Date: Nov 02, 2015 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 15- part 2
I really really like your story. It is so amazing!!! And Michael is very very sweet.
I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Awwwhh, thank you so much!!! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Will have another chapter by this weekend.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2015 04:20 am Title: Chapter 15
The office gossip is usually the person with the least going on in their lives so they have to latch on to other people's stories to feel like they have one. Ugh!! The worst.
But poor Gabby she must have been in a terrible fright to run into Levi. There would be so much explaining to do and there still is because I know Michael is wondering what the hell is going on with her why she was so spooked.
I think she should tell him at least that MJ's father isn't dead but then again that will come with repercussions I'm not sure she's ready to deal with where Michael is concerned. Hmmmmmmm!
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
You're right, it's only fair that she tells him the truth, despite how she feels towards Levi. And poor Michael, he's doing everything he can to be there for her and MJ only for her to keep this a secret...in due time, everything will come out into the opening. Thank you for the review!
Date: Oct 28, 2015 10:41 am Title: Chapter 14
These two have a lot in common, especially with their past relationship to horrible people. If anything, plus little MJ, this should bring the two of them together!
Author's Response:
As always, thank you sissy for your reviews!
Date: Oct 28, 2015 10:39 am Title: Chapter 13
The tension is definitely there! And I loved how he just gave her money to buy herself something.
Date: Oct 24, 2015 03:26 am Title: Chapter 14
When she was explaining her love for writing I felt as if she had spoken my exact thoughts.
Author's Response:
Lol. I can read your mind 😈 lol.jk...but thank you for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy this story. I'll have a new chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 14
I know Diana may be looking out for him but I still wanted to bop her over the head and tell her to mind her business. Lol. Anyway she sounds like she's jealous if she reacts negatively to any female in his life that's not her or his mother.
Gabby and Michael are so in tune and so oblivious all at the same time. I know I keep saying this but there's more than friendship budding here and I'm in for the ride to get to where they both come to see what's in front of them.
More soon!!<333
Author's Response:
Tut, I just love getting your reviews! I like how you pay attention to the smallest details of Gabby's and Michael's relationship. You keep saying it, but you are absolutely right. Everything they're looking for is right in front of them. Without giving too much of the story away, I wanted to draw out their relationship so it could actually build up to something more. Hope I'm not giving too much away 😁 but thank you so much for always reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
this so good
Author's Response:
Thank you Marje143.glad you're enjoying it! Hope you continue to read...will have a new chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:19 am Title: Chapter 13
I laughed so hard again when she told him it was her in the phone. I'm just imagining this scruffy voice she must have had for him to be so convinced it was relax a dude on the other end of the phone.
Oh Gawd here comes Moncia. I'm surprised she didn't want to grill Michael a little.
They're both in such denial about their true feelings. It is new and they haven't known each other for long but the attraction is there and it's more than just a little bit.
More soon! <333
Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:15 am Title: Chapter 13
So cute how Gabby and Michael were both jealous thinking the other found a new. And Gab is such a good person going out with that irky girl. She's so annoying but Gabby needs some fresh air anyway. She can use a break and a day out. I know Michael better have brought his ass to her house. Such a silly boy Lmaooo and enjoyed the chapter. <333
Author's Response:
Thank you nene! 😊
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 09:29 am Title: Chapter 13
lol yeah but i love it
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2015 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
Whoa! The wig is off!!I think it's best if he tells her the truth, or else things could get worst. and I would not like to see that. I got a good feeling that he will come clean or else, she may put him out and all deals are off.
Author's Response:
Yea, he shroud definitely come clean at this point. She has been deceived and out through so much that it'll only hurt if he keeps this lie up.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2015 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
NOOOOOO Way! This B CAN NOT be pregnant!
MIchael, what have you gotten yourself into?
On another note...
“You know…they say I look like him.” I say in a matter of fact tone.
She turns up her nose and stares at me in a sneering matter. “Look like who? Michael Jackson?”
I nod my head. “Yeah.”
Pffhh “Who told you that? The blind?” She say convulsing with laughter while holding her stomach. “I mean, you look like you could be the same size and height, maybe…but you two don’t resemble in any way, so I beg to differ.”
I look away and put my head down, taking my bottom lip between my teeth to conceal the contortion of my smirk.
If she only knew.
This was freaking hilarious!
Yea, if only she did know that he actually is him. Boy is she in for a big surprise.
Author's Response:
Lol! Yea, I loved this part too. She definitely in for a big surprise and very soon I might add.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2015 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
How cute! Him getting groceries and their little scuffle, priceless. And her calling the cops and being called Billie Jean...this was extremely funny to me. Poor Gabby.
Date: Oct 05, 2015 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Gabby! Just so you know, I shared your story with a friend of mine and she loves it. Do you have any other stories? I'd love to read them.
Author's Response:
Hi Stacy! Glad you and your friend like it. And I do have other stories, but this is the only one I've posted on any sites. I do plan on introducing one of my other stories soon, so be on the look out.
Date: Oct 01, 2015 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
In love with Michael's excitement over baby MJ. And I think I remember who that was on the phone😩😩😂😂😂
Author's Response:
Lol! Yes, I love how he instantly takes to MJ's needs. I honestly can picture him that way in real life.