




Date: Sep 08, 2023 02:49 am Title: Chapter 16
Hahaha! Omg this was great!
Author's Response:
Hahaha...Thanks!
Date: Oct 08, 2022 09:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Probably the best cutest book I’ve found yet on this site. I can’t wait to read more
Author's Response:
Why thank you very much for liking it ^.^
Date: Dec 01, 2020 08:13 pm Title: Interlude and Chapter 1.
I absolutely loved this book
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot.
Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:35 am Title: Chapter 2
This fanfiction is like a Jackson 5 special. I like it! Kind of like Back to the Future? It's really nice.
Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:34 am Title: Interlude and Chapter 1.
Okay, so my question is, why are there 3000 reads and no reviews?? Well, I'll do the honors!
The description of the amusement park was captivating. I have never seen "inflamed" used in that type of description before, but it definitely works!
This was a great opener. My only complaint is that the quotes weren't paragraphed for each new speaker. But that's okay! :)