Date: Nov 07, 2016 05:03 am Title: Interlude: Tears In Rain
You made me so curiuos. I really like the way you write. Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 06:04 pm Title: Interlude: Tears In Rain
Awww! Poor Michael! He had thought he had all the time in the world with his wife and now he wishes he could go back and spend more time with her because he didn't do it enough. Think you can do a flashback of when they first met?
Author's Response:
Much of Clara and Michael's relationship is going to be only hinted at until Part 3. At that point all will be revealed. But yes, I do plan on showing how they met. :)
Date: Oct 26, 2016 01:32 pm Title: Prologue
This sounds so interesting!! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: Oct 25, 2016 08:51 am Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 3: Blood Is Thicker Than Water
It was so nice to see you'd updated. Your story gives me pretty much heavy and dismall feelings. But I am still looking forward to reading more :). I am so curious to see how Michael is gonna be and find out who that 'friend' is. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I admit that I'm not all that crazy myself about the depressing mood the story has developed. Part 2 should be a bit lighter in tone.





Date: Oct 24, 2016 05:32 pm Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 3: Blood Is Thicker Than Water
Poor boys! Never can have a normal life. I understand he was upset but Toby shouldn't have blamed his cousin for anything. Exciting drama! Keep it up!




Date: Oct 09, 2016 10:47 am Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 1: Funeral For A King
Cant wait for the next chappie!
Date: Oct 08, 2016 06:07 am Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 1: Funeral For A King
Now this is new. I hope you have flashbacks or whatnot of MJs marriage to the boys mother and all. Something tells me she's dead. Also, I'm dying to find out who has MJ and what will happen to him next! Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
You have good intuition. Thank you for reviewing! :D
Date: Oct 08, 2016 01:40 am Title: Part I, Lazarus; Chapter 1: Funeral For A King
Interesting! Your story has a pretty unique idea.
Honesyly speaking, I don't know who this "friend" is, but if anyone could help Michael, even that mean like what happened, I would gladly accept that. Because to me, Michael's well being and happiness are the most important. But *sigh* it's all about "if", right?
Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Michael doesn't know the "friend"'s true intentions. For all he knows, they may be trying to exploit him or even put his life in danger under the guise of helping him. He'll just have to wait and see what they do before he can begin to trust them.
Thank you for reviewing. :)