Date: Nov 18, 2016 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 9 Crossed the wrong line
Can't wait to see what he has up his sleeve!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2016 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 8 Give into Me
I hope he doesn't go through with hurting the mother, even if she is a big ol' pain for now. If Y/N ever found out that would ruin any chance he had (i think)... I really do like how unique this story is tho. It's really a fun read xD
Author's Response: Well Michael being a professional she would actually never find out unless he would tell her which most likely won't happen lol. Glad you enjoy it though!
Date: Nov 17, 2016 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 8 Give into Me
Her after kissing the secret admirer burns to discover his identity. And love will do anything to meet her and her mother to prevent her to hinder it and she is in love with him will do anything to meet him and prevent his hinder mother
Author's Response: Um, no she isn't in love with him...
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2016 11:10 am Title: Chapter 8 Give into Me
Oh, how beautiful this chapter is! To be continued! Finally there was something more between the two â¤â¤â¤
So you tried to learn Spanish?! Like, it's pretty easy, you know?! Sometimes songs help a lot to learn a language. Hey, how long have you been an MJ fan?
P.S.: Usei o tradutor outra vez hihi
Author's Response: Yeah I took four years in high school qnd it wasn't that easy. I couldnt get used to how things were sort of backwards. Songs are easy just not words for some reason.
Date: Nov 17, 2016 10:41 am Title: Chapter 8 Give into Me
Lol Michael is losing it. This just gets better and better!
Date: Nov 15, 2016 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tired of the same old thing
i agree what the other person said. i like how it's not typically the big super star trope and your writing is very easy to read, which i like. i am loving this story so far and i think michael being a surgeon is a great idea. i wonder what's going to happen next. keep it up!
Date: Nov 15, 2016 03:45 am Title: Chapter 7 Weird Things Happening
She is beggining to understand under the disguise is his doctor how he will react when he will reveal his identity? If there will be meetings should take care not to be discovered by his overprotective mother would ruin everything.
Author's Response: Umm I guess you'll have to read to find out?
Date: Nov 13, 2016 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 Weird Things Happening
Hey, do you have Facebook, Twitter or anything?
P.S.: Falei em inglês 😂😂
Author's Response: https://www.facebook.com/kaitlyn.m.carroll Ei, eu entendi você!
Date: Nov 13, 2016 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 7 Weird Things Happening
Você iria desistir na primeira regra hahaha, sério, se você acha que o inglês é complicado, você não imagina o português, sabe é cheio de regras de pontuação, acentuação, plural, singular, etc. Te digo isso por que isso é horrÃvel, você passa quase 10 anos aprendendo sua própria lÃngua pra no final esquecer mais da metade que aprendeu.
Author's Response: Sim Inglês é difÃcil o suficiente, eu ainda estou aprendendo todas as pontuações e tudo para ele para escrever e outras coisas. Eu tentei levar quatro anos de espanhol e ainda mal sei uma coisa.
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 Weird Things Happening
Que incrÃvel esse capÃtulo! Foi demais, mal posso esperar um contato mais "Ãntimo" desses dois! â¤ðŸ˜ˆâ¤
Você deveria ter vindo ao Brasil antes da copa, sabe?! Porque depois de 2014 o Brasil entrou em uma crise que eu nunca tinha visto uma igual, só ouvido falar das que teve em tempos de ditadura.
Author's Response: Oh sim eu desejo que eu poderia ter, eu não tenho o dinheiro para ir lá, mas eu gostaria de ir lá algum dia. Parece bonito lá, embora eu teria que realmente aprender Português jaja.
Date: Nov 12, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 Drastic Measures
Goodbye Andrew will no longer hurt her. She reacted positively when he learned that Dr. Jackson is attracted to her and useless her mom tells her doctor change because it is also clear she attracted him.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2016 08:02 am Title: Chapter 6 Drastic Measures
Wow! Que capÃtulo foi esse?! Muito bom! Mal posso esperar o próximo, quero muito um beijo deles â¤â¤â¤
Wow! Ohio, quanta sorte tu tens, imagina o quão legal é morar nos USA?! Queria muito ter esse tipo de sorte, porque né, o Brasil não é lá essas coisas.
Author's Response: Na verdade, eu sempre quis ir para o Brasil, eh Ohio é ok é apenas plana terra e não muito emocionante para ser honesto. Estou feliz que você esteja curtindo a história!
Date: Nov 12, 2016 04:31 am Title: Chapter 6 Drastic Measures
Wow this is getting so good!
Date: Nov 12, 2016 04:18 am Title: Chapter 6 Drastic Measures
I'm liking this story. It's very interesting so far. It kind of reminds me of a story that was on here where Michael was an erotomaniac and was obsessed with his neighbor. It was removed, but I really enjoyed it. Were you the author of that story as well?
Author's Response: No I was not the author of that story. I didn't know there was a story like that on here. But, I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: Nov 11, 2016 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Tired of the same old thing
Keep on going! I love this story. Please don't delete it.