




Date: Feb 08, 2020 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass
Wait what is Michael supposed to find out??!!!! 👀👀👀👀 What is this Alexandra girl up to? I bet it's no good, she reminds of a tatiana type of character. Why isn't Michael allowed to use the phone???? Omg what is going on?! She's finally told her father that she's pregnant. Sighs now it's time for her to tell frank 😔 poor Savannah, I just know her heart is breaking more and more each day.





Date: Jan 30, 2020 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass
This story just gets better and better. Ohhhh the drama! I can’t wait for more.





Date: Jan 30, 2020 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass
Oh, poor Savannah! The truth is out. I wonder what he will do next. Will she reveal the entire truth ? If so, will he rip the contract to shreds?
Why on earth is Michael spending time with one of his female dancers when he could have spent time with Frank instead. A guy’s evening so to speak. It seems wrong, though it is -at least from his point of view . The dancer might get the wrong impression. I still cannot shake the feeling that they will be come friends and that she will be some kind of Debbie Rowe for him. 😤 I don’t like that idea. He should have rather called Amelia than hang out with a woman. If the roles were reversed, he wouldn’t like this one bit. Short but eventful chapter. Thank you for updating!





Date: Jan 30, 2020 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 46 - The Southern Belle turns brass
Dang, Hades is about to bust wide open. Mia needs to get her butt back to Michael. There is trouble in Paris!





Date: Jan 19, 2020 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Strawberries and Champagne
I am especially upset with Savannah for how she’s reacting towards her best friend, who made the effort to fly all over to America after her long disease to see her friend! Not only did she leave Michael but also she was just recovering and still she made the effort and reached out to Savannah! And Savannah should have been grateful for that. She really is so bitter and Amelia doesn’t deserve any of it! And the audacity of Savannah to leave Amelia standing there knowing that Niclas just arrived! They also that I wouldn’t have done that she would’ve stop by Amelia’s side and Wood offended him off! Thank God Amelia is witty and smart and couldn’t stand her own ground! I’m so proud of her for that. I wonder when Savannah will come to her senses.
My prediction for that matter is : Amelia will tell Frank eventually, like she threatened she’d do and then he will come for Savannah and talk some serious sense into her. This is what I think will happen.
And now let’s move to my two most favorite phrases/ paragraphs in this chapter:
1)
“Well, then you two deserve each other. You both are cruel, cold-hearted bastards who deserve none of what you have.â€
2)
“Oh, they don’t make condoms that big!†Amelia smiled brightly before flipping her hair elegantly and nodding hello to the few familiar faces as she disappeared into the crowd.
Amelia was fantastic! She really put him in his place! I am cheering, laughing and clapping my hands euphorically 💪and I’m so proud of her! Nicholas thought he was so slick, but she won every conversation that he inflicted on her!
Great, great amusing chapter.
I sincerely hope that this information is going to kill his ego! Now he knows for sure, that Michael has what he never had: Amelia’s true love, passion, heart, soul AND body!
ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘😘😘😘😘😘ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜





Date: Jan 19, 2020 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Strawberries and Champagne
Mia, just got Nicholas’s goat! Miss Jane is making a big mistake.
Date: Jan 19, 2020 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Strawberries and Champagne
This chapter was so good !
i love Amelia spunk , and how she's such a good friend to savannah . I also love ariannas character !
nicholas I think his ass is up to no good but who knows , he might change but I think it should be to only better himself





Date: Jan 17, 2020 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild
I read this story back in the day along with your other fic.
Is there a particular reason to why you upload like this when you already have the content? I really wish you would upload everything at once, it makes it easier as reader since I’m already losing interest in this story :(
Author's Response:
Hello. It's impossible to upload them all at once because they are saved as PDFs and not as Word documents. I lost the word documents years ago so I'm basically writing each chapter all over again as I upload them. I'm sorry to read that you are losing intetest. If that is truly the case, I'm sure there are thousands of other stories on this site that I'm sure will grab your interest more.





Date: Jan 16, 2020 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild
Great chapter. On the one hand the beginning of a dangerous coalition between two absolutely despicable men. They are so obvious in how sour and full of hatred they are. No matter what they try, they will definitely fail in the end. On the other hand the beautiful relationship between Mike and Mia. I love how caring he is and won’t take no for an answer. That was the most wonderful, insightful scene and says everything about the love they share and how well Michael knows Amelia. He can knows her like the back of his hand. Brilliant!!!!
And I was laughing and giggling when you described the scene when she made Michael sleep on the floor and he not only took the pillow but also the blanket with him. Their little back and forth is always so amusing and priceless. They are a perfect match. Love how respectful they are treating each other and it’s a precious thing to read about their blossoming, loving sex life. They are so incredible together and she is so responsive to him. Great writing! Loved every minute of it!!!ðŸ˜





Date: Jan 14, 2020 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild
I know Amelia must be pregnant after all this steamy lovemaking at the end of this chapter!!!! My word, Michael is surely making up for lost time!! 😂😂😂😂 he is not letting up on her and she's loving every minute of it. Sighs, I feel so bad for Savannah. It must hurt that she can't truly be happy like Amelia is because she has to settle for a marriage of convenience and not true love. Gifeon will never truly love her because he's not attracted to women. She's in a loveless relationship out of fear ðŸ™ðŸ™ðŸ™ i hope and pray Amelia can talk some sense into her.
I love the fact that Michael and Amelia are acting like a normal couple now, even the fights amuse me. She really had him sleeping on the floor lol! I still can't believe Michael didn't have any divorce papers in the envelope 😂🤣😂😂😂 He really tricked her and she wasn't having it. lol he really tried to weasel his way into bed with her 🤣🤣🤣 He thinks he's slick. Dirty feet Nicholas and nasty Mathew ugh. I just know they are gonna try and cause some mess that's gonna rollover into Michael and Amelia's relationship... I wish they would just go away for good.
I'm giving Amelia two more chapters till she's pregnant cuz all that sexing 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 is getting hot.
Another brilliant chapter!! Sorry for not reviewing the previous chapter. School is back in session and I'm busy busy busy 😫😩
Date: Jan 14, 2020 12:11 am Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild
Hot damn this chapter though ! ðŸ˜





Date: Jan 13, 2020 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Drives me wild
Getting steamy in the shower. Trouble is brewing but they can weather it!!!





Date: Jan 10, 2020 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Snow covered truths
They are so cute together! :3 i loved this sweet chapter!





Date: Jan 10, 2020 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Snow covered truths
Wow, there: Here is that peace of scum again.... I wonder what that useless, no good heir is up to.
I got to say that except for the beginning of the chapter the rest of it was fresh, delightful, sweet and funny. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love it when Mike and Amelia are fooling around and are so playful and honest with each other. This is most wonderful to witness. Thank you for this beautiful chapter.
Date: Jan 09, 2020 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Snow covered truths
Omgosh ðŸ˜!
I love there wife & husband relationship that you are establishing .
mike shouldn't have tricked Mia that way , but I'm glad she's not mad anymore & Michael is most definetely sleeping on the couch 😂