Date: Jul 08, 2017 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
you captured neverland perfectly. it was just as I pictured it to be. thanks for updating
Author's Response:
It would be grand to have visited Neverland with Michael as a tour guide wouldn't it? It was quite easy to visualize a lot with all the wonderful picutes and vidoes out there of Neverland! I just followed my imagination! Thanks for reading and commenting Tink!
Date: Jul 08, 2017 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yesssss! Another chapter. I find it so cute of how Michael acts like a teenager when in love. Thanks for updating!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2017 06:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael's place sounds so magical with all the animals I wouldn't really go near the animals especially the snakes. When the albino snake was left on her shoulders I felt a shiver run down my spine. No thanks I don't like snakes lol. Finally Michael asked her on a date took those two long enough to get it going on SMH lol.
Author's Response:
So sorry I missed your coment when rresponding to comments! Yes, it sent shivers down my spine while writing it! I hate snakes! I don't mind looking at them from a distance but to have it on my shoulder NO THANKS! Yes, he did ask her on a date! I wonder what will happen? Will they both finally admit their feelings for each other? Only time will tell!
Date: Jul 08, 2017 06:09 am Title: Chapter 12
Just finished reading your story today and I'm addicted!!!!!!!!!
I will be really happy to read more of it!
Can't wait to see what is gonna happen in Neverland!
don't let us wait to long!
And thanks for sharing your stories!
Author's Response:
Thank-you so much for your kind words! I am glad you like Blessings! I will be posting the next chapter soon. I had one direction for this story, but now I am going a little bit of a different route, so it is just a struggle trying ot tie up the loose ends that I started! Thanks for taking the time to read!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2017 01:04 am Title: Chapter 12
such a cute chapter, i loved the idea of walking round Michael's zoo, you couldn't have better company than that! and there is definitely a spark between them, everytime they talk they are also having this inner dialogue going on because each one is nervous around the other, which is so cute, loving this, can't wait to see what happens next! loved her reaction to bubbles, and his to her, so adorable!
Author's Response:
It sure would be amazing to have walked around the Neverland Zoo with the best tour guide ever wouldn't it? There is a spark between them but will Twinkle and Michael act on it? That is the million dollar question! Thanks for reading!
Date: Jun 19, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love this story. It's very realistic.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I hope you continue to enjoy Blessings!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
The Neverland tour I can't wait to see what happens between Michael and Twinkle next. This is such a great story and thank you for posting it here as I mentioned i never got to finish reading before.
Author's Response:
Thank-you for taking the time to read! I appreciate it so much! I'm tweaking the Neverland chapter. Hope you enjoy it when it's posted!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
Suzanne is not to be trusted and Twinkle needs to watch her back. I think there are definite mutual feelings. I don't think Michael will be mad if they get him in the water attack. He won't like losing but he will see it as all in fun and might even plot how to get them back for next time. lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
I don't like Suzanne. I don't think she has romantic feelings for Michael at all she just wants to use him to get in good with her Dad again. I think Michael sees through her. I know it's hard but Gina and Crystal need to remember this is her job. I hope Crystal remembers to behave if she gets to talk to Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 11:53 am Title: Chapter 8
Lucky girl Twinkle is. Anyone of us would die in her shoes. I can't wait to see what happens between her and Michael at Neverland. No wonder Michael doesn't like Suzanne she is throwing herself at him!!!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't we all love to be in a Twinkles shoes! Next stop Neverland!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 11:11 am Title: Chapter 7
Michael is human and a man lol I think Michael needs a cold shower haha
Date: Jun 15, 2017 11:06 am Title: Chapter 11
ahhh i can't wait for the nect chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'm working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 10:55 am Title: Chapter 6
I think Michael wants to come back to the office and see her before she leaves. These two definitely are attracted to each other.
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think Michael definitely has an interest since he was snooping around in her office.
Author's Response:
Hope yoiu continue to enjoy Blessings. Working on the next update!
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2017 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think Michael will eventually get her interested in her music again. A very nice meeting she was quite surprised he was there playing the piano.