Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 14

The only problem here is that some words don't seem to go together and not all are complete sentences or make sense. Might want to look at that. Other than that great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for that. My dialect is really different so I guess it makes it difficult, but I'll try. Thank u for reading😊

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 11:40 am Title: Chapter 11

I am loving this story! I don't think she's a rebound but Michael needs to tell her everything and should probably apologize for asking Diana to get the awards for him. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hey, I think you forgot to backup your stor . So, your chapters are blank. Once you remedy this, I can review.

Good luck and looking forward to reading more!🙋👍

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

@MJKing,

Thank you for not getting offended. I think the best way for a writer to gauge their work and know what areas need improvement or do not, is for their readers to give them constructive criticism/feedback. It truly helps all involved in the end. Also, I think with the structure of the site, Microsoft Word, may be a better tool you can utilize for the site,when typing up your chapters...then, you can just copy and paste from it to here, if you have access to it.

I look forward to another update if you have the time.a86;👍🙋

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

Omg wow that all l can say just wow😨😦😧😭

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2016 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

Keep it coming l would love to hear Michael pov

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2016 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so good l really really like this story