Date: Sep 04, 2016 01:45 am Title: Chapter 72
Things are getting better now. Hopefully it's gonna last for a while because I still remember the suit/blackmail Michael recieved so I know more drama will come.
Thank you for the new chappter. I never get enough :)). I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
it should last awhile. enough drama for now..lol thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 04, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 72
Glad they're making progress
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 03, 2016 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 72
It's all coming good!! I think he finally has made the breakthrough, where he is free of his demonic addiction and can start looking at life with a clear head, and make rational decisions. It might be in his intrinsic makeup to run to the alcohol and pills when things get tough, but I think he's strong enough now to turn his back and stay sober, ride out the storm. Loving the closeness between the two of them, it's been worth waiting for xx
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. he certainly is on the right track. now it's time to heal their relationship thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 03, 2016 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 72
I loved this chapter. No matter the many obstacles they went through, you can still feel the deep passion and love they have for one another. They are on the right track for sure! She mentionned the baby being a girl... Didnt she say she wanted it to be a surprise? Maybe I missed something in the previous chapters.. =)
Author's Response:
she doesnt know but she has a feeling its a girl so you didnt miss anything. We will see what they end up having though. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 03, 2016 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 72
Little by little they're getting back and I love it
Author's Response:
they certainly are...thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 03, 2016 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 72
You are really a good writer...you can feel your passion for each character and how you spend time developing them...thanks for the great update
Author's Response:
thanks for the compliment. it certainly is fun writing. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 72
Thank goodness that Jo is willing to forgive him. It's definitely gonna take a while, but they'll get there.
Author's Response:
her desire to be a family certainly is pushing her openness to mending their relationship. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 02:09 am Title: Chapter 71
He should drag her back to California and marry her before she gives birth. Enough drama, let them be happy for good!!
Date: Aug 31, 2016 11:44 am Title: Chapter 71
Hey! Sorry for the late response, but really enjoyed this new chapter, just didn't get to respond til now. I love how they are finally talking physically, hate them apart lol. And love how Jo Jo reacted! It made complete sense, as he has been away for 6 months! She's been without him for awhile and then he thinks he can just walk in and get his love back? Nope, he's gotta work to get her back and show that he can be trusted, is serious and won't run out on her again. I do feel he should of told her where he was, but then beg her not to show up and explain he had to be alone to get better, she might of been able to handle that better....but of course you wouldn't have the angst and drama so....but loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I know, my intentions were to have him return just prior to the birth but I didnt want to lose you as a reader so I changed course. dont ever think I dont pay attention to what readers want...though it's my story I do take consideration of readers :0 he certainly has some ass kissing to do. should be interesting to see how they will grow back together and if he can be the man she fell in love with again. thanks for reviewing. and yes we must have drama :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 11:18 am Title: Chapter 71
Awwwww hopefully they are getting back on track now. But lol@her slapping him, poor Princess but he deserved it.
The best thing he can do is just be there for her, stay sober, and kiss anything that even resembles an ass. Don't be tempted by Cody or any outside influences *cough Billie Jean*. I think she would want to stay with her parents while things are still rocky and until the baby is born, I would.
Author's Response:
Lol. Kiss anything that resembles an ass. That's a great line. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 29, 2016 11:02 am Title: Chapter 71
So many emotion through this chapter. Well, for some reasons, I was very exultant when Michael got slapped by Jo :))(I am so cruel). Well, at least she could express some of her anger and pain caused by him.
But I was very happy that Jo gave Michael a chance for them and their child.
I was deeply touched this chapter. What Michael said was also what I had in my mind. You have to learn to love yourself before you can truly love someone else. Moreover, I also think you've captured some of reality in Michael's real life. Because as a fan who loves Michael dearly, I think that Michael did not love and appreciate himself enough. But I hope that he did come to realize his value (through his note 'I'm Beautiful'), how wonderful and beautiful he is just likes Michael in 'I'm Only Human' has learnt to love himself.
Really, what Michael said in this chapter touched me deeply. Therefore, you're a really amazing writer.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliment. I would agree with you that sadly I feel Michael didnt love himself very much and lived an emotionally troubled life. As sad as his passing was, I always continue to hope that now he is finally at peace and away from the scorn of the press and those who knocked him down. Thanks again for the review.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2016 04:01 am Title: Chapter 71
The nerve of Michael asking who the father is.....I would have kicked him out then and there.
Jo is a bit more forgiving than I thought she'd be, slapping aside. And I don't blame her father's reaction either. He's just trying to prevent his daughter from suffering more hurt.
Michael could have prevented this entire thing if he had just told Jojo where he went.....I think it's the fact he hid from her more than the fact he left that has her questioning his commitment to the relationship. How can she trust he won't pull the same shit again when they have a hard time ort stress in the future? He has the money to go anywhere in the world on a whim. I would have mixed feelings about getting into a serious commitment if I were Jo.
Michael has got his work cut out for him.
Author's Response:
I know seriously because he got help doesn't mean he's anointed to sainthood. He has some explaining to do as well as some ass kissing. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 28, 2016 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 71
I totally agree with what Jo did! How could Michael think he could come back and think things would be honky dory. JO woukd welcome him with open arms. Of course she is angry. And wtf Michaek having the nerve to ask if it was his! Well duhhhhhh.
It is going to take time for her to completely forgive Michael. But their love will get them through this!
Author's Response:
He certainly has some ass kissing and explaining why he didn't trust her to be truthful. Love prevails tho right. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 28, 2016 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 71
Oooooo, I've been waiting for this! Jo did the right thing in holding out on him for a while, not letting him just waltz back into her life like everything was hunky-dory. Strong woman, and that's what he needs. Keep 'em coming!!! (And the Gigolo updates too of course lol - am just loving that one!) xx
Author's Response:
yes, regardless of how much she missed him the fact was he went awol for 5 months and that isnt easily forgotten. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 28, 2016 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 71
All of the tears!!!! Michael still has loads of work to do, but I'm so glad Jo's giving him yet another chance *applauds*
Author's Response:
yes he does..he cant get too confident or he could slip. he needs to focus on mending their relationship for sure. thanks for reviewing