[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2021 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down
Lol yes Kallie tell him to quit being a lil hoe
Yes work for it Michael and Ivan please this time do make him work for it till you take him back
I'm sure it was Victor that attacked Ivan
Ivan should've ended Damien when he had the chance, I'm glad Alek arrived in time to safe him, poor Ivan, hopefully Alek can contact Michael to tell him Ivan is not dead (I hope he isn't Michael needs him)
Author's Response:
Yes, someone need it to tell Michael to quit being a lil hoe, and none other than Kallie, that was funy. Let us consider one little detail, Michael and Ivan came to the land on the lion nest. Rome Italy, where Damien rules, the perfect place to bring Ivan down. It was vengeance for Damien eventhough at the end he lost his little game by losing his life. Now, the Italian Mafia will seak revenge for Damien's death, and the Mafia will blame Michael. Indeed, Michael will be in deep trouble. Nonetheless, let us not forget that another powerful man is obsessed with Michael and Viktor will protect Michael from the Mafia. And no, darling, Viktor was not responsible for Ivan's Attack. Viktor does not know that Ivan was his biggest rival. We will see darling, whether Ivan made it or not. Let us not forget that Michael is the only main character... gosh, this was the longest feedback!... haha!... Thank you darling, kisses!
Date: Jun 02, 2021 09:05 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down
I am excited when Damien came back. He is so crazy but his existence makes story more dramatic
Author's Response:
Yes, in deed there is nothing more excited than a good villian nonetheless, Damien is dead but we have another bad guy worse than Damien. Stay tuned you will see who's this new villian.
Date: Jun 02, 2021 09:03 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down
He must be alive 'cause he is a main character
Author's Response:
Nice to see you back! thank you. Some times the main character must die, let us not for get that Michael is the main character. However, stay tuned to see what would happen.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2021 07:43 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down
Oh my gosh of course Ivan will survive! My heart was bleeding.Was Damian dead?Ivan was a delicate human being too and sometimes I almost forgot about it . I love this guy so much! I just wonder how long it will take for him to recover? I just can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
Damien is done, Alek killed him when he got there just in time, along with his men. And yes, Ivan is a very delicate soul and Michael should've taken him for granted, but now he will suffer. You will see my dear... thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2021 04:34 am Title: Chapter 68: Gun Down
Pobre Iván ojalá esté bien y pobre Michael será duro para el que lÃo esto cada vez se pone bueno excelente capÃtulo ojalá todo mejore para ellos dos
Author's Response:
A si es, esto se ponde cada bes mas duro, y lo que biene aun mas. lla veras, my dear; thank you so much as always.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2021 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night
Gosh, Michael better watch out for Viktor, I don't have a good feeling about him and what he did to his wife. Thank you for keeping your stories going, it's very much appreciated. I really love reading them!
Author's Response:
Yes, he better watch out for him, you will see who Viktor turns out to be. Thank's to all of you who come back to review my dear. Kisses!
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2021 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night
Poor Ivan, he's clearly Inlove and wants to do everything he can to help and protect Michael who's being stubborn but maybe it's the possible pregnancy that makes him moody and mean towards Ivan
Author's Response:
Ah... perhaps, but it's to early, well, I shall tell you anyway, that night they conceived. A lot of things will haven before they find out, that will come in future chapters. Thank you my darling... kisses!
Date: May 16, 2021 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night
Well I guess we are going to have another Damien..or even worse
Author's Response:
Indeed my friend, just wait and see. Nice to see your review, thank you.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2021 09:51 am Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night
Oh poor Ivan I want him to go mess up with Andrew or anybody else.Just let Michael cry!But maybe Michael would have got pregnant by that time. Michael needs pain to grow up.But I doubt Ivan would give Michael the chance to learn a lesson.
This is a great story and perhaps the only slash MJfic Updating on line darling.Thank you so much for bringing this to us.
Author's Response:
Umm, maybe he will have a fling with Andrew, who knows. Michael have to suffer, you will see darling. And thank you so much. Kisses!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2021 05:05 am Title: Chapter 67: After A Passionate Night
Hay Michael cada dÃa se le complica más las cosas con Iván pobres los dos creo que está es la prueba de fuego para Mike no rendirse ante los deseos y serle fiel a Iván. Me dejaste con ganas de más buena historia chica.
Author's Response:
Si, cada dia se le complica mas todo. lla veras lo que biene. Thank you so much darling.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2021 08:01 am Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife
How did i miss this update??😓😆 Great chapter once again
Author's Response:
Thank you, darling. I'm glad you saw it.
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2021 08:57 am Title: Chapter 7: A Kiss At The Cafe'
I didn’t notice that Michael was so flirtatious at the beginning..well now I know he didn’t change one bit.Every time he was serious though
Author's Response:
Haha, yes he is flirty little devil. I'm glad you liked the changes. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2021 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife
Oh boy the drama! Well Michael made a decision and now he's facing the consequences. I'm very curious to know Victors true intentions, I don't trust that guy at all. Thank goodness Michael has Ivan at his side looking out for him.
Author's Response:
Ah! You will see, darling, you will see. Also check out chapters,1 through 6. I have done modifications to those chapters and chapters 7 is almost done probably tonight. I will do this to most of the chapters. You don't have to leave a review, just check it out and let me know what you think in a new chapter review. Thank you 🙠for your lovely reviews, darling.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2021 09:24 am Title: Chapter 6: Colliding With Damien
Appreciate your work darling! I am so happy for the new edition!And you rewrote The Male Escort too. I got to read several chapters continuously .Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you 🙠darling, and about the THE MALE ESCORT, I have not done any modifications, I will do The time traveler first.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2021 01:02 am Title: Chapter 66: Confronting a Furious Wife
Something tells me that Viktor will do more to "quiet" his wife down...
Mike, Ivan is only trying to protect you no matter what the cause is â¤â¤â¤
Author's Response:
Ah!... yes, you got it... just wait and see, my dear. :-) thank you...