Date: Jul 07, 2018 10:32 pm Title: Walmart
Hey girl! My comment section been dry lately! Where you been at?!!! And trust and believe, I've been having serious writer's block too and just like you, I don't wanna pull up any crap either. I miss your comments. Hopefully, we will go back and forth like we used to. Keep it up girl! Btw, this chapter was cute: the Huntleys face off with the Jacksons lol
Author's Response:
Hey! And just going through life lol. I feel you, it's so hard to keep stories going correctly and consistently. And I hope we can too. Thanks for the support boo! I'm glad you liked it because I wasn't feeling it as much. See you next chapter!!!
Date: Oct 15, 2017 09:52 am Title: The party
Haha. Felics tryin to get the digits. He ain't slick! 🤣 I could see Michael grilling his ass hard. Plus, where is the steamy sex scenes for Mike and G?! I'm waaaaaaaiting lol! Girl, I'm so glad ur back. I missed this story and ur writing. I also came out with a lil something new called "Intimate Stranger". Feel free to check it out boo! And keep it up. I'm sipping slow on this tea! ðŸµðŸµ
Author's Response:
Hey boo! And you know I gotchu, soon as I can and thank you, I appreciate it. And I already plan it girl!!! I know Intimate stranger is gonna be lit! And thanks,I will. See you next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2017 05:25 pm Title: How am I gonna live through this Pt1
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you, more to come
Date: Aug 23, 2017 04:20 pm Title: Pick Your Battles
Loving itttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks boo! Get ready, it's about to get crazy really soon
Date: Aug 23, 2017 02:38 pm Title: Game On PT 2
Yay! They finally made it official! Michael's family is gonna love it I'm sure. Mama Huntley however... hmmmpf! We shall see. Sippin' slow. Bomb chapter and I'll be sure to have your tea nice and hot! Wink wink*!
Author's Response:
Girl, you can never tell with her trifling butt but yeah, the Jackson are definitely more accepting. And you do that😂😂
Date: Aug 01, 2017 05:47 pm Title: Game On
"Hell nah bro, don't neither one of us wanna go to your old busted out apartment. Shit done been shot up so much, the cops use your shit for target practice" Terry counters as Drel scoffs.
Girl, I fell out at that line! And girl, Michael done made her meet the fsmily? Why don't the two of them just hurry up and make it official. I mean damn! And u used Tianna as the baby girl! That's my real name spelled the exact same way! 😄😄😄😄Not sure if that eas pure coincidence or not but hey, I love it anyway! 😊 and let's see how long Gina lasts with nosey ass Latoya (in Michael's voice) and u straight teased me in the chapter. Chile please! Thought they was gonna burn a mattress with that hot ass sexual tension. I'm still waiting for that chapter though! Anyway, this was awesome! Onto the next one!
Author's Response:
Girrl, I told you Mike's bros be trippin' lol And yeah they need to...we done waited long enough lol. And is it really??😮😮Damn, I'm good. I must be psychic 😂😂 just kidding but foreal, it was a complete coincidence, I promise. I had no idea 😊 And sorry for teasing you boo, she would have at least kissed him if he hadna pushed her on the floor lol That's what they both get for being petty lol. And I got you eventually, we shouldn't be too far away. I'll try my best to make it nice and steamy for you when we get there😉 And thanks
Date: Aug 01, 2017 04:52 pm Title: Blue
Awwww. Mike is sprung on Gina. I loved the ending when he knew her favorite color. Lol at the guys teasing him too but might have to call Mike "Popeye" because the way he was lookin at Sidney's ass lol all that peach cobbler lol but great chapter as always!
Author's Response:
You already know, he been sprung lol and yeah Drel and Terry are a mess. They need to back up off our boy sometimes, they be straight disrespectful lol. And that definitely needs to be his nick name lol He definitely needs to stop entertaining these women but...atleast he's trying tho. And you're funny "all that peach cobbler" haha. Luckily no one will have to worry about Sidney, she already has a man lol. She and Mike are just old friends from High school. And thank you, I finally feel like the story is getting somewhere now that they are getting to know each other more intimately and are actually doing stuff opposed to just his house, eating and dodging bullets lol. But anyway, I will see you next chapter!
Date: Jul 30, 2017 05:34 pm Title: For now?
Girl.... the plot thickens. Michael better watch his back. D is straight up rubbing me tge wrong way! And Mama and Kenny are on the outs. Awwww. Though I forgot what Kenny looked like. And I loved how you picked Blair Underwood for Henry. He fits perfectly. But Mama Huntley better chill. She spying on Michael and Gina but got enough drama of her own. She better quit before shit hits the fan. But girl, this is awesome! I love how the story is heating up. Keep up the good work! And damn, when we gonna get a full blown erotic chapter between Michael and Gina?! Bout time these two knocked boots....and remember it lol!
