next chapter .
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2019 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Ew I haven't thought about Nicholas in so long... I don't want him back in the story 😩
wow Danni's story is touching... there's something mysterious about it though... her giving birth story...
Poor Savannah... no one knows she's pregnant and now her best friend is gravely ill 😔😔
Amelia is seconds away from telling Michael those three magic words!!! I can't wait!! This chapter highlights how much Michael truly loves Amelia.. he won't leave her side for a second!! She's gonna tell him she loves him in the next chapter.
I'm still waiting on frank and Savannah to wise up and stop playing with their feelings for each other.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2019 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Ew I haven't thought about Nicholas in so long... I don't want him back in the story 😩
wow Danni's story is touching... there's something mysterious about it though... her giving birth story...
Poor Savannah... no one knows she's pregnant and now her best friend is gravely ill 😔😔
Amelia is seconds away from telling Michael those three magic words!!! I can't wait!! This chapter highlights how much Michael truly loves Amelia.. he won't leave her side for a second!! She's gonna tell him she loves him in the next chapter.
I'm still waiting on frank and Savannah to wise up and stop playing with their feelings for each other.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2019 08:10 am Title: Chapter 38 - The Strings of a Concerto
I am so very glad that Amelia is back safely in Michael’s arms. They have been through so much emotionally and physically. Their emotions are all over the place, especially Michael’s. In regards to your concern that you might not have been able to convey all of the emotions that those two lovebirds are going through because of lack of muse ( and so on) at the moment I got to admit that the chapter felt somewhat rushed. Usually you took your time to describe the scenarios more detailed and that made all the emotions more palpable. Learning about savannas current situation in the past chapters with a shock in itself. But to read that she made up her mind and has decided to take Gideon up on his offer to get married to him was a full low blow and hit me right in the gut-just like it did with Frank. By now we all know that your story is going to be long and twisted. Will take a long time until Frank and Savannah find their way home if you know what I mean. I’m really concerned about Savannah. Her best friend Amelia is busy dealing with her own problems that she doesn’t have time right now to be a good friend for Savannah and we all know that Savannah is in desperate need of some good advice. Now, that Amelia is back from her trip to Africa, Savannah hopefully will turn to Amelia before she actually gets married to Gideon to tell her all about it. I would hope that she reconsiders and finally confides into Frank after Amelia hopefully told her to do so but in all honesty I am afraid that that won’t happen.
And I need to mention it though I know you already guessed it but I was so excited to hear Amelia say the words to Michael because they are overdue and she knows it, too. I sincerely hope that Amelia will find the right time in the next chapter maybe over a romantic dinner for example, or better yet while having a nice cozy chat along with a tasty glass of red wine at Neverland’s fireplace in that famous library of Michael’s.
I hope that the two of them will have some alone time to enjoy each other’s company after being apart and going through all of the madness in the last chapters. And Michael needs to know how she really has been feeling about him for quite some time, now, because I hate to see him on needles and pins relentlessly working hard for her love. Please, don’t torture him nor us waiting for her sweet confession. I really would love to see them in a strong and steady relationship where they both trust each other and are each other’s rock. I wonder what is going to happen next....