Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:22 am Title: Chapter 7
loved the chapter and love all characters as I do as well in all chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad to hear that
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 6
I liked the chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:14 am Title: Chapter 5
good chapter the characters are very good
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
I liked the chapter very much
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that
Date: Sep 02, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
very good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 02, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how the characters interact and how its dealing with an every day topic very well
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 02, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
the chapter is well written and layed out I liked it I like how Michael is being portrayed
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2017 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad it's all chill now that the secret is out and they settled it. Miles is a good kid accepting his mum and michael together. Sam is something else lol.
Author's Response:
Yes finally the secret is our. Yes Miles is a great kid :). Lol ikr?
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2017 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
Sam's suggestion...OMG! So typical LOL
WOW...can just imagine Layla's make over :D...
Can't wait to find out Michael's reaction when he sees Layla next time :D
Author's Response:
Sam is Sam smh lol
Me too
We shall see ;)
Date: Aug 31, 2017 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
Sì è risolto tutto per il meglio Layla e suo figlio Miles faranno parte per sempre nella vita di Michael. Michael è meglio rispetto ai cosiddetti genitori di Layla perché si prenderà cura di lei e anche del cosiddetto fidanzato diceva di amarla non era così perché non voleva sapere quando era incinta. Con Michael è diverso sarà un ottimo papà
Author's Response:
Sì, sono d'accordo che Michael si prenderà cura di lei
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2017 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This whole chapter had me rolling😂. Mike is such a savage especially when he's like "you're not on the menu so I'll have enchiladas" and it's very comic, the way Michael is low-key roasting Sam to the waitress and Sam has no idea what they're saying😂. Poor Miles - tough as he is, he seems like a good kid who is very protective of his mother :')
Author's Response:
Yes Michaels savage when he wants to lol
Sam probably deserved it lol
Yes poor Miles, he only has his mother so yes hes protective over her
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2017 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
WOW...good thing Michael showed up with his bike...an HOUR's walk with all those GROCERIES????? I found myself relating to Layla as I was reading this...I've walked home from bus stops with my arms full before, and some of the distances have FELT like an hour LOL.
Hm...did someone tell Tito Miles was Layla's son, or did Tito make that assumption?
I've always liked Tito :).
Hm...sounds like Layla is 'getting to' Michael... ;)
Author's Response:
Ikr?
He assumed because Miles told TJ he had to ask his mother and Michael
He's a good guy
Yes she is :)
Date: Aug 26, 2017 09:00 am Title: Chapter 22
La prima volta di Layla è stata romantica perché Michael l'ha resa tale, doveva aspettarsi questa reazione da parte di Michael non gli aveva detto la verità riguardo a Miles. Chi lo sa se Michael inseguito ritornerà da lei e le crederà
Author's Response:
Michael è ferito che non gli ha detto la verità
Date: Aug 23, 2017 04:35 am Title: Chapter 21
Finalmente si è lasciata alle spalle il brutto passato e si lascia andare con Michael
Author's Response:
Sì lei ha fatto
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2017 08:38 am Title: Chapter 21
That ending was SO cute aw :')
Author's Response:
Thank you :)