[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
Wow Gabby dodged a bullet with that question. I see Latoya is the nosy one. I know she's trying to protect her bother though.
I'm surprised too that after the Joe incident they chose to stay overnight. Man he's always the wet blanket at family gatherings. I'm just glad Michael stepped up and got in protective mode.
Gabby needs to tell Michael soon about Levi. Things in that arena is getting too hectic for her to ignore. Their feelings for each other have gone passed friends whether they spoke the words or not. The feelings are involved now. So she needs to bandaid it. Just one rip. (I know I keep saying this every review lol but it does need to happen ASAP)
Now to where I'm disgusted and I would have Bruce Leed someone in the nuts. HOW DARE Jeraisins put his hand on that girl. Michael is going to go ballistic on him and I'm here for it.
Don't leave us hanging too long. It's comuppance time!!!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Lol! I agree, Jermaine should have been Bruce Leed and I have a feeling it's not going to sit well with Michael. And she is definitely walking a thin line with this secret. But you can tell its eating her up. Hopefully she'll tell him before it all blows up and make matters worse.
and their feelings.... 😏 Lol.
More to come.
Michael stepping in was too cute. And can't wait to reveal what happens next.
Will have more up soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Date: Dec 13, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
That stand-off between Michael and Joseph gave me heart palpatations. Ugh, Jermaine is such a pig! Great update overall.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Michael stepping in and saving her from Joseph was cute and bold of him. I agree that it shows how protective he is of her and MJ. Thus only shows how he will react to Jermaine touching her. More is soon to come.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2015 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
Oh my goodness, Jermaine keep your hands off of her! She is innocent! well not so much. I feel like if she doesn't get this secret out then its going to go even worse if she explodes.
Author's Response:
Yes, she definitely needs to come out and be honest, before it cause some friction between the two. More should be answered within the next few chapters.
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 11, 2015 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
I think the encounter with Joeseph was to be expected but I just hope it's not as tense next time around if it comes to be. And Jermaine's perveted ass needs a damn slap check. Ain't his wife there too? I'm hoping he's mistaken. You never said if it was dark or light in the hallway so maybe she resembles his girl? Or not.
Michael better check that fool
Author's Response:
And that I'm sure Michael will do. Jermaine touching in that manner was very unexpected, but with him, you never know what his intentions are. Abd the encounter with Joseph was very expected...lets just hope things do get better. It does seem like things are off to a rough start.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Will have the next chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
Yayyyy new part! It was soooo good I spent like 45 minutes reading it because I wanted to enjoy every word! I'm so happy that you updated, but also sad that now we have to wait again :(
Author's Response:
Lol, I am so glad you are enjoying this chapter. I am currently going through and editing the newest chapter and will have it up soon.
as always, thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2015 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 2
I think it's great that she's sort of bonding with his family but I can't help but feel bad for her, once they come to know her secret there's going to be some major issues. Jermaine is a hot damn mess for that and I got a feeling Michael is not going to react calmly to him disrespecting and putting his hands on her. As always can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yes, she's walking a fine line keeping this secret from him and his family. And Jermaine putting his hands on Gabby? Yea, Michael won't be pleased in hearing this.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Will have more up soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2015 11:15 am Title: Chapter 20 Part 1
Next partttttt! I'm checking for an update every day :o And we're past saturday! Hahhaha I wanna continue readinggg don't forget about us
Author's Response:
Lol, I haven't forgotten. I am just finishing up the FALL semester and today is my last day with school. I've been working on editing the story though and will definitely have it up as soon as possible. Thank you for being so loyal to this story. Will have it up soon.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2015 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 1
I just started reading this story and it is so great! I hope you continue it soon!
Author's Response:
Yay! New reader, thank you for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Will have the next chapter up soon.
Thank you!
Date: Dec 03, 2015 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 20 Part 1
Finally, she has met the family. I'll come back later to leave a full review. I have to make a run at the moment.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
She seems so zone out in this chapter. Her emotions seems to be getting to her.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 18
This has Levi's name written all over this. I'm wondering though. It might be more to it than your leading us to believe.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
Her working for him might be a good idea at that moment, but them mixing business with their relationship could cause some problems. She'll have access to more than just a bit of information.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
I did scheme through this chapter since I remember it from last time. However, I did stop and re-read her touching his bulge? Ok, I'll say it... His dick!!! LOL!
Date: Dec 03, 2015 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 15- part 2
Michael may not need to know everything, but he definitely needs to know that the child he is caring for father may or may not pop up. He needs to be prepared for any and everything that comes his way.
Date: Dec 03, 2015 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
She should most definitely tell Michael about Levi. It's going to be much confusion when Levi come back into the picture. I can only imagine Michael's reaction at this point.