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Reviewer: GwendilianM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 06:19 am Title: Ch. 26

It's cute how overprotective Amber is of Marlon

Author's Response:

you can't blame her. He is another brother to her if she didn't get with mike she would have likely gone out with him in AU lol. thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: GwendilianM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 05:42 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

As long as his out of the picture its good

Author's Response:

yep exactly no heartache for anyone.  thanks for reading <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2019 10:09 pm Title: Ch. 54

Having Michael chose both Chris and Marlon was a good compromise to appease his brother and friend, though I'll be interested in reading Amber's reaction to having Chris in their wedding party...lol

Hmmm...Can imagine Michael looking handsome in his suit ;).

Love the exchange between Andy and the others...lol XD

Author's Response:

Better to have to both then see the pair argue over who's best giving poor Mike a headache XD. Well Amber may or may not be too happy over it hehe. As I'm glad I was able to portray him looking handsome in suit and bah you know men and how they can be 😂. Thanks Mary ! 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2019 05:38 pm Title: Ch.53

Awww...Babies taking their first steps are always so cute :)...

Little Nevada is definitely her daddy's girl alright... :), lol

Hm, look forward to reading who Michael will chose for his best man...and what the reaction will be if Chris is selected...knowing his and Amber's opinions of one another...lol

Look forward to more, as always :)

Author's Response:

I did have fun writing it! It was so precious and indeed she is! Poor Amber never had a chance lool. you know how the boys can be its going to mayhem to see who he picks XD. thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2019 05:38 pm Title: Ch. 52

"You walking bag of helium"...LOL XD

Right from the discussion to the make-up sex...;)...you go Michael...lol.

Author's Response:

ah will the two hot heads ever get along? by that statement you quoted I doubt it and mike using sex to get Amber distracted smh XD. thanks mary <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2019 06:43 pm Title: Ch. 51

Wow...even Katherine...hope La Toya learns a valuable lesson from this...we'll see.

Author's Response:

Because she is not here for her nonsense smh! Let's hope she does but time can only tell. Thanks Mary 😁 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 05:29 pm Title: Ch. 50

That's what you have to do sometimes, just give them what they want and then they'll leave you alone...

Congrats reaching 50 chapters :D

Author's Response:

I agree and in this case let's hope she never comes back smh and thank you Mary I was so proud of myself that day 😂. 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 08:45 am Title: Ch. 49

Hm...so LaToya is willing to apologise and patch things up...we'll just see how sincere she really is...And if Michael believes her

The exchange between Michael and Marlon...lol

Author's Response:

I agree it is a start buut knowing her in this story it might be a good or bad thing..if mike decides to believe her and welll those two I doubt will ever get along lool. 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 09:30 pm Title: Ch. 48

It's good to see Amber is able to be the voice of reason, especially where La Toya is concerned...

La Toya...smh, lol

Glad Amber and Michael were able to control their tempers, and not upset Nevada...

Look forward to reading more (as always :D)

Author's Response:

Layota is a headache in this story lol yet im glad they were able to especially Amber just shows how much she has grown!. And you always are looking forward I'm glad I never disappoint Mary 😂. (thanks as always XD) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2018 03:45 pm Title: Ch. 47

Oh great...just what Michael doesn't need...smh...

LaToya is unbelievable, isn't she?...smh...hopefully, Katherine will be able to knock some sense into her...

Author's Response:

don't ya just hate annoying siblings? like Layota right now being a pain? slapping mike over money she did not earn typical but don't worry mama K will sort her out. thanks mary <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Ch. 46

I'm glad to see the fans didn't stay mad at Michael for too long...Although it must have been nice to have a break from being so much in the public eye...though at the same time, Michael must really have missed his fans...

Sweet image of Michael with Nevada :D...Babies do love to throw things at that age...LOL.

Hm... La Toya...Some times, I can't quite figure her out...lol...It'll be interesting to see how things will go between her and Michael...

Look forward to more...as always :D

Author's Response:

true at least they are not cutting him off like they would in this social media era yikes lol and I had to bring in some cutesy moments even through Neveda almost broke his nose lol and no one can figure her out?? Layota is a hard jigsaw puzzle lol. thanks as always <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 04:39 pm Title: Ch.45

Lol...Nevada kicking Marlon in the chin...she's already voicing her opinions...too cute :).

I can relate to Amber, and her reaction after being surprised by Dani...lol

Author's Response:

yep she is sure. I bet she will be quite vocal when she gets to the talking/gibberish stage and poor Amber she hates surpises poor thing at least it was Dani scaring her not Michael with his games XD. thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 02:44 pm Title: Ch. 44

Poor Marlon...sometimes it's hard to live down one's past...

Way to go, Michaela...Marlon is lucky to have her on his side :)

Author's Response:

I agree it is hard to let it go and be a better person from it but thanks Michaela he is on his way to recovery knowing he is truly loved by his family and all. Thanks Mary 😁 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 09:32 pm Title: Ch. 43

The image of Amber with Nevada, and Nevada 'burping' is too cute...babies are adorable.

Wonder how long Michael will be able to keep the secret about Dani being here from Amber...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

it is so precious isn't it? let's be glad Neveda did not throw up on her mama XD. If mike can keep the secret for long with the way Amber gets susipicious quite easily lool. thanks Mary <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 10:24 pm Title: Ch. 42

Katherine Jackson is a WISE woman...Michael is lucky to have her for his mother.

LOL...Look forward to seeing Chris' reaction when Amber and Michael 'kick him to the curb' as the saying goes XD

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

of course she is because mothers know best (90% of the time) lool. It might be the opposite of what you expected but I can't spoll it for you Mary you gotta read to see XD. thanks as always Mary <3 

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