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Reviewer: TaryllandMichaelFan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2016 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 33:Nobody puts Lisa in a corner

And here I go again...disliking Lisa lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Hehe lol...no, it's understandable. She's very unlikeable :) 😅 Thank you :)

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2016 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 33:Nobody puts Lisa in a corner

Why can't you speed things along and just make Lisa die? And every time I start to not hate Micah, he fucks it up. Painting a picture of him, Lisa and Michael. Y'ALL AREN'T A FAMILY!!! Ugh. I'm mad. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

😂😂  no one likes Micah 😢 No, they will never be a family :) aww, don't be mad. Things will change....I hope :) Thank you :)

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2016 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 33:Nobody puts Lisa in a corner

Die L isa Just Die!!!This chick is seriously mental I mean she is really nuts,what won't she do to keep him and Angelina apart.I wish Angelina would've  stomped a mud hole in that ass,put that bitch in traction for life but its good she held back i guess.Knowing Lisa ass she would've definitely had the cops come knocking for real.And while Michael doing all this texting he need to get Lisa big breasted ass out his house really prove to Angelina that look see I'm handling my business still gonna be a daddy to the kid but this chick is gone out my life.Then and only then can they  get somewhere but her scheming ass is not having it uhh they need to get it together.



Author's Response:

😂😂 your comment. Yeah, Lisa wants Michael all to herself :( and poor Micah, Angelina, and Michael are in the mix. Lisa Does need help; she's crazy, but I feel more surprises coming, so I can't dispose of her yet... Yeah, Michael really needs to find a way back to Angelina..his true love, but how??? Hmm...we will see. Thank you :)

Reviewer: Pytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2016 08:04 pm Title: The love birds...

Go Angelina ! 😂👏

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2016 05:26 am Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

Sia Michael e Angelina sono forti non si lasceranno minacciare da Lisa. Un giorno saranno di nuovo insieme per mandare via per sempre Lisa dalla loro vita potranno finalmente vivere il loro amore 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2016 03:58 am Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

Lol Michael get that hooker out of your house and get your girl back already. Enough is enough. Angelina just did what we all want to. 

Micah is annoying me too. I can't get past who his mother is. Just no. I keep picturing a kid with that big chin.....

Reviewer: TaryllandMichaelFan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

Lmao! Lisa deserved that!

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Hehe 😂

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

Yes Angelina! Lisa deserves every punch she may throw at her for lying lime that. Why would you purposely go to try and start trouble like that? Michael needs to stop moping and actually TRY to get Angelina back. Oh, and I still hate Micah with a passion. Little brat. I hope and pray that child is not Michael's and that he belongs to one of his brothers. I wouldn't put it past Lisa to do something like that.



Author's Response:

Aww, not poor Micah :( he's off limits, Lisa is really the one, but yeah, Michael needs to get Angelina back, but how?? 🤔 Hmm...whatever he does I hope it works. Lisa is just...not good person.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

That did feel good. Lmaoo she tried to trick Angelina at a vulnerable state but that girl did the opposite of walking away in defeat. She squared up😭😭😭 but even though Lisa was asking for it. I wish she didn't let her provoke her like that :/ great chapter 



Author's Response:

lol Angelina got tired of Lisa's nonsense and just lost it... Angelina could've done things differently, but...   Thank you :) 

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 32: Worth fighting for...

That's what I'm talking about yassssssss!!!Go Angelina bout time this bitch get a fist to the face.She talkin all that bull swanky lyin her ass off she know damn well Michael don't want her used up ass.And poor Michael I know he love his son but he need to get this bitch out his life and his house.Hell get custody of the boy cause its obvious Lisa is a no  good scandolous hooker I'm just waitin on them to sort this mess out and get back what they were starting.



Author's Response:

Lol 😂 yes, Angelina couldn't take it no more. Lisa thinks she's slick. Punks jump up to get beat down??? But yeah, Michael loves his son, and Lisa is crazy, if she thinks Michael wants her, but...I won't say too much. Yes, Michael and Angelina need to be together :) Thank you always for your funny comments 😂

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 30:Goodbye, Michael

Awwww poor thing. Michael needs to understand that, that's a lot to take in 



Author's Response:

Yes, agreed. Michael gotta understand Angelina's POV. She's hurt and confused and this is toooo much on her :( Thank you :)

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 31: like Father, like Son

Can't wait to read more!



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:)

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 31: like Father, like Son

Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 30:Goodbye, Michael

Poor angelina and mike....



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😢

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 29: A night to never forget...

Awe!!

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