Reviewer: Saraa97 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2016 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome Story!!!
The start was very good.You're way of writing is very good.
Keep it up!!!!
:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2016 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww man I could only imagine what Michael went through especially in real life 😞 We all know he didn't do it and he had to endure this boy once but twice. People are so cruel n would do anything for money. However, I do like the way this is starting! Great job girl! As a fellow write on here, I like ur writing style already.

Author's Response:

Thank you girl, I appreciate it! 

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2016 04:53 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving this story! Fast paced, inviting, feels as if you're there watching everything unfold. Keep it coming! Very stressful time in MJ's life, I can't imagine. Can't wait for Chapter 4!

Author's Response:

Aww, I really appreciate it! I hope you enjoy chapter four! 

Reviewer: Speedy90 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2016 12:09 am Title: Chapter 3

Loving it so far. Interested to see how the story pans out x

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support! 

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2016 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Explosive drama with very real depiction of the farce of allegations against Michael. Can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much and new update is here! 

Reviewer: Voice Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2016 01:45 am Title: Chapter 2

Hello Again!  Another wondefu chapter Such a kindred moment knowing All Michael wanted to do was to be wihtout pain and get away from the world through the alcohol.  This had to be a painful panful series of moment.  I enjoy the nsight between the guard and Michael.  I enjoy your dialogue very much!

"No, Settling makes me look guilty." <-- Some faithful words I am more than sure had to be spoken.  What a risk right?

 

Love the chapter update soon!  I'd love if the chapters were a little longer! So much richness in such short chapters.

 

Author's Response:

Yup, he used alcohol as temporary solution -- which was bad but then again he was going through hell.

 

I think that's why he didn't settle in the beginning because he was of course innocent and wanted people to know that. 

Thanks girly and i'm sorry they were short the new one is longer! 

Reviewer: Voice Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2016 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful I absolutly love it!! I enjoy your captivation of emotions here!  The fact that he was so broken you can imagine the pain of such a horrible vicious lie, this is what I called the beginning of the end you know?  Especcially when it came to his reputation.  I love this part here:

 

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"Is anyone really worried about me Liz?" Michael asks, sitting up. "Or are they just calling to hear my side of the story, to know if I admit to this vicious and disgusting lie?" His teeth clenched and his throat burned from the tears he tried to hold back. He reached over to grab the almost-empty scotch bottle and a glass. He studied the glass, almost as if he was trying to read it, before flinging it across the room, where it shattered against the wall.  """""

 

Its not often Michael is dipcted with alcohol, I do think this is very realistic, especially since the world he knows has been damaged in the worst way possible!  Definately continue!! I'd also love to see more desciprtion and painting of the enviornment as you've done!!

 

Love it :) :)

 

 

Author's Response:

Awww thanks Voice and it's nice to meet you (in one of my stories that is)! 

I did some research and Mike had some drinking under his belt. I'm going to try to depict him as I would see him and hopefully as you guys might see him? I'm just going to try my best to make this story good so I hope you all will enjoy it and I hope you enjoy the newest update! I've seen your story pop up on the recents so when I get some free time I'll click on it!