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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 05:41 am Title: ::Ch. 9::

I like reading and re-reading your stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kay <3

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 12:48 am Title: ::Ch. 8::

I enjoy re-reading your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kay! 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 10:22 pm Title: ::Ch. 4::

Joe's old mean ass needs to get out of here! Why does he have to be such a brute! Searching Gray for his runaway son! Man, let your kids live their life, and him beating Marlon! It was so hard to read!

Author's Response:

I agree with you completely he needs to leave his them alone it's not like they will say anything to let his business be known smh.I feel you as well at the time it was hard to write for me. Thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 10:20 pm Title: ::Ch. 3::

Looks like the consummation of the marriage was a success, and seems like Michael is very romantic.

I love how you added the intro ad lib from "I Just Cant Stop Loving You" That was so romantic! I actually melted from reading it!

Author's Response:

Yes it was with no complications lol, Michael loves spoiling his girl even when she isn't interested lol. I couldn't help myself adding that part it was too adorable not to add! I'm glad you had fun reading 😘

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 09:45 pm Title: ::Ch. 2::

Vegas baby, vegas! I didnt think the vowels were cheesy. It was quiet cute, and hey, they're young! Great chapter!

Author's Response:

heck yes vegas is the place to take their vows lol. well i'm glad you don't think so with the vows and your right thye are young lol, thanks for reading hun <3

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 12:37 pm Title: Part II

Fuck Andy 🖕



Author's Response:

Ouch Louie no love for him? Smh lol, thanks for reading 😘

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 06:46 pm Title: ::Ch.1::

So I see my fave couple has escaped without being caught! I wonder what lies ahead of them.

Author's Response:

Yes they have and it's a long journey ahead for them, let's hope it goes alright with them both, welcome to the sequel Kara!.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:52 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

please add more chapters. I enjoyed reading your stories.



Author's Response:

thanks as always for your support Kay it's truly appriacted <3

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:49 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

Joseph was selfish and mean. Maybe now they can relax and feel safe.



Author's Response:

he really was and that was his downfall in the end hopefully they can feel a little more safe now he's out of their lives permenately~

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:38 am Title: ::Ch.14::

Its good that Marlon and Michael are together again.



Author's Response:

The two brothers united as you can see Michael isn't too happy about it smh, he loves his older brother really lol.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 02:14 am Title: ::Ch.13::

I hope everything is smooth sailing from now on. Although, that's only wishful thinking.



Author's Response:

all you can do is wish for now but let's have some hope at least for the future! thanks kay <3 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2016 10:03 pm Title: Ch.12

I think that she won't want to take their help. Remembe they are hiding from Michael's father.



Author's Response:

Indeed she won't want to..with Joseph hanging over their heads but they do need somewhere to stay so anything is likely to happen at the moment.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2016 09:51 pm Title: ::Ch.11::

Did he really want to know, or did his dad want to know?



Author's Response:

if your talking about Junior about wanting a sister i believe he did want a sister..A little confused on what your asking about..?

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2016 06:58 pm Title: ::Ch. 10::

Amy needs to make up with her father for her childrens sakes. So that she can move on with her life with Michael and their children.



Author's Response:

ikr? but she's really being stubborn and bull headed to even bother to have any interaction with him but she will warm up to him eventually but who knows when she'll be ready? 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2016 07:37 am Title: ::Ch. 15::

Holy crap!!! At least they're safe from Joseph. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Ikr? thank goodness! thanks as always louie <3 

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