[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2017 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, finally...Maybe Layla's not as stubborn as I first thought
I think Michael should tell her how he feels about her, and see what she says...he obviously has feelings for her..
Author's Response:
Time will tell if he tells her
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2017 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Layla needs to relax and let Michael handle things. It doesn't hurt to be pampered once in awhile.
Author's Response:
She has her reasons but yes she could relax a little
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2017 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Man she is stubborn. She doesn't know Michael that well yet. He wasn't going to just let her leave.
Author's Response:
Yes she is. She will eventually get to know him. Nope he wasn't going to just let her go like that
Date: Jul 09, 2017 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great storyline I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank You
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
OUCH...I've never seen Michael so upset before
Maybe Michael and Layla can reach some sort of understanding about his wanting to help, and her wanting to be self-supporting...
Author's Response:
Yes it really hurt what she said
Yes let's hope so
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2017 06:31 am Title: Chapter 4
I hope she doesn't leave again and actually accept his help somewhat. Cause Michael isn't going to stop finding them and bringing them back lol. Sam senses his buddy's feelings from a mile away smh.
Author's Response:
Yes let's hope she stays this time, lol indeed he won't stop finding them and bringing them back. Yes he does :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2017 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't blame Michael for being upset. Of course his feelings would be hurt. I understand she wants to do things on her own but she has to start somewhere and Michael is giving her that opportunity.
Author's Response:
Yes all he did was trying to help her and yes she has to begin somewhere and Michael can help her
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Only sam can manage to get the pancake into the sink then on the damn pan smh lol. he is too cocky for his own good thankfully michael is there to pop his ego when it's needed. I'm glad Leyla is taking the chance to be catious can't blame her but michael won't let them go just yet.
Author's Response:
Ikr? Only Sam lol. Yes thankfully Michael is there to keep him in check :). Yes can't blame her, indeed he won't let them go just yet
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2017 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a sweetheart Michael is for letting them stay as long as they need to...and for not asking questions about Layla and Mile's relationship...
Generosity, and open mindedness are two things I love about the man :)
Look forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
Yes he's sweet like that
Me too :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2017 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah Michael the gentleman every woman wants and can't have lol. Such a giving soul.
Author's Response:
Ikr?
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2017 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww it's been so long since Layla has had or stayed anywere decent that she doesn't know how to act. Glad Michael made her eat and stay.
Author's Response:
Yes poor thing. Yes Michael is caring like that
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter :).
Ik Sam is just being protective because he cares, but I think Michael has more 'street smarts' than he's given credit for
Lucky chance meeting for Michael and Layla and her son (that goes without saying) :)
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Yes he's just being protective, agree
Yes Layla and Miles are lucky to have met Michael
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2017 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael saves another one :) Great start.
Author's Response:
Yes ;) thank you
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
The plot is interesting and it wasn't a bad start, I hope you keep going. ☺
Author's Response:
Thank You, I will
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2017 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not a bad start. Let's hope something can be done...and Sam I agree with but is an idiot at the same time sigh lol.
Author's Response:
Thank You, yes let's hope so. Lol