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Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 11:33 am Title: Chapter 14

ohhhh you pair of teasers! lol only a dream and it was getting good too, i still hope they will be talking to one another the next day at the childrens event. At least their on the same page in their dreams, can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Is it a dream or reality?  These two need to talk but will they?  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 04:34 am Title: Chapter 14

This could be a dream or it could be real it's hard to tell with these two. I just wish they would leave professionalism aside for outside people and be together! All this self doubt makes me want to strangle them both lol. You like each other ugh lol. I hope no one gets in the way to make a wedge even further between them lol.



Author's Response:

Yes it is hard to tell with these two!  They need to talk, but will they both seem quite stubborn.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

Folie a deux down to a t? I know of joint hallucinations, but not to that degree of similarity...



Author's Response:

Some dream huh?  These two when will  they finally give into their feelings?  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: mjsminipyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2017 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

Finally, they kissed!



Author's Response:

Yes, they did and Twinkle ran.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  

Reviewer: Imogenmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww poor Michael.This chapter was cute!!!!

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 13

oh my gosh, i swear my heart almost stopped as he leaned in to kiss twinkle!, what a great chapter, i hope there will won't be any awkwardness the next day at the childrens event, oh gosh i hope he won't be angry! Poor Twinkle, she was only doing what she felt was right, i hope they get another chance to talk things out or get "together", this story has me well and truly sucked in, lol! Just love it!!!



Author's Response:

They really need to talk things out, especially affter that kiss! What do you think might happen at the Children's event?  Twinkle is conflicted  the kiss felt right but she was his employeee and she knows this job is important to her.  She needs to think about her sister!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ouch, Michael was really too fast in showing his feelings. Poor Twinkle has to fight against her feelings and focus on her work and gaining custody of her sister

 Maybe somehow Michael finds about her situation and finds a way to her heart while helping her.



Author's Response:

Thats right!  Twinkle needs to adopt her sister!  She needs her job.   Will this kiss ruin her chances of staying at MJJ Productions?  Let's hope he does find a way to her heart or has he already found it!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 13

I see awkward exchanges in their future until one or both of them admit their true feelings.  great to see you update  thanks :)



Author's Response:

Oh yes, there are going to be many awkward exchanges in their future before they admit their true feelings.. Thanks again for all of your help!  I would of never got to this point without your encouragment!

Reviewer: Clsflames Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

Please please continue this story! I can't wait till the next update!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm going to try and update as regurlary as I can!

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh for goodness twinkle! He kissed you cause he has feelings for you! You enjoyed it and you didn't lead him on. You both have these pent up feelings that lead to this moment. Aghh I got pissed off lol. They should act professional and leave it to the end of the day to talk.my rant is done lol



Author's Response:

He did kiss her, and she enjoyed it yet but that doesn't change the fact that she is his employee!   Does that make it right?  Remember Twinkle has a sister she is trying to adopt, so her job is extremely important to her!  Thanks Lorry for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

I forget what the forum was called but it closed.



Author's Response:

It could of been a few!  So many forums are closed now!  so sad!

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

Michael such a tease with the snakes.  Oh he definitely likes her and she him.  I can't wait to see what hapens next.  Bubbles might get jealous lol.



Author's Response:

Sure was a tease wasn't he!   They definitely are smitten with each other and there is an attraction but will either act on it?  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow Nancy, this is beautiful

Author's Response:

Thanks Mary for taking the time to read!

Reviewer: zsofia2999 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:14 am Title: Chapter 12

Great story! I can't wait to read the next chapters.

Author's Response:

Thank-you!  I am glad you like Blessings!  I am in the process of tweaking the next update it should be up soon!  

Reviewer: abbielouisemoonwalker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 07:43 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow I love this so far! Can't wait for more, amazing job!

Author's Response:

Thank-you so much for the comment!  I really appreciate you taking the time to read.  The next chapter will be up soon!

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