Reviewer: briarae92 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2020 05:09 am Title: Chapter 19

I love me a good sex scene (and, yes I am over age LOL)

Reviewer: wendymj0307 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 04:23 am Title: Chapter 18

I really love your story! Could you please update soon?

Author's Response:

Working on it!

Reviewer: LadyPan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 07:40 am Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for writing this story. I loved reading about Twinkle and Michael the last days. Your story is well written and I realy liked the creation of the characters and especially the plot idea about the job at MJJ Production. Your style of writing is great, you are able to create pictures in my mind while reading, that's why reading this story was a lot of fun and I hope you go on writing :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and your sweet words.  I want to apologize for not updating in so long, but some health issues and some laptop problems time got away from me.  I will be back to finish this story!

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2017 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2

I love that you're writing in the 'first person' so we see things from Twinkle's perspective :)

Oh btw, I will be putting 'The Beautiful One' (the story you've read, and said you enjoyed) on sale on Amazon.com shortly after the first of the year :). It will be in paperback, and Kindle versions :). I'll give you the link as soon as I've published it. Meanwhile, take care, and have Merry Christmas, and a Happy 2018 :)

Author's Response:

I am sorry that I have not updated, just a lot of healt issues between me and my husband this year!  I have the next chapter almost done if I can just find a few minutes to complete it and post it!  I am looking forward to purchasing The Beautiful One.  Let me know when you have it completed!

 

Thanks for Reading and commenting!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 18

I decided to read the story, I've seen it around when I updated but finally read it now, 

 

I'm glad they both admitted their feelings to each other and I'm sure they'll have a great future together they truly are meant to be together, they're already a cute couple and I'm sure Michael will make her first time special he's sweet like that 

Author's Response:

 Yes, they have both admitted their feelings to each other.  I am sure Michael will make her first time romantic and special.  Thanks for reading and commenting and giving Blessings a chance.

 

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 18

oh my gosh, i honestly love every moment of this story, i thought i was going to be the one to pass out reading it, lol! i think its so sweet they have gotten so close so quickly and they are in real trouble of getting caught, made me giggle actually, so funny! How can Twinkle claim to be such a good girl when she sneeked a peek, lol that made me giggle too. I'm sure when they come to their first time, it will definitely be made special by Michael, you can see already that he adores her, maybe a lovely meal and dancing at neverland, the whole place to themselves! sitting out under the stars, now that would be romantic! 

Author's Response:

I am sure Michael will have a romantic time planned for them and will make her first time extremely special.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Author's Response:

I am sure Michael will have a romantic time planned for them and will make her first time extremely special.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2017 08:42 am Title: Chapter 18

Finally they got together! It only took 18 chapters. Let me say it once more.Finally!. 

I'm so glad they got together and wow twinkle um checked. I didn't expect her to be so bold. I'm just glad they can communicate and be there for each other. That huge salary? I would have gladly taken it from Mike 😂. At least she has enough to all that's need for her sisters and them to be a family. It's 

Author's Response:

Finally, they got together!  Yeah, Twinkle was a brave soul to check.  It was a huge salary, but far too much for a starting salary, she didn't want to be a gold digger!  LOL!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: countrygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

I'm so glad they finally made up ! Her nickname for Michael " Little Star " so cute ! 😉 ⭐️

Great update ! 😀

Author's Response:

Finally, these two have talked and made up.  Yes, Michael is endearing and always loved to call people close to him a nickname.  Thanks for reading and commenting.