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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 27

I think, that she should move in with him.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 26

Its a shame! She should think of the baby. She can't feed him, if she drinks alcohol. And she has to be sober for Mike to want to talk to her! She loves him and he loves her! They need to be back together and talk!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 28

I am so happy that everything work out thank be to god how back to this story girl are you try to killing me😂😂🍵

 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 07:48 am Title: Chapter 28

Aww she has every right to be emotional and Michael is just the best 😭 He's so sweet and finally they can start a new chapter in their lives. And of course MJ is the cutest little thing.

Reviewer: MJSexyAsHell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Hope you get better from surgery! and um can you not even write such a good story? I really fell in love with this like inn love. 😍😍😍😍  Like...IN LOVE... lol i keep thinking Jermaine is gonna be a reason for problems... omg there is just too much to say!!! i love this sooooo much!! thank you for being born !! God bless you lol!! im in love with this. keep going . Also, what movie is this derived off of? because i need to watch it ASAP! lol

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 01:55 am Title: Chapter 27

Levi is a jackass (as usual) and he can kiss my ass lmaooo an asshole! Now that Michael met him he can understand why Gabby just told him that man was dead. He's dead to her anyway lol and you know I'm so happy they finally did it! Like finally! Damn! And who knew it took awhile for them to get here. They love each other ❤️ And she should most definitely move in! Loved this!

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 09:20 am Title: Chapter 28

Get well soon and thanks for this chapter!

I think Gabby is gonna cave and move in with him. I don't blame her for not wanting to live with Joseph tho lol.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 07:01 am Title: Chapter 28

🙋!! I'm glad that your surgery went well and that you are seemingly recovering well also. 🌹🌷👼🙏👍

Now, I love long chapters, so I definitely enjoyed this! Lol.

I understand Gabby's hesitation too, although my reaction would have been different based on an afterglow high. Lol. But, I am glad she and MJ actually talked about everything and put their cards out on the table. The time for playing games and holding things back and in should be over.

They clearly have something that is more than sex. They also need to build each others self-esteem and confidence, which I see happening slowly but surely. Gabby is a lucky woman and that baby is even luckier to have a man that wants to be his father and be there, actually do so.

Yay!! They're moving in together... even if she keeps her apartment, which is a smart decision to me and MJ shouldn't have a problem with this. I think her keeping it will throw off any nosey neighbors and hopefully thwart Levy's interference, since he won't be able to find them.Michael's agenda is clear: he wants to keep her and the baby close and Levy out. The other, is that he is plum foolish in love with her. Lol. I wonder what Katherine is going to say about THIS, lol, although she already suspected MJ was in love with Gabby and vice versa?

Now, who the hell does this jacket with the initials "T.C." belong too!? I remember that trollop Jeanine popping up at his condo. Maybe it's hers? Or it could be the initials of his designers? You got me acting like Inspector Gadget now girl! Lol. What I DO know, is it better not belong to some floozy he is/was boinking during their little break up that we and Gabby don't know about! Don't ruin this Michael...

Thanks!🙌😆 More ☕🍵 please!

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 06:21 am Title: Chapter 28

I'm so glad they're finally together. And I wonder who's jacket that was... Please continue soon!!!

Reviewer: MJSexyAsHell Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

OK.. Sooo... 😂😂😂😂😂I'm not even done reading the first chapter,  but as I'm reading I'm turning on the shower.  I had been sitting on my sink reading this and then I noticed the shower has been running for a while and I put my phone down and was like "I gotta watch this!! Lol I didn't even mean to say that.  I swore for like 10 seconds that this was a movie.  Idk I just had to share tat with you!!  Can't wait to read the rest!!  ðŸ˜€ðŸ˜€ðŸ˜€ I love it already!!! 



Author's Response:

😂 lol! Well thank you! That's how you know its caught your interest when you think you're watching a movie instead of reading it! Lol, but did I get the idea from a movie and just added my own twist. Look Who's Talking. Sounds familiar? It's from the 80s. 

 

But im glad you're enjoying it and hope you continue to stick with it. Thanks for reading a reviewing! 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2016 08:04 am Title: Chapter 27

what an awesome chapter! cant wait for the next one..



Author's Response:

Hi! I've reposted them if you want to go back and read. Thanks for letting me know! 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2016 07:36 am Title: Chapter 25

Hello!

I started reading this story a few days ago and I am completely hooked! the only thing is I can't seem to see chapter 25 and 26 (which are crucial!) I can only see the beginnig and chapter notes. Is there a reason for that? Chapter 27 is there but I don't want to read it just before 25 and 26 lol 



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry! I'll get those chapters up as soon as possible. The board was down for a short while due to some changes which may have caused some problems. Give me a sec and I'll see if I can get those chapters up for you. And thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: Anne Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1

This is such a great story. I love the way you describe emotions of your characters. And I hope that there will be a happy end for Gabby, MJ and Michael.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this and hope this story continues to hold your interest. Will have the next chapter up soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 27

🙋! Sending prayers your way for whatever you need them for.

Ooh...Michael meeting Levi on the sly is juicy. Levi was disgusting in how he spoke of Gabby and even more how he didn't even acknowledge his son. Michael should count that as a blessing, tbh. Because, if Levi wants to screw them, he could fight for custody and visitation of the baby, seeing as he is his child. Ugh, this situation is messy!

Now, once Levi finds out Michael and Gabby are together, he will surely cause problems and even try to extort MJ and Gabby about not disclosing the paternity of MJ to the press and block MJ's bonding with that baby.

Girl...they FINALLY did IT!? Move in with him!? Girl, what the hell she waiting on? I can't lie, he would've asked me that, I would've been up and out that bed naked with his semen still leaking from me running and grabbing my stuff! Lol. Not to mention...they didn't use any protection, so this is about to get JUICY! What if she is pregnant from this encounter?👶👣🎁 Whoo child, my eyes are like 😲. Lol.

Thank you for the compliment and I look forward to an update. 😆👏👍

Xoxo💋

Author's Response:

Thank you for the prayers!! 

 

And lmao...rotfl at your comment 😂😂 slowly but surely, I'm trying to get the juiciness of this situation out. Lol, but I just loved reading your comment. The semen running down her leg as she packed 😂😂 girl, you and me both! Lol, but I am working in the nxt chapter now and hope to get it out soon..and thank you again for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2016 04:49 am Title: Chapter 27

I'm not seeing any chapters.



Author's Response:

Hi! Try now. I've gone through and checked a few chapters and everything is up. I reposted ch.27 because the text wasn't visible, but it works now. 

 

 

Thank you! 

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