[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2017 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 33
I am absolutely IN LOVE with this chapter!!! I'm so glad Michael went to go get Gabby and MJ. I hope they can finally trust each other now. Amazing chapter. Please continue soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2017 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yo, this chapter had me LMAO!!! Michael is such a sweetie pie, got to love him!! I can't wait until he let her know who he really is though! That is going to be something else!!
Date: Aug 13, 2017 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
Omg!!!! Girl!!! I love Mae and Drew!!! This chapter was everything!!!! I can't wait to see how everything unfolds for them! Don't have us waiting for long! I'm still laughing at Drew!!!
Date: Aug 13, 2017 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
Omg!!!! Girl!!! I love Mae and Drew!!! This chapter was everything!!!! I can't wait to see how everything unfolds for them! Don't have us waiting for long! I'm still laughing at Drew!!!
Date: Aug 13, 2017 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
Omg!!!! Girl!!! I love Mae and Drew!!! This chapter was everything!!!! I can't wait to see how everything unfolds for them! Don't have us waiting for long! I'm still laughing at Drew!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2017 11:46 am Title: Chapter 33
Girl...this chapter had me on EDGE! Lol. I went from frowning, to biting my finger, to snapping and giving myself two thumb's up during that last scene...Yes mam! Lol.
Okay, let me pull myself together.😂
Aww...I found this interaction between Gabby and Mae sweet and endearing. It also brought out more information about Gabby's past and her family. For instance, we didn't know her dad was still alive and being a dick-being more of a father to his new family than the original. This ish happens everyday and it pisses me off! Like damn, are your families interchangeable? Who is this new woman he's with anyway, and what's his name?
I also thought Gabby and Mae had a breakthrough in their relationship, even though small, but still, it put them on a better path and focused them on repairing their relationship.I don't think a guilt trip is the right go for Mae, because she has to understand, that Gabby has a life, just like she does. Using guilt as a tactic is unfair and more often than not, backfires. Little Drew is something else! Lol. Even in disguise, that lil boy still knows it's MJ.This one 🎤💃 and NOT this one ðŸ€. Smart little bugger! Lol.
Baby MJ has Gabby's impatience I do believe. Lol. Girl...I knew it! That man came for his woman!!! YASS...Michael, YASS!!! Disguise and all, he came! I wonder what, if anything, he said to his Mother about this? This was monumental for these two, because now MJ has put his foot down with Gabby. The man has given her his all and let her know that the decision is HER'S because he doesn't care what people may think!I am also glad that he's already seemingly set something in motion in regards to Baby MJ and his custodial parent. I'm hoping he's had Bill scout that heifer and her husband and his lawyers on it. I'm also ecstatic that Gabby is opening herself up to trusting Michael-not just saying it, but actually DOING it!
PSS...I must confess sis,that love scene had me clutching my pearls! Lol. I read it about 10 times... You know, for clarity sake and all that.👀ðŸ‘🙌 It was beautiful.👠Mae and Drew made me holler when she yelled I'd they were done and he piped up too. It will be interesting at the breakfast table the next morning, that's for sure! Lol. Now, the big question is, when will Gabby do the big reveal about just WHO the real MJ is?
Thanks sis and keep it coming!ðŸ‘ðŸ‘🙌🙋😚
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 33
I just feel Gabby got away for a reason from her family why gulit trip her back there when she has happiness in L.A with micheal nonethless the drama of the two headaches are still waiting to start their own mess. but i'm glad micheal came back to her but Gabby seriously needs to put her big girl pants on and push forward cause running won't always solve the damn issue. beat the crazy one up and micheal can sort that out. I like her sister and her family but she doesn't need to move back but just visit. little boy is adorable the story of the daddy doing all that had me laughing along with them.
but let's see what happens in the next chapter I smell drama in the horizon lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2017 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Gabrielle, girl, I'ma need you to put 2 & 2 together and realize that thee Michael Jackson has been around you the whole time! Lmaooo But honestly, I feel for her! It's unfortunate that she doesn't have anyone around to help, not even family. To keep it 100, I want her to blow up Levi's spot or at least put him on child support or something!! She can't keep going on like this! And for Michael to want to play Dad...so sweet...but I can sense the drama!!!
Monica should've got cussed out for banging on her door for some damn lipstick...girl!!!
But I'm loving it!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2017 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
SO I'm back in here like I never left! And girl...wow! Michael has such a big heart for even staying with Gabrielle while she gave birth!! Laawd, what a circumstance. And for her to give the baby boy his first name as well? I wonder how the baby's father going to think about that! Plus, the baby and Michael share the same birthday!! That's too sweet! Can't wait until I catch up to see how this connection plays out!
Date: Aug 07, 2017 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 32
Gabby shouldn't of ran! She needs to call Michael! Her sister and brother in law are a trip. Just wait until they find out he is the one and only Michael Jackson. I'm sure that he will find her!
