




Date: Aug 10, 2017 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 44
Wowwwww....what girl wouldn't want to be proposed to in such a romantic setting, by such a romantic minded man...I love it :D. Ariel is SOOOOO lucky lol :)
And the ring sounds gorgeous :)
Author's Response:
Yes he's such a romantic man, every (well most anyways) girls dream guy
Yes agree





Date: Aug 10, 2017 09:48 am Title: Chapter 7
I like Michael's eyes too!
Ariel's story was so sad, but happy to see the progress in their relationship
Author's Response:
Me too, easy to get lost in his eyes (And that's via a picture, imagine being lucky enough to have looked for real in his eyes)
Yes poor thing





Date: Aug 10, 2017 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6
The pillow wall is so funny,believe that I'll see more and more interesting things between Michael and Ariel.
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes there will be more interesting things later on
Thank you for reviewing





Date: Aug 09, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 104
Michael is right Ariel is going crazy with the spending just to keep Cindy away. There is a lot of other things to be taken care of.
Author's Response:
Yes she's desprate to have Christina and Junior to see Cindy as less as possible





Date: Aug 06, 2017 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 43
YAY...Ariel and Michael are pregnant :D...lol
So...they sell pregnancy tests at THOSE places too...hmmm...;)
Wonder what Jamy will say if her new cousin is a girl :)...looking forward to finding out
Author's Response:
Yes they are :)
I don't know lol but In fiction they do lol
We will see what Jamy had to say :)





Date: Aug 06, 2017 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 103
Oh Junior and Sierra are so young and have no clue. Taking turns workring is not going to work. Kids smh Oh the twins are being a handful lol
Author's Response:
Yes they're young and and a little clueless lol
Yes they're little monsters lol





Date: Aug 01, 2017 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 42
Hm...Richard could use a little compassion where Ariel is concerned, impo.
Hopefully the thought of being pregnant (or possibly being) will take Ariel's mind off her father's attitude. :)
Author's Response:
Yes agree
We'll see ;)





Date: Jul 27, 2017 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 41
Hmmm... Let's hope Richard will give Ariel her space
Tough situation when father and daughter are estranged
Author's Response:
It's not easy time will tell if they will ever bond again





Date: Jul 24, 2017 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 40
Hmm...wonder what LaToya's idea for the bedroom would be? Lol
LOL, love their discussion about crushing on females, and 'threesomes' etc ;).
Author's Response:
Probably something too much lol
They talk about everything lol





Date: Jul 22, 2017 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 39
Wow...beautiful house :).
Hope it has a nice big back yard for Jamy and Jayson to play in if Ariel gives them cousins to play with one day :).
Author's Response:
I'm sure it has :)





Date: Jul 22, 2017 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 102
Bullying is never ok in any situation. Nigel should be punished too Michael is right. That Principla seemed a litttle biased against Valentine. The girls are smart. The banter between Michael, Ariel and Jaz so funny.
Author's Response:
Agree.
Yes they're smart kids.
Thank you :)





Date: Jul 22, 2017 08:27 am Title: Chapter 3
The plot gets more and more intriguing as the story goes on, and the conversation between the two is so interesting, I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it
Date: Jul 22, 2017 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this chapter, great start! I can't wait to see what happens next since I have started.
Author's Response:
Thank you





Date: Jul 19, 2017 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 38 Seaworld
Yay, a story where they go to Sea World...one of my favorite places :).
Hm...seems Jamy was being a bit of a handful...lol. Can see her point though...lol :).
Maybe if they'd let Jamy feed the dolphins she would have been more interested in them :)
Author's Response:
Yes it's great place to go to :)
Yes Jamy is a handful lol
Maybe lol





Date: Jul 17, 2017 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 37
LOL...I'm just imagining the pillow fight XD...that sounds like something Michael would start XD
Ewwww...periods. :P. What woman wouldn't want a man like Michael to help them feel better during the unpleasantness...
Author's Response:
Yes it's fun lol
Ikr?