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Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 26

Dang her phone cut off. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 03:30 am Title: Chapter 26

that was very very kind of Michael to send her groceries. Gabby and him are both hurting bad. They do need to talk to each other to resolve it. Michael being incognito isn't helping anyone. Michael feels betrayed but she doesn't loooove MJ's sperm doner like she loves him. And why did Michael invite that thirsty bitch in his house?! Uggghhhh! 

Great chapter! Can't wait until the next!



Author's Response:

Michael having groceries brought to her has definitely shows that he still cares, but let's just hope that he can forgive her. And love? A very strong possibility. The newest chapter has been updated. Hope you enjoy! Thank you for always reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 26

You don't know how excited I was for her when those groceries came and things for MJ was in there too. As a mama myself, I wanted to cry tears for joy for her!! I hate that she's turned to whiskey and cigarettes, especially because the milk from her body is healthier and free! But anyways, I'm wondering if she may have disconnected the phone line from the wall herself or if the bill needs to be paw is. You know how woman can be at times. 

Michael waking up next to Jenine and realizing that she wasn't the one he wanted to wake up next to is why he called Gabby I feel. It triggered the emotions and feelings he had for her and only her. 

Thanks for the update!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 26

Mj has every right to be mad at Gabby if she had just opened up about it sooner this mess would have been avoided smh. But it's her fault for hiding Levi away from mj for so long so for now I don't pity her to turn to alcohol to much and why da heck is this messy bish back again? Hasn't she caused mj enough grief she needs to step and leave. But mj is sweet to still keep his word If the phone bill cut means he's going to have to confront her the ole fashion way let's hope it turns out well.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 24

I think Levi wants to be a pain for Gabby and Mike.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 25

I hope that they will, makeup and get back together.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Eventually she will have to tell him, unless something happens to Levi.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 22

I enjoy reading your story!

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Now this chapter was just a teaser and you know we need another one like soon! I wanted Michael to stay but then get up and leave in the middle of the night to show that he was still pissed at her, but then she should have known better! Levi is just the screw up guy and that's what he's been doing in each chapter, there to screw things up! UGH! Update soon please

Reviewer: Rock2myRoll Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 06:41 am Title: Chapter 25

this was too damn intense! I wonder how they will meet again... Please update soon I'm looking forward to it

Reviewer: wink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it. 

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 12:20 am Title: Chapter 25

Nooooooooooo omg I never expected this to happen! 

Oh shit, major cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2016 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 25

Honestly, I was expecting something like this. And since Gabby heard the story of how Michael was betrayed by that married woman, she should have understand that lying won't get her far. She bet on the wong card and she lost. I understand Michael for feeling betrayed and wanting nothing to do with her anymore.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2016 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 25

Now Imma cry 😭😭😭😭😭 come back Michael! I know Gabby's ass to forever to tell you but she needs you! Mj needs you! 

Great chapter even though I'm mad. 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2016 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 25

In all honesty, Gabby deserves it for not telling him sooner. Damn woman. You should've spit it out a long time ago. Michael was right to leave, but I really hope he doesn't stay away. Maybe for a week or so to clear his head, but not longer than that. They both need to see each other's side and understand how both of them are feeling. I do believe that Michael should give Gabby a second chance and help her keep Levi away from MJ. Michael obviously cares very deeply for both of them and he even hesitated while leaving. I bet he could keep Levi away if he got some lawyers involved. Then he could adopt MJ and they could be a happy family. But for now, they need to give each other some space. I know Michael will give Gabby a second chance. After all, he gave Jeanine one. It's Gabby's decision on what to do with that chance, though. I am impatient, though, so it's in my greedy nature to want a time skip with the next chapter and show them reconciling. Lol Please continue soon!!!

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