Date: Jan 27, 2018 07:23 pm Title: Becoming BAD ~ Part I
Grr u and the cliffhangers!! Lol but yesss this is getting so good i love the mysteriousness of michael and i wonder where he's taking her😯.. guess we'll find out next!
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2018 05:45 pm Title: Becoming BAD ~ Part I
Wow yesss this is so good and intriguing I could feel her every emotion as she so thoroughly described her feelings to a "T".I can only imagine what that van ride is going to be like between them.I just want her and Michael to finally have their first conversation.This is gonna be so lit when they finally are alone together. lOve this so much good job.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 12:19 pm Title: Dumb Luck
I'll definitely read this story!. I bet you'll surprise us; same as "Underneath his clothes". Another masterpiece :) Keep on with the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's always fun to see one of my previous readers return to another story! :)
This story is not really gonna be like "Underneath His Clothes", though there might be some similarities, mainly in the early chapters.
I do like a mysterious Michael, also because that's what I feel he was like in real life... And for this story, I really want to write about what I think might possibly have happened if Michael and a girl like Josie were put together in this situation, at this point in time, in real life. I just want to take my time, and have some fun with it. Let the characters sort of take me wherever I feel they would go, you know?
Okay, that's enough rambling for now :D Hope to see you again in one of the next chapters! ;)
Date: Jan 17, 2018 03:00 am Title: Dumb Luck
I've been a fan of your work for a while. I really like this story and hope it gets to be completed. Keep up the good work.
Date: Jan 13, 2018 04:13 pm Title: Look Who's Changing Tune
Yess this is gettin more and more intense we just need them two to get the chemistry going lol. I enjoyed it keep it up!
Date: Dec 31, 2017 12:56 pm Title: I Just Can't Stop...Messing Up
Ooh he is soo mysterious and yet kind! Not too harsh at all. I hope they get to practice face to face
Date: Dec 30, 2017 08:02 pm Title: I Just Can't Stop...Messing Up
I think Josie is a bit nervous that Michael will be upset that she forgot the words. I am certain he was just looking at the pretty girl she is. After all Michael is a full blooded man!
Looking firward to more
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2017 05:45 pm Title: Dumb Luck
Wow I have to say this is really freakin good seems like you've done your homework.The first few chaptes makes me feel like i'm along for the ride on the 'BAD Tour'.Want more can't wait.
Author's Response:
I have to say, I'm so happy you should say this, cause that's exactly what I wanted to achieve with this story. I really wanted to write it as if I was really in it, back in the 80s, experiencing the Bad Tour alongside Michael, and I really want my readers to feel the same way. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! It's always very much appreciated!
Date: Dec 12, 2017 10:45 am Title: Dumb Luck
Interesting start. Looking forward to seeing where it goes!