




Date: Nov 08, 2017 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this! It was so well-written, I wish more people would write about young MJ and his tween/teen years. This was a delight, thank you for sharing!





Date: May 08, 2017 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow I read all your stories this one is my favorite! I never read a story where the girl doesn't end up with michael in the end😶
Date: Jan 27, 2017 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your writing is simply phenomenal, had me hooked from the first to the very last word. Adolescent/teen Michael is one of my favorite, I love how you capture his sweet yet mischevious personality!
Date: Nov 11, 2016 05:22 am Title: Chapter 1
i really liked this :)
Date: Aug 31, 2016 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're very good at embodying Michael's emotions. That's exactly what I thought the real little kid Michael would be thinking.





Date: Jun 30, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this. You should write a story about him and Diana Ross 😊