Author's Response:
Lol You're too much but it's always great getting a review from you though! And I agree with everything you said: Michael needs to watch his back and Elaine...I don't know what to say about her. And as far as the erotic chapter, I'll think of something *wink*
Thanks for reviewing boo!
Date: Jul 03, 2017 09:38 am Title: Secrect Dramas in the Hood
Elaine too wrong for spying on Gina like that! And her sleepimg with Henry is just gonna blow up in her face eventually and it will be a wrap once Gina finds out. But baby this here is gettin good! Sippin slow! ☕ðŸµ
Author's Response:
You already know, Elaine been crazy from the jump lol Thanks, boo.
Date: Jul 02, 2017 06:59 pm Title: Officially Scared
Gina's mom is perfection! Excited to see their interaction in the next chapters! Great job! I love the story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it so much! Stay tuned. <3 Thank you for reading.
Date: Jul 02, 2017 12:06 pm Title: To Amour or Not To Amour
Awww....yes these two should patch things up. Kudos to Gina for being the little birdie in his ear. And I'm happy to see that things are going well for them too!
Author's Response:
Yeah, lets see how it goes girl. You know how they do lol. And wassup with your story? I'll be checking for an update boo
Date: May 03, 2017 01:15 pm Title: About last night
Wait? How the hell did Michael get there at her house n right behind her...thats some ninja shit lol but anyway I'm glad to see u writing again and yeah Michael is acting a bit funny...hmmmm. and girl, I'm so happy that's he's clean...whoooo!
Author's Response:
We shall see lol and yeah, he need to chill out. And I'm just glad Gina knows now because before, she was gonna break her neck tryna figure it out...poor baby lol. Stay tuned girl. It's about to get real
Date: May 16, 2016 09:59 pm Title: None Verbal Communication
Girl, girl, and girl! First off let me say that YASSSSSSS! Some draws have been officially dropped. Yasss! I knew it.
Now onto business, I loved the sex scene but don't be afraid to get more detailed. I always suggest that writers should write their scenes according to the five senses---in other words, the readers should be able to see it, feel it, taste it, hear it, etc.
Okay, we will give Mike and G the benefit of the doubt since they had some of that jump-ya-bones juice. Cuz boy if they had tequila, it woulda been a wrap fo sho! lol but anyway. Make it as if we are in the bedroom with Michael or like a movie. What would you see? How would you feel? You could always reference back to ch. 13 (Break of Dawn) in my story RTT for an example or other stories if you want help with the sexual scenes.
But wait, what happened at the end? Don't tell me Mike forgot to put on a rubber or the shit done burst. Lawwwd, I don't know if I could take it lol (Momma voice) and what about his STD status on paper? Girl, you got me glued to my seat and I will stay tuned boo. Sorry for the lengthy review but I enjoyed it nonetheless!
Author's Response:
We'll just have to see lol. You're a mess! Thank you for the criticism too, I think I could have done better but at the time I got a little nervous about it; Anyway, I may even go back and fix that part if I think of something; I didn't wanna make it too detailed though because I had some other stuff planned but thank you so much girl, I really appreciate it. I'm still laughing at your response, I'm literally rolling;And don't worry about the length, I live for them.
Thanks again and I will see you next time😘
Has college gotten any better btw?
Author's Response:
We'll just have to see lol. You're a mess! Thank you for the criticism too, I think I could have done better but at the time I got a little nervous about it; Anyway, I may even go back and fix that part if I think of something; I didn't wanna make it too detailed though because I had some other stuff planned but thank you so much girl, I really appreciate it. I'm still laughing at your response, I'm literally rolling;And don't worry about the length, I live for them.
Thanks again and I will see you next time😘
Has college gotten any better btw?
Date: May 16, 2016 09:29 pm Title: Trying times/ the question part 1
Giiiiiiirl, i was nervous during that police bit but baby, that was an awesome chapter once again. Oooh Mike got some plans for Gina and Mama Huntley wanna meet him...oooh where my tea at?!
Author's Response:
Lol right!
Date: May 13, 2016 06:34 pm Title: Plans/ All alone pt2
Baby it was a rocky chapter! I thought Mike was gonna get popped something ridiculous but yes he made it and he saves Bonds. And girl that kiss tho d84;a039;d84;a039;👍🏾 aye! Now we getting somewhere! Gina know she enjoyed that kiss cheesin like a Cheshire Cat lol I woulda been cheesin too! Anyway excellent chapter doll face!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't know why she tryna front lol But thank you very much babe, I will see you next chapter 😘