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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 44

Wowwwww....what girl wouldn't want to be proposed to in such a romantic setting, by such a romantic minded man...I love it :D. Ariel is SOOOOO lucky lol :)

And the ring sounds gorgeous :)

Author's Response:

Yes he's such a romantic man, every  (well most anyways) girls dream guy 

 

Yes agree 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 09:48 am Title: Chapter 7

I like Michael's eyes too!

Ariel's story was so sad, but happy to see the progress in their relationship



Author's Response:

Me too, easy to get lost in his eyes (And that's via a picture, imagine being lucky enough to have looked for real in his eyes) 

 

Yes poor thing  

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6

The pillow wall is so funny,believe that  I'll  see more and more interesting things between Michael and Ariel.



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes there will be more interesting things later on 

 

Thank you for reviewing 

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 104

Michael is right Ariel is going crazy with the spending just to keep Cindy away.  There is a lot of other things to be taken care of.   



Author's Response:

Yes she's desprate to have Christina and Junior to see Cindy as less as possible 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 43

YAY...Ariel and Michael are pregnant :D...lol

So...they sell pregnancy tests at THOSE places too...hmmm...;)

Wonder what Jamy will say if her new cousin is a girl :)...looking forward to finding out

Author's Response:

Yes they are :) 

 

I don't know lol but In fiction they do lol 

 

We will see what Jamy had to say :)

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 103

Oh Junior and Sierra are so young and have no clue.  Taking turns workring is not going to work.   Kids smh    Oh the twins are being a handful  lol



Author's Response:

Yes they're young and and a little clueless lol 

 

Yes they're little monsters lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 42

Hm...Richard could use a little compassion where Ariel is concerned, impo.

Hopefully the thought of being pregnant (or possibly being) will take Ariel's mind off her father's attitude. :)

Author's Response:

Yes agree 

 

We'll see ;)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2017 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 41

Hmmm... Let's hope Richard will give Ariel her space

Tough situation when father and daughter are estranged

Author's Response:

It's not easy time will tell if they will ever bond again 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2017 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 40

Hmm...wonder what LaToya's idea for the bedroom would be? Lol

LOL, love their discussion about crushing on females, and 'threesomes' etc ;).

Author's Response:

Probably something too much lol 

 

They talk about everything lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2017 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 39

Wow...beautiful house :).

Hope it has a nice big back yard for Jamy and Jayson to play in if Ariel gives them cousins to play with one day :).

Author's Response:

I'm sure it has :) 

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2017 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 102

Bullying is never ok in any situation.  Nigel should be punished too Michael is right.  That Principla seemed a litttle biased against Valentine.  The girls are smart.  The banter between Michael, Ariel and Jaz so funny.



Author's Response:

Agree. 

Yes they're smart kids. 

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2017 08:27 am Title: Chapter 3

The plot gets more and more intriguing as the story goes on, and the conversation between the two is so interesting, I love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2017 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this chapter, great start! I can't wait to see what happens next since I have started.

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2017 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 38 Seaworld

Yay, a story where they go to Sea World...one of my favorite places :).

Hm...seems Jamy was being a bit of a handful...lol. Can see her point though...lol :).

Maybe if they'd let Jamy feed the dolphins she would have been more interested in them :)

Author's Response:

Yes it's great place to go to :) 

 

Yes Jamy is a handful lol 

 

 

Maybe lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2017 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 37

LOL...I'm just imagining the pillow fight XD...that sounds like something Michael would start XD

Ewwww...periods. :P. What woman wouldn't want a man like Michael to help them feel better during the unpleasantness...

Author's Response:

Yes it's fun lol 

 

Ikr?

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