[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2016 11:06 am Title: Chapter 13: No Distractions
smh to them both Lool she got mj drunk tut tut and who doesn't love Marlon? It's getting closer to her meeting the Jackson Clan I still hope it's a success! 😂
Author's Response:
Lol we don't know yet if it's on purpose or not but we'll see. It is still getting closer till their meeting but there's no telling what's in store for Kimani, Michael, or his family!
Date: Mar 16, 2016 05:29 am Title: Chapter 12: Girl Trouble
This is good
Author's Response:
Thank you! I haven't got any feedback recently and I thought people stopped liking my story. Please continue to review and comment because it's the only way I know for certain that people are reading and that I can continue with more chapters.
Date: Feb 29, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: Back to Reality
DAMN I was not expecting his mood change. That was really good definetly twisted my expectations.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. Always expect the unexpected! Please continue reading and commenting I always enjoy the reviews.
[Report This]Date: Feb 29, 2016 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: A Very Sweet Date
This was too cute. I loved how they shared the last bite of the Cannoli. Great story this far.
Author's Response:
Have you ever had a cannoli? They are amazing! Lol thank you for your responses please continue to read and review so I can improve and keep this story going
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2016 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: A Very Sweet Date
Adorable. I love it x
Author's Response:
Thank you! Please continue with the comments and reviews
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2016 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: Late Night
Oh my god. I love this. As much as Michael is being cheeky and dirty its wonderful. I hope to read more. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I always appreciate reviews so don't hesitate! A new chapter should be on it's way soon
Date: Feb 12, 2016 08:49 am Title: Chapter 11: Battle of the Ages
The old lady needs to chill and Mary Anne two faced cow needs to do her work and leave Angel alone! She ain't done nothing to her ..hallejuah for pop tart coming at the right time 😜
Author's Response:
I can't believe you said she's a cow lmfao I'm dying laughing right now!
And of course he comes on cue. He's in time with her lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2016 10:49 am Title: Chapter 11: Battle of the Ages
Great chapter. Mary Anne needs to close her mouth before the flies fly in, and the old grandmother needs to try something else other than lemons and limes.😊
Author's Response:
Lol where are you from with lemons and limes
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2016 08:31 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome
Lool the way he picked her up, never under estimate a guy angel they will end up picking you up and that has happened to me in a smaller situation but I was turned upside down 😂. And mj might be the one catching feelings by the looks of it and angel is still keeping her distance loving their banter as always lol. A good chapter glad to see you got your inspiration hun 👏
Author's Response:
That part was based on something that happend to me, except I got dropped (accidental!) I decided to keep it cute here though lol. Anyways we still have a lot ahead of us
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2016 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: Wrong Answer
Hmmm, he has changed instantly since the fisrr few chapters. He was a perverted jerk then nd it all slowly came to a stop, why? I don't have a clue but I'm kind of glad about it. He's too sweet and gentleman like to be acting such away that's not him. Maybe, it was a front or something I'm not sure.
Author's Response:
We'll see what's a mask and what's real..at some point. That's all I can say for now.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2016 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: Wrong Answer
I love new Michael P.O. V he so funny love love them together keep it coming
Author's Response:
Thank you very much I appreciate it. More to come next week so stay tuned
Date: Jan 07, 2016 11:54 am Title: Chapter 8: Wrong Answer
Welll i guess he makes more sense now. Hes STILL an ass. How much is she getting paid again 2 do this? I love their relationship dynamic. Whered the nickname poptart come from? Didnt like that he was being a arrogant manipulative dickhead who actually is just emotionally immature and insecure. Keep going this is great:)
Author's Response:
We don't know how much yet. That is still up in the air. How much would you charge him, all things considered? Poptart was explained in Chapter 5: A Sweet Date. Angel is the only one without an explaination just yet. I like how far you're reading into his character lol
Date: Jan 07, 2016 09:02 am Title: Chapter 8: Wrong Answer
Oh mj it's adorable when he gets nervous and there banter cracks me up as always lol. nothing is going wrong at the moment for now ..let's hope it stays that way lol
Author's Response:
Nothing ever stays stagnant. Life is full of drama no matter who you are lol. I will make no promises
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2016 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 7: Call Back
I missed this story. At least it put me in some good mood for today.
Anyway, Michael wants her to come over and whyyyyyy??????? As much as Kimani 'acting' like she doesn't Wanna go, she knows she really do.
Author's Response:
Let her save face for one chapter at least! Lol it's "only" for food.
Date: Jan 04, 2016 10:16 am Title: Chapter 7: Call Back
Oh come on Angel it's free food I would have gone either minus mj being a complete pervert lol and what could he have wanted to ask her so desperately? Better not be time wasting or ill kick his ass along with Angel~
Author's Response:
It's free food but at what cost? Why would you kick her ass? She ain't do anything just yet lol. Plus who doesn't like a bad boy every now and then? Next chapter is from his POV so something might be revealed and cleared up for now