Author's Response:
Yea, she shouldn't have ran! She is on a emotional roller coaster and making bad decisions off her emotions. Let's hope she can get herself together and that Michael will be forgiving of her leaving.
Ths
Thank you for always reading a reviewing!!! It means a lot! â¤ï¸
Date: Aug 07, 2017 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 32
Gabby shouldn't of ran! She needs to call Michael! Her sister and brother in law are a trip. Just wait until they find out he is the one and only Michael Jackson. I'm sure that he will find her!
Date: Aug 06, 2017 05:25 am Title: Chapter 32
Hey!! I've never left a comment on your story before but let me tell you this is my favorite story on this entire website! You know, usually by chapter 20 (or sometimes sooner) a story gets stale and boring but not this one! I just finished reading your last couple of chapters and they were great! Omg Jeanine is Levi's wife?! Gabby LEFT?!?! I hope Michael goes after her! I'm so into this story please have mercy on me and update soon! I am living for this story!
Author's Response:
Hi!! â¤ï¸ Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you enjoy this story...it really means a lot to me reading your comment! And yes, the drama is just beginning! Stay tuned and keep an eye out for the next chapter some this week! And thanks again for your support!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2017 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 32
🙋 girl! Aww shucks...thank you! I like to let authors know their time and work is appreciated, especially since you guys do this for FREE!☺
Ok, now to the chapter at hand. Lol.
Gabby just made the situation worse by running. She can't run away from every problem she has in life; it's not healthy nor is it adult behavior.I enjoyed the reunion between Gabby and Mae, although I can see why Gabby doesn't tell her much, because she is judgmental at times when it's not wanted nor appropriate.
Her little boy Drew sounds too cute, and I love her husband Andrew's sense of humor! Lol. He made me holler with some of his quips of wit and sarcasm. I too believe that MJ is missing Michael and reacting to his mother's feelings and agitation. That baby knows something is different and that he no longer is around Michael, hence his behavior. I also think that Mae called it right when she said Gabby loved Michael. I could see that, despite her protest. I also agree with Gabby not disclosing who Michael really is, especially considering that she up and left the man and his privacy.
Oh, and fuck Levi and Jeanine again!Right now, the ball is squarely in a Michaels court-will he come after her or will he run back to Jeanine out of some misplaced guilt and feeling sad and depressed about Gabby and Baby MJ... Only time will tell.
I also wonder if he will finally tell his mother and stop keeping all of these damn secrets!?
Thank you and I await your next update! ðŸ‘ðŸ‘🙌ðŸ†ðŸŒŸ
Author's Response:
Girl, ain't she a mess! 😂 Always running and crying all the time...I think I'll have to give her some more backbone once her postpartum goes away. LOL.
And yes, Mae, Drew and Andrew are a mess! I couldn't stop laughing as I wrote their parts. Mae is very jusgemental and also over protective of Gabby, but sometimes she doesn't know when to back off. Gabby needs her though she still isn't in her right mind either.
Thank you so much for your reviews â¤ï¸!!! I can't say it enough...it always give me ideas for the next chapter!!! Update coming soon.
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2017 11:52 am Title: Chapter 32
Gabby needs to call Michael and tell him why she left. Then she needs to take her ass back to California to be with him. She knows she misses him and so does MJ. Jeez. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Gabby is not in a good space, but she should definitely be calling Michael. Hopefully he can forgive her and understand he reason for leaving...but I agree. She needs to get her ass back to him.
Thank you for support in reading a reviewing!!! It means a lot to me! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2017 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY!!! I'm happy my review gave you a little push, lol. :)
Whew...where do I start? Mae and Andrew are a trip! I can't even get mad at Mae for her reaction towards the messiness her sister gotten herself into in LA. I think Mae's words stung because deep down, Gabby is still dealing with the pain of it all. Gabby is a member of Team Bad Decisions.
1.)Started an affair with a married Levi, in result causing heartbreak to herself as she is reduced to nothing but a "mistress"
2.)Has unprotected sex with married man and becomes pregnant
3.)Deals with her pregnancy with no support and eventually becomes a single mother.
I think she really needs to reflect on her life choices. She hasn't moved on from her past and is still holding a form of shame and guilt. Her past will continue to haunt her until she takes ownership and realizes that despite these poor decisions, she was given a chance of happiness. Gabby keeps running away from it though.
She's now a mother of a beautiful little boy; That little boy also brought a great person in her life. Someone who has been risking everything he worked so hard for, just to be by their side. Her son now has a father. She made a selfish decision without fully thinking how it would affect her son and Michael. She lets her emotions get the best of her. Honestly...when you think about Jeanine's threat, Michael could have easily handled it with the best lawyers on speed dial, lol.
I think Gabby feels tarnished and that she's not deserving of Michael's love and support. I think it's bigger than Jeanine's threat. If anything, Jeanine's threat was Gabby's confirmation that she'll cause more harm than good for Mike. However, she should leave that for Michael to decide. Hopefully, Michael finds her!
Great add!