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Date: Jun 25, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Ch26

No, his anger is understandable, wanting to protect Amber & her family from the mafia-ish tactics of his brothers & Joseph.

Hope they won't have to be apart for too long this time...

Author's Response:

Yep I can't blame him either poor guy let's hope the break is temporaily but we shall see next time :P 

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Date: Jun 21, 2017 06:41 pm Title: Ch.24

Sweet interaction between Michael and Amber. Tbh, Michael doesn't need Marlon's advice when it comes to...flirting etc ;)

Look forward to reading more when you're in the mood for writing more :)

Author's Response:

Of course he doesn't but Marlon sees it as his mission to he 'helpful' whatever that can be smh lool. Thanks Mary 

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Date: Jun 18, 2017 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 22

Whoo HOO...finally Miss Crazy Horse gets what's coming to her...she sure was STUPID to think she could traumatize Amber and have there not be reprucutions

Wow...Chris sure was blinded by family loyalty, but that's typical...family members usually can't see people for who they really are

Wow...Michael handled Angelina with CLASS...perfectly

No, I think Miss Crazy Horse will be back, people like her are just too stupid to get it, their egos are too big...

I have no idea which song it is...though i would probably go 'Oh yeah' if i read the title lol

Author's Response:

she really is crazy and yes michael finished her with class doing his thing without violence.  I do agree Chris was blinded by her fake sweetnessa needing something to get her way somehow. maybe she'll be back who knows smh lol. the song was just a little bit of you by mj lol. 

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Date: Jun 13, 2017 11:45 am Title: Ch.20 - Christmas Parti II

Wow...he's got a killer hangover, and his buddy Chris is making him go to ANOTHER party...smh...poor Michael lol

And his sisters calling him 'weird' and gossiping about him...seems he can't cut a break...smh lol

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

I agree poor Michael he really cannot catch a damn break even from Chris smh lool. His sisters are just sisters they love you and still find some way to gossip bah lol. Thanks as always <3

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 08:48 pm Title: Ch. 18

Put it this way... waiting for the confession added an element of suspense to the story :).

YAY...and the feeling is MUTUAL :D.

Author's Response:

Thanks I tried even reading back I felt it was cheesy oh well lol. Yes at last they confessed and at least its mutual (thankfully)

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Date: Jun 03, 2017 04:06 pm Title: Ch.16

Oh yeah...she's delusional alright...lol
Sounds like a girl who won't take 'No' for an answer.

Am looking forward to seeing how Michael and Amber deal with her...and what the outcomes are...

Author's Response:

She's crazy and spoilt with a dash of delusional OK the side loll. Let's hope they can cope. 

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Date: May 29, 2017 05:21 pm Title: Ch.14

Sounds like Marlon and Michael (and probably the other 4) know how dangerous being part of the mafia is, and they're protective of any woman who shows an interest in any of them.

Good update :).

Maybe this insight will help Amber forgive Michael...

Am curious to see what will help Michael forgive Amber...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

They do understand when it comes to when an enemy would try to use their ladies in their lives against them for ransom or payback. This should help on both sides. 

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Date: May 26, 2017 11:33 am Title: Ch.12

Hm...I wonder if Marlon knew Michael would be there, and has his sites set on Amber as well...

Will be interested to see where things go from here :)

Author's Response:

Marlon could have known but he's one sneaky guy when he wants to be lol.