Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:27 pm Title: 5. 'PMS n Emotional Rollercoaster'
Good job!
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:22 pm Title: 3. 'Great'
Let them get to know each other.
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:19 pm Title: 2. 'Nice2MeetU'
Good job!
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:13 pm Title: 1. 'Background Yoncé'
I enjoy reading and re- reading your story.
Date: Jun 08, 2016 12:37 pm Title: 7. 'R'
Whoo Lord!!! I don't know what's gonna happen next but I do know Elvis Jr. not having it LOL.And man that kiss was explosive Bey just poured her heart out to him but what a situation for them.And I just love how it seems like Beyonce gets all flustered and girly around Michael I'm sure I'd be the same way .Waiting to see what's going to happen next its been awhile since I've been excited about a story so looking forward to more of what you got.
Author's Response: LMAO! Lol ikr! Thank you so much things like this keep me motivated! Stay tuned a update is on its way!
Date: Jun 08, 2016 03:40 am Title: Prologue
A good introduction to the story.
Author's Response: I appreciate it thank you for your support from Day 1 Mad love.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2016 09:10 am Title: 6. 'Flaunt It Los Olivos!'
I was costume to the story of mature Michael and young Beyonce in the '00s. However you're taking events of present and take them to past with sort of technology. Let's see how things develop. Good job Ms. PD. 1st time I see LMP and 'yonce in same story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you understand my vision. Much love
Date: Jun 06, 2016 06:18 am Title: 6. 'Flaunt It Los Olivos!'
I think you have something here the more I read the more into it I got.Love the chemistry between Mike and Bey think they look so good together and getting them together will be fire.And honestly I don't mind that the Kardashians or even Kanye are in the storie Lol.If you can wrap your head around the fact that they serve a specific purpose to the storie you kinda forget who they are in terms of dislike at least for me anyway.But I love it really anxious to know what's gonna go down with them cause i'm feeling those sparks they got going.
Author's Response:
Oh Boy! Thank You
I appreciate this so much. Thank you for reading and I hope you continue too. And I feel the Sparks too but I don't think Lisa will feel them🤐
Stay Beautiful 😘
Date: Jun 06, 2016 02:46 am Title: 6. 'Flaunt It Los Olivos!'
I like the story so far. However, the big turn off for ME personally, is the insertion of Kanye West and the Kardashians.
This is nothing against you, but some of us are sick of these people and not interested. Maybe change their names? I was hoping this place wouldn't be infiltrated by these people... It's your story of course, so whatever decisions you make are yours.
Once again, I like what I have seen so far.
Author's Response: Wow! My first constructive criticism? I appreciate you leaving this review because this isnt just your opinion, it's others who might not want to speak up. Now every character that I have in this story serves a purpose. I'll probably use your advice in the next story I write. Thank you for reading and please continue reviewing!
Stay Beautiful 😘
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2016 07:44 pm Title: 6. 'Flaunt It Los Olivos!'
great story so far
Author's Response: I appreciate it! Thank you for the review it means a lot to me Stay Beautiful
Date: Apr 29, 2016 08:50 am Title: 4. 'Try Me, Try Bey!'
I really enjoyed reading your story. Please continue to write more. I want to know how it progresses.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 08:22 am Title: 2. 'Nice2MeetU'
I think that they will both pursue each other.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 06:29 am Title: 1. 'Background Yoncé'
A good introduction!