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Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 01:47 pm Title: ::Ch. 8::

The first martial fight! I heard some couples love to fight so they can make up afterwards lol! Great chapter, Lorry! This story is amazing! I love how the characters are fleshy and realistic!

Author's Response:

Yep you hit the nail they are that kind of couple smh lmao. Thank you! I'm so glad your enjoying it plenty more to come in the near future 👻. Thanks again Kara <33

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 01:40 pm Title: ::Ch. 7::

I assumed she was pregnant with all that love making they were doing! Wow! Things are moving fast! The argument was hilarious! I think Amber is happy that she's pregnant, but worried since they do not have much money. She'll come around. A baby can bring so much joy!

Author's Response:

Lool they didn't use any protection so it was bound to happen and their argument smh to them *rolls eyes*. I agree but they will manage in due time and yes the baby will bring so much joy.

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 01:35 pm Title: ::Ch. 6::

Lmao Marlon is trip! I love his character! Best supporting character ever!

On the other hand, too bad Amber and Michael are broke. It's normal with some newly weds especially very young ones. I believe they will land on their feet now that Amber has a job.

Author's Response:

I love him just as much you love reading about him lmao, yes true you are so right but they will eventually find their stand now they both have jobs to make ends meet! Thanks Kay<3

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 02:59 am Title: Part II

Please write more chapters! I really enjoy reading your stories!



Author's Response:

I definitely will Kay 😄

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 02:55 am Title: Part II

Grace acted in the only way she could. She was hurt for the family she felt that she was cheated out of. Too bad she couldn't have found a man that wasn't married or involved with someone else. Its clear that she loved him dearly.



Author's Response:

Ikr? Perhaps If she'd been with someone else who was single this might have been a different story but with time she will heal.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2016 02:45 am Title: Ch.18

That was a lovely surprise party! Andy's favor was a wonderful gesture to his new son inlaw. It was also a good way to make sure that his daughter and grandchild/ children would be taken care of in the future.



Author's Response:

Yep he really does care for Amber but she's being quite stubborn about reconnecting with Andy and he's already winning brownie points with Michael by helping him. 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:45 pm Title: Ch.17

Great job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:35 pm Title: Ch.16

Now that need to speak up! So that everyone knows that they are married!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:35 pm Title: Ch.16

Now that need to speak up! So that everyone knows that they are married!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:10 pm Title: ::Ch. 15::

Good job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:03 pm Title: ::Ch.14::

Great!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:01 pm Title: ::Ch.13::

I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 08:00 pm Title: Ch.12

It wasnt right but, it was necessary.



Author's Response:

True some things need to be done lol.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 07:57 pm Title: ::Ch.11::

Good job!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 07:57 pm Title: ::Ch. 10::

Very good!

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