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Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2016 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 27

this took such a great turn! oh my gosh girl please let her say yes she needs the help!



Author's Response:

lol! Yes, it looks like things are moving along for them. And she does need the help, but she has been through so much, let's not hope her tainted feelings from the past get in the way of moving forward with Michael. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2016 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 27

All I could think about was what Gabby did to that couch when Michael sat on it LOL noooooo!! But seriously, it's good Michael saw what a jerk Levi is firsthand. No competition that's for sure! And he asked her to move in with him, that's awesome. Glad they are back (and at it ;))

Praying for you, whatever it is keep your head up =)

Author's Response:

Yes! There is no competition what so ever. Lol. Levi is a complete ass. 

 

And thabk you so much for the prayer and positive vibe! I need it. God bless you. 

 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2016 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 27

Yes!!! They got back together!!! I think Gabby should maybe put up a little resistance, but eventually agree to move in with Michael. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Yes! They're back together again! I agree, she's been through so much that right now she needs to evaluate some things first before making such a big decision.

 

and Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2016 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 27

Michael meet's Levi, him and Gabby get intimate, and then he asks her to move in with him? 

I"m glad these two are back on good terms. Levi was definitely an ass, and MIchael had every right in my opinion to go check things out and find out how Levi really was. It helped MIchael come to senses about Gabby and thst he couldnt leave her and MJ stranded.

 

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

And thank you for the review! Yes, going to visit Levi definitely helped him come to his senses. Levi is an asshole...and anyone can smell it miles away...lol. But I definitely happy they're back together again, let's just hope there will be no more popping up from anyone. 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2016 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 27

Well damn that escalated fast really fast and yes they should pursue each other they clearly have feelings for each other which built to this situation and no protection they didn't think of that??! What if this leads her pregnant again! Or that might be me oveethinking but gabby might say yes or no it's a 50/50 decision to me.



Author's Response:

At this point in her life, she needs Michael. And yea no protection, they just got caught in the heat of the moment. But now that they have some what worked things out, maybe that. An actually plan a future together now. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 26

Hey Gabby I'm finally all caught up!  Of course now I'm left hanging!  They finally kiss only to be greeted by Michaels Ex.... She finally realizes she's in love with him..and her Ex wants her back!  

Shes going to tell Mike the truth only Levi, beats her to the punch!  What a mess! Let's hope that he can get through to Gabby...why us her phone no longer in service? Did she mice back home? Is she behind on her bills? 

 

Please update soon!  BTW it's me Nancy!  Lol



Author's Response:

Hey Nancy! I thought that was you! Lol. Gabby does have a lot going on and she definitely needs Michael right now. Levi showing messed everything up for her do the only thing she can do is hope that Michael forgives her and they eventually work things out. 

The newest chapter has been up dated. Hope you enjoy. 

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 26

noooo! please continue oh my gosh



Author's Response:

Lol, the newest chapter has been updated. Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2016 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 26

It will take another few days to a week for them to get back together. He forgives Jeanine, but she's not fully back in the picture. She should be held at arms length. Please write more chapters!



Author's Response:

Yea, he did forgive Jeanine and hopefully he comes to his senses and forgives Gsbby too. 

 

The newest chapter has been updated. Hope you enjoy 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2016 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 21

I don't believe it!

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2016 10:58 am Title: Chapter 26

Hi! I've just started reading the story 3 days ago, but I don't have the time to go back and leave a review for each chapter, so I'll just start here.

Aww man...Gabby has bad coping skills. True, MJ has more than enough reason to be the way he is towards her, BUT, he KNOWS how she is and how fragile he is, so he should have dealt with this differently. The woman has issues with abandonment from her own childhood and now MJ leaving just feels like more of the same. Only this time, not only is SHE being abandoned, her SON is too-in her mind.

With that being said, Gabby also knew how vulnerable MJ was with him telling her about Janine and what she had done. She knew he had trust issues and longs for a family of his own. They both need to swallow their pride and TALK.

I don't know why Levi is even trying to come around. I mean, you are a married man with a baby by your former mistress...So, exactly what does he think he's going to do? Tell his wife about this baby and Gabby? He's already a hoe, and I can't be sure if his wife knows it or not. BUT, what got me was the fact that he took Gabby around his daughter and Gabby herself crossed the line and did it. No mam, that's an ass whooping.

Poor Bill...He knows what is going on and wants the best for MJ but he's trying to let him live his life. He knows Gabby and MJ want to be more than just "friends."

Thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Gabby has this big mess that needs to be fixed, definitely starting with Michael. And yes, I agree, brining another woman around your child is a no go. But As you can tell, Levi is a complete jerk that comes around only when he feels the need to. But we shall see how that unfolds too. I hope you continue to stay with this story and thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2016 08:28 am Title: Chapter 26

I hope Michael forgives her and comes back into Gabby's life. I know he's pissed because she lied but still. She going thru it drinking and smoking, I hope she get it together soon.



Author's Response:

Gabby definitely took a turn for the worst. She hurt Michael deeply and I hope he can forgive her what she's done. 

 

The newest chapter has been updated so I hope you enjoy it. 

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 26

Dang her phone cut off. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 03:30 am Title: Chapter 26

that was very very kind of Michael to send her groceries. Gabby and him are both hurting bad. They do need to talk to each other to resolve it. Michael being incognito isn't helping anyone. Michael feels betrayed but she doesn't loooove MJ's sperm doner like she loves him. And why did Michael invite that thirsty bitch in his house?! Uggghhhh! 

Great chapter! Can't wait until the next!



Author's Response:

Michael having groceries brought to her has definitely shows that he still cares, but let's just hope that he can forgive her. And love? A very strong possibility. The newest chapter has been updated. Hope you enjoy! Thank you for always reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 26

You don't know how excited I was for her when those groceries came and things for MJ was in there too. As a mama myself, I wanted to cry tears for joy for her!! I hate that she's turned to whiskey and cigarettes, especially because the milk from her body is healthier and free! But anyways, I'm wondering if she may have disconnected the phone line from the wall herself or if the bill needs to be paw is. You know how woman can be at times. 

Michael waking up next to Jenine and realizing that she wasn't the one he wanted to wake up next to is why he called Gabby I feel. It triggered the emotions and feelings he had for her and only her. 

Thanks for the update!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 26

Mj has every right to be mad at Gabby if she had just opened up about it sooner this mess would have been avoided smh. But it's her fault for hiding Levi away from mj for so long so for now I don't pity her to turn to alcohol to much and why da heck is this messy bish back again? Hasn't she caused mj enough grief she needs to step and leave. But mj is sweet to still keep his word If the phone bill cut means he's going to have to confront her the ole fashion way let's hope it turns out well.

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