




Date: Feb 19, 2023 10:51 am Title: Ch.4
Thank you for this Story, you are so talented! :D





Date: Feb 19, 2023 10:42 am Title: Ch. 1
I really like the way you write. I am excited for what is to come next. (:
Date: Jan 03, 2021 03:09 am Title: Ch. 22
Damn... but she deserves it
Date: Jan 03, 2021 02:16 am Title: Ch.13
Honestly... she deserves that for what she did... kinda being selfish friend and only thinking about urself ain't right
Author's Response:
exactly there has to be a comprise between the two! hopefully this gives her a good lesson :S.
Date: Jan 03, 2021 01:48 am Title: Ch.9
She is overreacting fr... Not even listening to him explain? Wow okay...
Date: Jan 03, 2021 01:25 am Title: Ch. 6
Love how the sarcastic question is literally the answer
Date: Jan 03, 2021 01:25 am Title: Ch. 6
Love how the sarcastic question is literally the answer
Date: Jul 06, 2018 01:39 am Title: Ch. 2
I really liked your story) he is very nice
Author's Response:
aw thank you. hope you enjoy the rest <3





Date: Jul 11, 2017 06:56 pm Title: The End.
Love the ending :)
Can't wait to start reading the sequel :)
Author's Response:
I can't wait to see what you think! See you in the sequel XD





Date: Jul 08, 2017 11:00 pm Title: Ch.31
Considering the outcome...not a smart move. Although Marlon meant well to try to stop Joseph from being nasty and insulting...
Author's Response:
Well yes Marlon sometimes doesn't use his brain at times but he did mean well. At least there wasn't too too much violence at least.





Date: Jul 03, 2017 07:50 pm Title: Ch.30
Have enjoyed Michael and Amber's story so far :)... Am looking forward to their further adventures together :D.
Perhaps together, they can be a 'force' Joseph never figured he'd have to reckon with...as they say 'strength in numbers' :D.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've had fun reading this story. There is plenty more to read in the sequel. Who knows they might have a chance to away from Joseph ðŸ˜





Date: Jul 01, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Ch. 29
Omj...Joseph sure seems to be enjoying intimidating his sons into doing what he wants them to do...smh
I think Michael will get Amber to agree...eventually
Author's Response:
That's the only way he will get his way somehow force and intimidation smh. Hopefully he will but how is the issue.





Date: Jun 29, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Ch. 28
LOL...Marlon making himself the center of attention, and turning on the 'Southern' charm... XD.
Funny chapter...made my day XD.
Author's Response:
Because that's how Marlon rolls smh lool. Glad I did a good job XD





Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:54 pm Title: Ch. 27
Yeah, I can see Amber and Michael in LA together... Although I think Amber will try to keep Michael from rushing into things and acting hastily...knowing what she knows about his family...Doing anything hasty would possibly put them in more danger...especially if Joseph were to find out...
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Author's Response:
I agree Amber will try to stop him from jumping into things lol. But that's why she's there lol. Ooh if he finds out..it won't be pretty tsk.