Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:55 am Title: Chapter 22
liked the chapter
Author's Response:
Glad to hear
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:48 am Title: Chapter 21
another good chapter I like the relationship/romance with Michael and Layla
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:46 am Title: Chapter 20
enjoyed this chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:43 am Title: Chapter 19
good chapter and a great story all round
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:37 am Title: Chapter 18
great chapter loving the whole story and like Michael and Layla together
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:34 am Title: Chapter 17
good chapter I like the friendship between janet and Layla
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:33 am Title: Chapter 16
very good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:30 am Title: Chapter 15
good chapter again I like the evolving of the characters I also like meeting other charaters like michaels family
Author's Response:
Me too
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:19 am Title: Chapter 14
I loved this chapter I love the evolving relationship between Michael and Layla
Author's Response:
They're getting closer
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:15 am Title: Chapter 13
very good chapter I'm liking the story very much
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:10 am Title: Chapter 12
nice chapter I liked having janet in it aswell
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 01:02 am Title: Chapter 11
good chapter dave is a good character like all the others and he seems funny
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes he is
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:49 am Title: Chapter 10
good chapter as are all others I like all characters as I have continuasly said I like Michael and miles interacting
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm glad you do
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:39 am Title: Chapter 9
like the chapter very much love all the characters in all chapters I like Layla and her son I also like how Michael and Layla are in each chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 8
good chapter and all characters are very good I liked one of michael's brothers being added in
Author's Response:
Thank you