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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 50

Good to see things worked out with Ariel and her mother :)

LOL, Ariel and Michael's conversation

Janet's face must have been red when she walked in and heard what her brother and his fiance were discussing, lol :D

Author's Response:

:) 

 

Oh well Janet is used to alot with that many brothers lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 49

I love Michael, always able to give a word of encouragement when needed :).

Hm...pretty sneaky of Sally and Maria to not tell Ariel they were going to see her mother... Hope the visit turns out okay

Author's Response:

Me too :)

 

They just want to help that's all 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 48

Awwww...I always love scenes with little ones helping out :). Can just imagine Jayson sitting on the counter with the eggs. And of course Jamy perking up and joining in when the family had breakfast together...TOO CUTE :)

It's always hard for gay couples to start families because of the prejudice that exists. Hope the donor Maria has in mind is willing to help them out.

Good to see the willingness to let Jasmine be the godmother of Michael and Ariel's baby :)

Author's Response:

Yes those two are adorable :) 

 

Yes it's sad. Let's hope so

 

Yes she deserves it 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 47

LOL... Jamy's 'commentary' on LaToya's fashion choice... XD.

Hm...looks like Jamy might start asking the 'where do babies come from?' question pretty soon.

Author's Response:

Jamy is something lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 46

Awww...always love it when Jamy and Jayson visit :D... They are always so cute with their uncle and 'auntie elfie princess :D.

Sounds like Richard and Ariel have patched things up...Good for Michael explaining his stopping Ariel from committing suicide.

Author's Response:

Yes they're adorable :) 

 

 

Yes they did a little

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 08:57 am Title: Chapter 16

Michael is always concerned about the staff of the hotel

So happy to see their relationship becomes better after the misunderstanding was removed, heartwarming progress

Enjoying the reading of the whole story very much!



Author's Response:

Yes he's a very caring guy 

 

Yes progress  

 

 

I'm glad to hear that, thank you 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 08:14 am Title: Chapter 15

Interesting shopping way, lovely Ariel

Hope them could make it up soon



Author's Response:

Yes lets hope they make up soon 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 08:50 am Title: Chapter 14

Sweet! Michael's always so gentle



Author's Response:

Yes he is 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 08:31 am Title: Chapter 13

Lovely babies, can't help smiling when read this chapter, Jamy is really a good director



Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2017 09:19 am Title: Chapter 12

So kind Ariel is, stay beside Michael to cheer him up

The twins will like her too

 



Author's Response:

Yes she can be sweet :) 

 

Yes they will :) 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 09:04 am Title: Chapter 9

Good progress, love it! Ariel is a nice girl,  trust has been build,  I think they will further understand each other after this dinner



Author's Response:

Let's hope so 

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 08:17 am Title: Chapter 8

Hope them have a good time!

Michael is so sweet when looks after the twins



Author's Response:

Yes he's adorable with the twins :) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 45

After a romantic night with Michael, and then having to run into Richard...the last thing Ariel wanted, to be sure smh.

Wonder what excuse he'll give...

Author's Response:

Yes it was the last thing she wanted 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 04:12 am Title: The end

Non sei la sola sentendo la mancanza della storia e dei suoi personaggi.  Alla fine tutti loro fra alti e bassi hanno trovato l'amore e la felicità.  Grazie che fin dal primo capitolo all'ultimo mi ha fatto vivere tante emozioni



Author's Response:

Sì, tutti hanno trovato l'amore e la felicità alla fine. Sono contento di aver appreso a leggere la storia tanto quanto ho scritto. Grazie per tutte le tue recensioni

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 03:53 am Title: Chapter 104

Ariel deve dare retta a Michael e lasciar perdere Christina per prendersi Junior e accettare il fatto che Cindy farà parte dalla loro vita.



Author's Response:

si, sono d'accordo

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