Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2020 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jan 13, 2020 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was written beautifully. thank you.
Reviewer: BeChristine990 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jan 27, 2017 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww :( this made me so sad, his heartbreak is captured beautifully, however. Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: KNM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Oct 26, 2016 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel like this really puts a visual out for how Michael was feeling!
Reviewer: Thatkliqkid Signed 
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Date: Oct 26, 2016 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
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Poor Michael, you expressed his missed childhood and the fear of his father really well.
Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2016 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Sep 21, 2016 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start