Date: Nov 24, 2018 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Another sweet chapter. A priest? What will Becca do? She has feelings for him far beyond a friend. But they are young. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
thanks, I look forward to unraveling more. thanks for reading
Date: Nov 24, 2018 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
An awkward moment I’m sure for Mike! They are definitely developing feelings for each other.
Date: Nov 24, 2018 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww cute chapter. Becca and Mike are forming a wonderful bond with each other.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2018 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4
They could be the perfect match if they admitted it and he could do charity work if the priest thing doesn't work out
Author's Response:
so true in both aspects. there's other things he could do if he really wanted to help other and be with Becca. he could have his cake and eat it too. thanks for reviewing
Date: Nov 23, 2018 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Maybe you could do a chapter from Michaels POV? To see what he feels? Overall this story is sooo good. It’s so different from the others. In all your stories you portray Michael as what I feel he was like, and what I’m sure others have felt as well!! Hopefully you’ll get to update soon!!! :)
Author's Response:
no worries soon the entire story will flip to his POV then it will get interesting. I'm glad you like the story. i try to show what I think is the human side of him or at least the side he never got to live. thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey there, tinker,
I like your story! I think you are doing very well. You are so far conveying it all very wholeheartedly and realistic and it is very cute . I like the bond Mike and Becca have. I would like to have more updates from you. Thank you so far.
Author's Response:
thanks for the vote of confidence. glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3
I soooooo love how Becca mom told her about becoming a woman. I never had the talk with mine, I sorta just learned on my own. It was listening to a mom talking to me even though I know about it already.
It it was funny how she told Michael about manly parts and his reaction. Priceless. Lol. He was serious about not liking her that way at first.
but now they’re starting to see each other differently 👀
NORA! Smfh what a racist girl. My parents always told me you’re never born racist. You’re taught. If that was the case, why her parents let her come to Becca sleep over. Did they not know Michael would be there? And I hate how she and the other girls talk about his acne. I’m sure they had them. And when she said “my daddy would never let me date a negro” I was pissed. She didn’t have to hurt his feelings like that. But watch, she may want him in the future. Mhmmmm I’m waiting.
Amazing chapter. You deserve more views and reviews. I understand what you mean. It doesn’t take time for the plot to build to be more interesting. I hope you don’t be discouraged and give up. I’m starting to really love this story so far.
Author's Response:
Sadly most people just want sex scenes. I like to build the relationship first. it's so hard starting a new story. thanks for the positive vibe. I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 06:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I love ready chapter of younger Michael with a girl. It’s so innocent and sweet. And I tell ya about these kids and climbing trees smh lol. I’m glad he saved her tho. And she saved him. Amazing start of a friend ship.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m ready I’m ready *spongebob voice* (I’m 23 don’t judge me lol)
i see there’s more chapters so I’m going to read
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww Becca is growing up and becoming a woman now
Poor Michael, it's sad some people (like Nora) can be so mean
Becca is right Michael shouldn't listen to Rick or anyone else telling him to something
Her mother already predicted that she would like Michael one day and looks like he likes her too
Author's Response:
They are all going through growing pains. I know i'm progressing but need to just give glimpses to get them where they are decades later. thanks for sticking with me.
Date: Nov 17, 2018 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how you’re building the story with background of the characters. Getting to know the characters is always the best part.
Rebrcca defending Michael at the end was so sweet. She is such a good friend. It broke my heart when Nora said those things to Michael and made him cry. He didn’t deserve that.
The connection between Michael and Rebecca has finally made its appearance and i can’t wait to see how it goes for them through the years
Great story so far I’ve read each of your stories. I love them all. You’re such an amazing writer. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your continued loyality and praise. I'm not the best writer out there but at least I try to give my best and am constantly working on my craft. I'm glad you like it so far. their relationship is a bunch of building blocks.
Date: Nov 17, 2018 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is really interesting!! It’s definitely different than the others. I hope you update soon!!! :)
Author's Response:
thanks, I'm glad you like it. I try to update 1x a week. I have 8 chapters written and work on them every day. it takes time so I appreciate you support and keep the reviews coming. they motivate me to write more.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2018 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww this was sweet! â¤ï¸ Looks like the 3 are going to have a really strong bond as they get older. I look forward to reading the rest of it. And I don't know if you've read my last review on the last update of Fall Again, but I really mean it. 😊 Look forward to the next update!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2018 12:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor Michael having lost his parents and hurting his head but I'm glad he has friends like Becca and Rick
Date: Nov 06, 2018 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
thanks for your help in taking an early peak.